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10: Night with this stranger
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2021-11-13 21:32:59"What??"
He was a bit too bold to repeat it! " I have no home. So I want to stay here with you. Can I...?"
"No!" Sunni snapped even before he ended the words harmoniously. "You certainly can't stay here at my place!"
Sunni didn't know what she was feeling right now. Shock? panic? Whatever! The feeling was awkward.
What was this guy saying? was he too dumb that he didn't know the implication of what he was spouting out?.
"Why?" He asked.
"You....are you trying to tease me or what? How can you say that?'
"Well, I just wanted to stay here...."
"No you can't" She chipped in again "Don't you know it's inappropriate for a boy and a girl to stay together in one room? No, I refuse"
"But why is it inappropriate?" He asked
She was gonna go insane from his ignorant questions. Who on earth asks such questions??
"it's just inappropriate.. only couples and married ones can do that" Sunni trie
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