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69 : From a ghost's perspective
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2022-01-16 06:25:42At that Moment when you open your eyes ...and slowly...you think you can't see clearly...the feeling that you're incomplete...the feeling that somehow... you're not yourself anymore.... it was the feeling that one couldn't explain but Sunni tried...and with smiles
**sunni's point of view**
The hospital seemed busy today....Just exaggerated. Let's say that those who cared about me seemed to be busy today..
From a distance I stood, I watched the hospital bed being rolled quickly through the hospital corridor and to a room of it's own...Don't mind my poor descriptive but this was all I could come up with.
I could hear beeping sounds.... Cries from literally every corner of the hospital...and of course...I think I heard Cries.. It was so vivid from where I stood at the corridor where the previous rol
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