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Bata pa lamang si Anya ay ang pangarap nya lamang ay mamuhay ng simple at payapa. Pero mukhang 'di naaayon sa kanya ang kapalaran ng maging ulila at magpalaboy laboy sa lansangan. Hanggang sa ma kindnap siya ng pinaka malaking crime syndicate sa bansa. Kinailangan nyang gawin at sundin lahat ng iaatang na mission sa kanya upang mabuhay. Sa kabila ng lahat ay pangarap nya pa ring mamuhay ng simpleng tao lamang. Isang mission ang nilaan para sa kanya kapalit ng kalayaan nya. Ang magpanggap bilang ibang tao at maging fiance ni Christian Oliver Carter. Paano kaya matatagalan ni Anya ang ugali nito? Magagawa nya kaya ang mission na 'to kong ang lihim ng nakaraan ay mabubunyag? Paano kong hindi na naman sumang-ayon sa kanya ang kapalaran at gusto na namang guluhin ang buhay nya? Makakalaya pa kaya siya sa mundong ginagalawan nya?

“เขต ปล่อยเนียร์นะ เจ็บ!!” “นี่ไง อาณาเขตที่เธออยากได้นักหนา!! นี่ไงซาเนียร์!!!” “เนียร์ ไม่ได้…ฮึก! ปล่อยนะ!!” “วันนั้นเธอเสนอตัวมาให้ฉันเอาถึงห้อง!! ยังบอกว่าไม่ใช่หรือไง!!!” เพียะ!!!!! ฝามือเล็กๆของซาเนียร์ฟาดลงบนหน้าหล่อๆของอาณาเขตเต็มแรง “เขตเคยฟังเนียร์มั้ยว่าเกิดอะไรขึ้น ฮึก!” “คงเกิด!! เกิดอยากได้ฉันจนตัวสั่นไง!” “ว่าไงนะ” “เธอจำไว้ ว่าเธอกล้าทำฉันเจ็บ เธอต้องเจ็บกว่าฉันเป็นร้อยเท่า!” “……” ชายหนุ่มเดินออกจากคอนโดของหญิงสาวไปด้วยความโมโห เขาเจ็บเจียนตายสาเหตุมาจากผู้หญิงคนนี้ เพราะเธอ ความรักของเขาต้องพังลงจนไม่เหลือชิ้นดี

Judy’s fated mate rejected her to marry the Lycan Chairman - Gavin’s daughter. As if that wasn’t bad enough, he ruined her family and tried to make her his secret mistress! Judy’s response? “I’d rather sleep with your father-in-law than ever be with you!” Gavin is known for his power, wealth, and being the ultimate playboy who never sleeps with the same woman twice. But Judy’s about to break all his rules… again and again.

I was treated like a Omega servant by my "family", and forced to serve drinks at my step-sister’s 18th birthday. She told everyone I was pregnant with a "mutt" even if I begged her not to tell anyone. Just when all the guests gasped at the shocking news, the most famous Alpha prince took off his blazer and covered me with it.“Enough. The baby is mine.”

Papangarapin mo ba ang isang bituin sa langit, kung ikaw ay isang hamak na maglulupa lamang? Si Rada Buenavista - ang bratinelang heredera. Susubukan ang pasensya ng simple at mailap na si - Rafael Samaniego. Saan hahantong ang isang pagtatagpo na babalutin ng samut-saring lihim? Handa ba sila sa isang katotohanan na magsasadlak sa kanila sa lusak ng poot at galit? At magdadala sa kanila sa labis na kabiguan at kapighatian. Saan sila dadalhin ng kanilang katatagan? Kung ang pinaghuhugutan nila ng lakas ang sa kanila'y siya ring dudurog at wawasak.

Rubie Jane Estrada is a simple but very beautiful woman. Before his father died he revealed the truth about Rubie's mother. Rubie decided to go to the city and find her mother, while Rubie was traveling she met Kester Tacuel who helped her. At Rubie's workplace she met Daryl Hermosa who became friends and eventually fell in love with each other. Rubie met his grandfather and his mother, his grandfather welcomed him and let him live in his mansion. Rubie's grandfather discovered the relationship between Rubie and Daryl, so he forced Rubie to divorce Daryl and marry the granddaughter of his friend Kester Tacuel. Rubie's Grandfather succeeds in getting Kester and Rubie married. Who will Rubie stay with? What if he learns a big secret that will change his life. Will Rubie love her husband?

Nagising si Kayla sa isang pamilyar na silid na matagal na niyang tinakasan. Isang huling misyon ang natanggap niya na hindi kayang tanggihan. Isang daang dolyar, ang kan'yang kalayaan, at kaligtasan ng anak kapalit ng ulo ni Leandro Gavincci. Paano kung malaman niya na ang Gavincci na tinutukoy ay ang ama ng kan'yang anak? Makakaya ba niyang isantabi ang galit at poot para sa kapakanan ng anak? Ngunit paano kung sa gitna ng misyon ay umusbong ang pag-ibig na matagal ng inilista sa tubig? Magagawa pa bang talikuran ni Kayla ang misyon sa kabila ng mga sekretong mabubunyag?

Tristan Lee has only three things he values in his life: his friends, money, and his beloved mother. He comes from a family of entrepreneurs who only focus on benefits and profits. Like every other heir, his life is already planned from a young age. He will inherit his family business, and he needs the right education for that. As the good, obedient son that he is, Tristan Lee takes up Bachelor of Science in Business Administration majoring in Financial Management at one of the country's top schools, De La Salle University. He relentlessly pursued excellence. Tristan believes that his life is on the right track with his high grades as a Dean's Lister and good reputation at the university, until he meets Kai Alvaro, the person who makes him question everything that he believes in and the one who turns his carefully crafted world upside down. Tristan finds himself torn between his family's expectations and a love he never knew he needed. _9HEARTS

Megumi Vergara grew up with pressure and high expectations from her family. As the oldest daughter of one of the wealthiest and influential families in the country, she must serve as a role model for her two younger siblings. But when Megumi became pregnant, she brought dishonor to her family's name and drove them to forsake her. Megumi raised her kid alone for four years while working as a server at a pub. But their peaceful life turned into chaos when Riaz Trevor entered their life, the last person to whom she will introduce her child, her daughter's father. When she tried to introduce her child to Riaz, someone's stole her chance. Another woman came and stole her identity that ended up to a big misunderstanding and made her runaway from him.

‼️ Warning : R-18 SSPG ‼️ Velora Venice, mabuting empleyada sa Solara Essence. Sa kabila niyon ay mayroon silang lihim na kasunduan ng kanyang boss na si Dewei Hughes. Isang araw sa piling ni Mr. Dewei Hughes, singkwenta mil ang ibinabayad nito sa kanya. Pangdagdag sa pang-dialysis ng kanyang kapatid at para sa gastusin nila sa bahay. Inalok siya ng boss niya ng isang gabing pagt@t*lik at babayaran siya ng malaking halaga. Pumayag din siyang maging isang exclusive escort ng isang mayamang estrangherong lalaki. Ginawa ni Velora ang magsakripisyo para mabuo ang malaking halagang kailangan sa kidney transplant ng kanyang nakakababatang kapatid na si Vanna.