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6: The incident tonight
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2021-11-06 07:34:48The night sky was pretty
The full moon was also out as the stars filled the sky into a starry night.
Yang Sunni was sad.
She slowly walked by the roadside on that cold night.
The street was a lonely one, but it was a shorter road for her to get to a bus station leading home.
But she didn't want to go home just now. She was sad and it was shown on her face.
She walked by the street looking up into the night sky as she thought about what had happened hours back
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"what are you doing here?"
Detective Lin had asked about seeing her.
"Well...I....actually....I...." She scratched her head nervously.
Dave Lin had checked his wristwatch from time to time. He was running late to where he wanted to go and Sunni was delaying him.
"If you have nothing important to say...then please may I leave?"
"Well, actually I wanna join your agency. The thing is that....ever since I was young...I've always had the zeal to be a detective...I've always taken delight in investigating things and I even lost most of my jobs while trying to investigate...so I believe that this is the right path for me.....It is my dream so I'd like to be given a chance to achieve it."
Dave Lin looked at the petit girl who had poured out her desires to him And it seemed that he had already made a choice.
"Forget about our first meeting - well that was just a tragic one... I promise if you give me this opportunity ...I'll try my best. I'll work hard to meet the standards...I'll do my very best!"
"So you mean to say that since you were young you've been practically detecting stuff?" He questioned.
"Yeah...I have...." She replied with a smile. Possibly there was a ray of hope.
He sighed "Miss...."
"Yang.....the name's yang Sunni" she quickly replied.
"Being a detective is not a child's play. And it's not mere on dreams and desires...there's more to it than that "
"I know...I know that....that's why I promise to do my best" she assured.
"I don't need to know you for long before I make my decision...Based on the little I know about you...I have to conclude that you're not suitable for this in any aspect."
She stiffened. Her eyes fixed on him. Her ray of hope was slowly fading away.
"But...I can.."
" 'You can...' That's what you believe but I don't think this path is for you..you're not just right...You're simply careless...Incompetent, undedicated and can never make this aspect....so stop wasting our times" He said firmly.
"But if you give me a chance...I can prove myself, you don't have to make a first impression summary " she said.
"I'm a professional...you don't need to tell me how to do my job"
Without any further remark, he turned and simply walked out on her.
She stood there, rather speechless.
His words kept ringing into her head.
Incompetent...
careless...
undedicated...
All, she believed wasn't a summary of her.
His words hurt her and pierced into her. It made her weak sad.
Right now, she didn't know how to feel...
The invisible young man stood at a distance watching them.
He watched the girl who stood there sadly. He watched her mood. She was sad but he didn't quite understand that feeling.
The complicated feelings of humans...he could never understand even after 10 years of his life on earth.
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Sunni wanted to walk out her whole emotions, perhaps strolling could work. She believed.
The young man followed behind her as she walked.
He observed her from behind He wasn't interested in knowing how she felt but was more interested in knowing how to get back what belongs to him from her.
At the moment, he didn't know how to do that but finding it was a step.
And now all he had to do was keep it in close view while protecting it.....
"I hate you, detective general!"
She yelled to the sky. "Such a jerk!"
Just then she looked across the road.
She saw a man gang of drunkards teasing a young girl who was passing by.
She frowned "Bunch of disgusting men like that detective General!" she mumbled angrily to herself as she approached the scene.
The young man watched her leave. This girl was indeed silly and extraordinary.
Other humans he had come in contact with always ran away from danger, but this girl runs right into danger!
With a sigh, he watched the drama.
"Hey, jerks! Stay away from her!" She commanded
The drunken gangs turned to her.
"Who are you? Do you wanna die?" One demanded.
"Shameless....How can you pick on this girl!". she walked up to them and dragged the girl away from them.
They stared at her surprised.
"Ma'am...runoff," she said as the woman thanked her and ran for her dear life.
"How dare you young brat!"
She looked at them."Want a fight? Come get me!"
Sunni quickly ran for her dear life!
The drunken gang quickly ran after her.
"Hey stop there! " They demanded. "you're gonna die today!"
She continued running hoping to survive. But she had a plan.
As she ran, she quickly got out her phone to call the police but it fell off!
Damn! Now she was dead!
"Someone save me! Someone! " She cried out for her dear life.
The young man had seen them run after her and disappeared.
Suddenly, the running scene froze.
Sunni froze and so did the drunken gangs.
The scene was calm as the young man appeared.
He looked around for a while as his gaze fell on the drunken gangs.
He walked up to them as he slowly placed a hand on their leader's chin. He gripped It.
"Too bad..because now....you'll all have to pay"
Immediately, he drained him of his life. His skin texture went white and he did this to all of them equally in a flash.
With this achieved. He walked up to Sunni. He slowly ran his finger through her chin as he magically played a tracker in her.
Now, he could find her whenever.
He disappeared.
Everything came back to normal as Sunni stopped running.
Confused at the stance feeling she had felt, she looked behind her to see the men falling, lifeless...
She looked around and saw no one.
"Yeah.. that's what you get...for messing with me...." She quickly ran off for her good.
The young man lay on the rooftop of a house Close by.
He heard what Sunni had said before she ran off as the Side of his lips curled into a smile...
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