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2: Hey inspector general!
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2021-08-30 04:24:44"Turn around! Can't you see you knocked someone down?! Can't you say sorry or are you blind?!"
Slowly the man turned to look at the fussing girl. He slowly pulled down his sunglasses revealing his beautiful eyes. He said no words but his gaze was fierce
"What,? are you gonna beat me? Come on! Shameless! I'll give you off to the cops and get you beaten up nicely. So come here and apologize" Sunni demanded.
The man stared at the girl. He was certainly stunned by the nerves of the girl which annoyed him "Apologize? " He repeated. "Are you sane?"
"Eh? How dare you? How rude! Shouldn't you apologize? So mannerless!" Sunni continued fussing as Hana pulled her by the hand.
"Enough...people are watching...."
For the sake of her friend, she endured "I'll let you off this time, come on Hana, let's go" she pulled Hana by the hand and walked off.
The man watched them leave as he sighed. He too had held his temper from legally dealing with this girl.
"Hey! Inspector general! "
He turned to the van as he saw someone waving at him.
"Let's go! Case solved!"
He put on his glasses again as he walked toward the van mumbling to himself "crazy"
Sunni had slept over at Hana's place that night. She wasn't ready to go home and deal with her uncle and aunt yelling at her for losing her job.
It was 10:00 am the next morning and she was still fast asleep in bed.
Hana had gotten up early and dressed up. As she sat before her makeup table painting herself up, Sunni slowly opened her eyes.
"Where are you going?"
"To work of course....don't you know I work?" Hana smiled.
"Bad girl, because of you I got sacked and here you are proudly going to work" Sunni groaned as Hana smiled again.
"I'm not the one who told you to investigate your customers " Hana teased.
"Whatever ...if you hadn't called....they might have believed me. You had to call me out and still it didn't get to meet MI agency....all we met was a rude guy.."
"Cheer up girl...Look on the bright side....."
"There is no bright side," Sunni said getting up "I won't get fooled by your inspirational talks...go, get out to work....I'll be busy looking for work...." She said leaving for the bathroom.
When Hana had gone to work at the mall where she worked, Sunni left the apartment owned by Hana and left to look for work.
For a moment she thought about her pathetic life. Hana had become an independent girl with a house and steady job but her? She was still living with her!
She was out looking for any sort of a good job to keep herself occupied and perhaps avoid her uncle's wrath.
As Sunni strolled the streets looking for a job, she suddenly caught sight of the van. The MI Agency van!
She stiffened with her eyes wide opened and her lips slowly curled into a smile. She couldn't believe her eyes. It was real!
Excited, she slowly approached it. No one was there giving her the thought that they might have packed it for business. She admired the van from all angles while she felt it "Feels nice....so real....."
Unluckily for Sunni, someone was inside!
He looked out through the passenger's seat in front at the weird girl. Pulling off his glasses he recognized her.
"It's her? What's she up to?" He wondered as he watched her.As he watched her try pulling open a locked door, he intentionally unlocked the doors as Sunni pulled open a door.
She gasped with her eyes open in shock" I....it's open?" She was excited as she instantly had a bizarre idea.
Without much hesitation, she entered the van to feel the authenticity from within.
Sitting on the back seat, she smiled. "oh yeah, that's the stuff"
Just then, she looked out the window as she sighed. The team of five detective officers was coming back to the van. She stiffened "Oh no! I'm done for!"
Sunni panicked not knowing what to do. Without thinking twice, she had no other alternative but too.....
She jumped back into the car's boot and covered herself with the black blanket there.
The guy in front who had leaned backward carefully on his seat making him difficult to see had seen all that Sunni did. He kept mute as his teammates came back in as they drove off...
After a while, they arrived back at their agency as the van pulled over before the company-like building.
They all got out except the driver who had planned on taking the ciiinto there in the parking lot.The frontman casually headed to the boot side where he majestically pulled open the boot.
Sunni's heart flew off!
He stared at the blanket for a while as a colleague asked.
"Hey, inspector general, what are you up to? " He asked walking to the boot side.
The guy said nothing but continued staring at the blanket until he finally said. "Are you gonna come out...or should I throw you off a cliff?"
Sunni knew she was caught, she had no other alternative but to give in. Slowly, she came out of the blanket and out of the boot as the other detectives stared at her in shock.
"Oh my, who's she?"
Sunni felt humiliated. And when she was out, she looked right at the guy who had pulled down his glasses "It's you ?"
"What do you think? " the guy said
"How can a rude jerk like you be a detective...it's right"
She was in trouble...but scolding someone at least would make her feel better.The guy watched the girl bluff and speak on how disgusting he was to push down a woman and not apologize. It was starting to irritate him.
When he couldn't bear it, he placed a hand over her mouth, shutting her up as she stiffened. For a moment there, her heart skipped a beat.
"Are you gonna shut up?" He asked, his wicked gaze daring.
Sunni gulped...
The others watched them as one finally spoke up.
"Inspector general...who's she?"Sunni was rather surprised on hearing the tag given to him. inspector general? That was one given to the head of the agency!
She quickly brushed his hands off "What did you call him?"
"Inspector....general.." He repeated.
she burst out into laughers" Don't be silly....how can he mean ephemeral know the Inspector general of this place, Mr. Wang.."
To shut her up, the guy got out his ID and showed it to her " Dave Lin ....New inspector general of MI Detective agency...Nice to meet you " He gave her a devilish smirk as she blinked.
Slowly, Sunni curled her lips into a smile
"Well....we're all grownups...let bygones be bygones...." She brought out her hand for a handshake" I'm Yang Sunni...And....crazy enough...I'd kill to work in your Agency...."
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