PART EIGHTEEN: THE KIDNAPPER CHASE PART 1
"Theo!" shouted the house owner.
Thinking quickly, Raine took her phone and snapped at the tricycle's code number before it got away from their sights.
"Are you alright, Ma'am? Do... Do you know who those people was?" asked Raine.
"One of them is my son's babysitter! I don't know who the others are! I don't even know how they come in without my security guards knowing," the lady answered.
"I'll call the police," Raine spoke. But when she was about to type the sos number, she was interrupted by the touch of the lady on her hand.
"Don't worry. I already called them. They're probably on their way here," she spoke. "Now, let's head inside, shall we?"
That touch immediately gave Raine the shivers gently rising towards her spine.
However, with her longing to help and for being curious of what just happened, she had chosen to just go inside the house of the lady.
The house was huge and
It's been ten years since the tragedy that almost broke Raine's heart happened.Her father, Lawrence Garcia, was a great detective. He had resolved many difficult cases during his service.Her mother, Naida, was an investigator who retired after her elder sister was born. She and Lawrence met because of a case that they both resolved together.The Garcias were perfect — Raine herself, her parents, and her older sister Nia. She also thought to herself that she had the best family ever.However, all happiness still has an end. Little did they know that the case that brought their family together will also destroy it.Everytime her birthday comes, the memories of the past never miss to haunt her.It was Raine's seventh birthday.
CHAPTER ONE: SUICIDE OR MURDERVanessa enrolled her in a school in America and it was there that she began to discover her hidden interest in solving crimes and different types of cases.It was the first day of school, just nine years after the accident, an anticipated thing happened.Raine was at the library when she heard someone screamed. It came from the lowest part of the building.She stood up from her chair. Leaving the book at the table.She struggled to huddle towards the other students hoping to find out what happened.Her eyes widened when she saw a senior highschool student lying around the floor of the teacher's comfort room. Dead.Ms. Cassandra Collins
CHAPTER TWO: THE FIRST CASE SOLVED"Hmm... Are you sure Johnny just slipped on the wet floor, Inspector? I mean, according to my observations, there must be some sort of a more complicated murder incident," Vanessa asked Inspector Smith."I know, Garcia. I just told them about that so that I can find another lead to this murder case," the Inspector replied. "Actually, I don't want to make the students panic. Especially now that there are many murder things happening here in our city!""Well, it's really a threat to students here," Vanessa sighed."Inspector!" one of the police officers called. "The analysts says that there were strange markings on the boy's neck," he added.Thinking about the same thing, Inspector Smith snapped his finger and said, "I knew it! The murderer might be one of the students or one of the school staffs!"
CHAPTER THREE: THE HIGHSCHOOL DETECTIVEAnd finally, after ten years of staying in America, Raine decided to go back to the Philippines.For the fact that she earned some coins from solving cases, she decided to continue her second semester in the Philippines.She was in the twelfth grade and was taking the course of Computer Engineering.At first, Vanessa didn't agreed for the reason that the sindicates might still be looking for her but at the end, she finally said her 'yes'."Hey, guys! Guess where I am!" she said to her best friends from the Philippines in their video chat."Hmm... Let me guess! Many people,"Shaira, her best friend since she's studying in the Philippines, spoke. Having no clue where Raine's really is, "... and then?"In their group, Shaira's the joker kind of girl who always tells funny jokes. At the same time, she's also into fashion.I can't believe sh
CHAPTER FOUR: CONFIDENTIAL CLUES"Can you believe it? Detective Lorraine Leanne Garcia, that's so cool!" Lani beamed as they walk towards their school."Lani, shh!" Raine shuddered. "What if someone hears you?""But how can you be a real detective if no one here knows you?" Lani asked.Raine's eyes widened. All she wanted to do is to bring justice to her parents death but as time passes she feels the longing to follow the footsteps of her father.However, Lani does have a point!"Hey, aren't you the famous highschool detective in America? At the time I first saw you on the television, I became your fan!" said a junior highschool student. Approaching Raine excitedly."Of course she is! She's my best friend which is very talented, brave, and also a genius!" Lani boasted.For Raine, there is only one thing to do. If the people knew that she's a mystery solver, she have
CHAPTER FIVE: THE DARK MYSTERIES WITHIN HOTEL DEL ESTRELLA (HAUNTED)Nightmares crept inside Raine's head again. The memories of the past. A tragedy.Sweat lined up to her eyebrows. Her heart beating faster by the minute."Nia! Mom, Dad!" Raine shouted. Waking herself up from her nightmares.Tears sprung on her eyes as she woke up. Hugging her pillow tight."Raine," she heard someone spoke."Sweetheart," the voice added, "are you alright?"She was startled when she saw her Aunt standing beside her. Waving her hand. "Au- Auntie?""Yep!""But you didn't say anything to me about your leaving! H- How about your work in States?""Well, they say that I'm not complete without my partner," Vanessa answered."They really said that? Did they... Did they fire you?""No. Actually I was sent here by you-know-who. We received a report that the
CHAPTER SIX: THE DARK MYSTERIES WITHIN HOTEL DEL ESTRELLA ( MICHIEVOUS YOUNG DETECTIVES )"Hotel del Estrella?" Raine whispered to herself. "I have a feeling I heard about that place before.""Why yes! It's a well-known hotel," replied Vanessa, "and we're staying there for three days."And finally, after the long wait, the day has finally come when the trip was scheduled. Raine packed up the things she'll need in order to be prepared of what might happen on their way. Traveling through car still gives her the creeps.While they were on their way, Raine opened her phone. Scrolling her social media account. Her eyes widened when she saw the picture of the hotel they will be staying. The same picture she saw on the billboard.At the moment she saw that image, the call of mystery pinched her.Every mile they travel nearer to the hotel, the more thrilled and excited she becomes that she didn't worry about being
CHAPTER SEVEN: THE DARK MYSTERIES WITHIN HOTEL DEL ESTRELLA (LET'S DO THIS!)Raine continued to walk towards the corridor, hoping to see some clues to solve the murder mystery.On her way she encountered the dead man's body being carried by the nurses towards their ambulance. His whole body was covered with blanket which became bloody because of his blood."You here that everyone. The hotel's in lockdown," said the owner's elder brother towards the crowd gathered around the corridor, "Now head back to your rooms and tell your love ones you'll be staying here for a while."Raine paused, waiting for her friends to come back. As the two passed by, their arguing began echoing throughout the corridor."I told you to hurry!" Lani exclaimed."You're the one who's behind me," replied Zane.Being interrupted by their arguing, the two didn't noticed Raine who was standing in front of them. Seeing her, they both let out a scream immediately cut
PART EIGHTEEN: THE KIDNAPPER CHASE PART 1"Theo!" shouted the house owner.Thinking quickly, Raine took her phone and snapped at the tricycle's code number before it got away from their sights."Are you alright, Ma'am? Do... Do you know who those people was?" asked Raine."One of them is my son's babysitter! I don't know who the others are! I don't even know how they come in without my security guards knowing," the lady answered."I'll call the police," Raine spoke. But when she was about to type the sos number, she was interrupted by the touch of the lady on her hand."Don't worry. I already called them. They're probably on their way here," she spoke. "Now, let's head inside, shall we?"That touch immediately gave Raine the shivers gently rising towards her spine.However, with her longing to help and for being curious of what just happened, she had chosen to just go inside the house of the lady.The house was huge and
CHAPTER SEVENTEEN: MISS MICHIEVOUSThe two Garcias went back to their home safely. But because of the incident that happened earlier, an unusual sense of feeling rose unto the air.Raine, having the feeling of guilt about the case she handled, sat down the sofa and took her book from the table. She opened it and headed back to where she had left.However, the overprotected Vanessa, headed back to her room without even letting out any word out of her mouth.With her feeling upset to her beloved niece, she took a quick glance on her from the staircase then continued to walk upstairs.After a while, Vanessa came back downstairs in a hurry, putting her police badge on.Having her curiousity, Raine put down her book and her gaze dropped down to Vanessa."Where are you going?" she asked."No time to explain," Vanessa answered. "I'll see you later!" She continued to walk towards her car and immediately dashed towards the road.
CHAPTER SIXTEEN: MEMORIES OF THE PASTThey all gave a private space for Jason and his father whereas Eduardo was arrested. "How did you found out that I was the real culprit? I was certain you will accuse my brother because I chose to study his every move and his style for clothing," said Eduardo as they were walking across the hall."It was quite tricky at first actually," Raine replied then began to state what she discovered:When we first entered the hotel, it was Sir Fred who greeted us. I was certain of that especially when Jason said that he uses his mom's perfume. After that he went to the other staircase opposite from ours when he was called by his son. But actually, that was your first plan. Jason told us that you told him to pretend to be sick in order to get his attention — so you can take over his identity and no one will suspect that it was you, especially when they all didn't know that you were here.According to Inspector Alvarez, Fre
CHAPTER FIFTEEN: THE DARK MYSTERIES WITHIN HOTEL DEL ESTRELLA ( MISSION ACCOMPLISHED )Meanwhile, down the hall came Raine and her friends with the guide of Inspector Sean in interrogating Jason del Estrella.The police was cognizant that since Jason is a teenager like Raine and the others, they can likely relate to him immediately.Sean left the teens around an empty hall at the topmost floor. He made sure that no one else will hear their conversation that can prevent Jason from telling the truth.The room was located beside the office of the twins, Eduardo and Fredricko. There are only few people who goes there for the reason that rumors of the ghosts appearing there began to spread.Since the time they came to the hall, silence covered them. A strange feeling started to spread towards the air. They sat down the bench and waited.With the feeling of curiousity, Raine volunteered to start the first move. Remembering the tricks she learned f
CHAPTER FOURTEEN: THE DARK MYSTERIES WITHIN HOTEL DEL ESTRELLA ( SECOND MYSTERY )Vanessa continued to state her findings:In my investigations, I found out that inspite of the hotel's wonderful and world class service, there lies secrets and conflicts between family and even the staffs. Mr. Fredricko del Estrella agreed for an interview and I found out many things.Throughout this year, the hotel encounters a big problem — month by month their earned money goes lower and lower and from his suspicions, he said that there might be someone who's stealing secretly from them.The staffs, due to the money problem, can't help to argue with them. Some of them plans to retire and find a new job with higher income.Several issues had been reported from the hotel over the past few years and that, too, became one of the reasons for the hotel's incomes. Cases of suicides, murders, and robberies lead the hotel lose it's five-star rating.From my in
CHAPTER THIRTEEN: THE DARK MYSTERIES WITHIN HOTEL DEL ESTRELLA ( MISSION ACCOMPLISHED )The two discussed everything that they had found out and it turned out that they solved the whole mystery together.However, the two siblings immediately walked away. Seeming to search something or someone else."So what can you say about the several cases of death in this hotel?" asked the reporter to the hotel's owner. "Is that because of the ghosts?""Actually, there's a scientific explanation for that and science says that ghosts don't exist!" Raine interfered.The reporters' attention were caught followed by their cameras and microphones turned to her."I researched a lot about this place recently and I found out that the number of deaths and accidents that happened here is just because this hotel is one of the famous hotels in the country. Many people from different places of the world stays here," Raine added."She's right," sa
CHAPTER TWELVE: THE DARK MYSTERIES WITHIN HOTEL DEL ESTRELLA ( THE GHOST OF THE PAST ) "A ghost? What are you talking about?" Raine asked. Raising her eyebrow. "She's telling the truth Raine. We both saw that transparent skin and those red eyes coming straight towards us!" Zane stated. Out of curiousity, Raine opened the room again but even before she can type the first number on the security lock, Zane and Lani blocked her. Zane stood in front of her whereas Lani grabbed her hand. "What are you guys doing? You're ruining my investigation!" asked Raine. "We're just saving you from that thingy," Zane answered. Still trying to block her way towards the buttons. "There's no such thing as ghost! Now if you please just excuse me!" Raine shouted, "If you don't want to help then... then go away! I don't need a help from you amateurs anyway!" Hearing those words, the two was stunned. Seemed to be stabbed by their own best friend.
CHAPTER ELEVEN: THE DARK MYSTERIES WITHIN HOTEL DEL ESTRELLA ( DOUBLE MYSTERY )"I have to report this to my Dad. I will go now, too," said the young lad. Walking behind Vanessa.The four watched the two as they walk downstairs."So," Lani spoke sheepishly, "what exactly do we have to now that we have... I mean YOU have permission to investigate the crime scene?""Can we still help you?" Zane asked.Raine looked at them as bite her lips. "Uh... Perhaps you can me by..." She paused. Seeming to thought that she messed things up.The two siblings turned to her curiously. Longing to hear what they cando for her."Perhaps it might be better if we talk inside," Zane spoke. Grabbing his friends towards Raine's room."Come on, Raine," Lani added, "tell us the plan so we can help you!""Actually, I already got access to the hotel's security," Raine responded, "The problem is that I can't control it. I can't turn it off.""
Dear readers, It's me lorainejd, the author of this book. I would like to thank you all for reading this book. I hope you'll enjoy reading. I also want to let you know that all the characters in this story is just a work of fiction. Any names or events related to real people is just coincidence. Overall, enjoy reading and explore the story of the young detective named Raine Garcia. She was just an ordinary person until her parents was murdered intentionally in front of her eyes. Being the only one to survive, she will solve the mystery of her parents' death without realizing that she'll suffer pain and despair but also she'll do great things because of that.