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YOUTHFUL MISTAKE THANKS
So here we are at the end of this volume 1, it was not at all easy to write more than sixty thousand words in less than a month but we got there anyway and it's partly thanks to you, Writing an online story can seem easy and exciting when you have great readers reading it.So why the title?The title is for me an auspicious title that sums up the whole story, Physio and Sophia were fooled by youth, by fashion, by their beauty, they crunched the pleasures of life without thinking about their future, their story is a perfect version of what many young girls experience, through this title I wanted to show that many girls are fooled by youth, it is a very important moment in the life of a person who may have reflected in our present and our future, we really have to live it consciously and in moderation otherwise regrets will take place in the present or the future.How do you choose character names?I take the names of the characters according to my entourage, in general I take the na
Last Updated : 2023-01-05YOUTHFUL MISTAKE first
Fooled, yes life fooled me, my youth destroyed me, my name is Kiné Diop and I'm the laughing stock of the whole neighborhood, I don't leave my house anymore, I'm locked in my room all the time curled up on myself. My life looks like an empty carcass, the idea of suicide sometimes touches my mind but I think of the being who lives in my belly, and yes I am two months pregnant but for the moment nobody does it knows.Me physio Diop, I'm the most disgusting girl in the whole neighborhood, my name is on everyone's lips, my naked photos are on all the phones, my life took a big turn the day this man put me on her bed.FLASHBACK (return to the past)It was past 11 p.m., Kiné Diop as usual was in a nightclub in Place aux Almadies (an upscale district of Dakar in Senegal), on her left hand was a bottle of beer, she was drunk to the toes, she couldn't even stand properly, on the dance floor, she was dancing and a young man was rubbing against her bottom, she was singing loudly, dancing
Last Updated : 2022-11-04YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Two
Kiné Diop opened her eyes little by little in the bathtub, she had an excruciating headache.- Where am I? Ah my head..... she said holding her headShe was trying to get up but she fell, her lower abdomen hurt very badly.-What's happening to me? Why can't I get on my feet, she puts her hand on her intimacy and the blood spurts outShe had realized that she had just lost the most precious thing in her house: Her virginity, she had just broken her promise, she wanted to keep it, yes she wanted to keep it for the man who deserved it but also because that she knows that it is a requirement within her family that the girl be a virgin once married, she had just realized that she will bring dishonor within her family, she will bring shame to her mother, to his father.-NoooooooooooooooooooooooooShe was screaming with all her might despite the pain, she felt dirty, she felt repulsive, she couldn't imagine losing her virginity in such a situation, even less with Abdou, this man who slept
Last Updated : 2022-11-04YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Three
How can we photograph a person in addition to a woman in such indecent positions, consider women as our mothers and our own sisters, treat them as we treat our mother and our own sister.Women deserve to be protected, respected no matter what they do, they are the basis of any society.It is thanks to women that we hear the word dad coming from the mouth of a child towards us, women risk their lives to realize our dreams of being a dad, the man cannot give change to the woman.The pains of childbirth are excruciating and the woman finds herself between life and death to be able to give life, this gift that the woman gives to the man of being a dad is priceless, this gift is priceless.The woman deserves to be raised to the rank of queen, she deserves to be in good conditions.Kiné did not believe her eyes or her ears, she said to herself in her head that she was dreaming.- No I'm dreaming, it can't be real..... she said shaking her head- Think again my dear, it is indeed the realit
Last Updated : 2022-11-04YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Fourth
Abdou didn't know what to do, he was worried, distraught, he thought that Kiné was dead.-I KILLED OTHERS' DAUGHTERAgain he goes out to wake Abdou, he gives him a good slap to wake him up quickly, the latter jumps.-Why are you wild, since when are you there.... he said surprised-There is a problem my guy, get up quickly, I made a big mistake, we are going to prison-Hey, slowly, calm down and talk to me, what's going on?-Physio- What a physio!-She is deadThis phrase buzzed in Abdou's ears like the sound of bees in the hive, he couldn't believe his eyes.- Asshole, what did you do to him?-I just wanted to have a good time with her, when I entered her she became unconscious.-Doudou you always get me in trouble, the head is used to think anyway, how many times should I tell you to advise me before doing anything, I promised you to do without Physio but not for the moment, you're just stupid, is she really dead? have you checked her pulse?-No, I did not check it, she was no lon
Last Updated : 2022-11-04YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Five
It sometimes happens in life that a person, whether it is our parent or the person who exercises paternal power over us, calls us to account.It happens that a person rebels, do not we say that in life it is the person who loves you who tells you the truth, it is proven, yes who loves well punishes well.When we love someone, let's try to tell them the truth when they go wrong, let's try to put them back on the right track because they are no longer in the right direction.Kiné's mother was in this situation with her daughter, she is one of her mothers who always gives in to her daughter's whims, everything her daughter does she likes, she shouts on all the walls that Kiné is her favorite daughter but is this the case, does she chastise her daughter when she does something stupid, no she has never done it.She knows in soul and in conscience that her daughter goes to a club every night to party but she prefers to keep quiet about it despite knowing the opinion that in Senegalese soci
Last Updated : 2022-11-04YOUTHFUL MISTAKE six
No child on earth would want to disappoint their parents who have done so much for them.No child would want to dishonor his own parents.Life is made up of ups and downs, it is unpredictable, sometimes we want to have one thing but God gives us the opposite, what should we do in this case? misfortune try to get up, the fall is not fatal it is rather to stay in the same place which is fatal, let us live our hard times with philosophy while bearing in mind that one day we were happy, happiness cannot not last forever just as misfortune cannot last forever, the importance is to live any situation with philosophy and to rely on the lord.Physiotherapist did not know what to answer when faced with his mother's unpredictable question, should she tell him the truth, tell him that she is no longer a virgin, how would his mother react? Is this the right time? moreover Muslim would not want to hear this sentence coming from the mouth of her daughter before marriage "MOM I AM NOT A ViRGIN"-
Last Updated : 2022-12-01YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Seven
-NoooooooooooooooooooooooooooPhysio had just shouted very loudly even jumping after a nightmare, she was so sweaty, her cry had even alerted her little sister Khady who was sleeping next door.- Physio, are you okay? Calm down, it was just a nightmare..... she said taking her in her arms.Physio was still breathing deeply, it was one of the worst nightmares she had had since birth.-It's over, calm down, it was just a nightmare- I'm scared Khady, I'm scared, my life is going to be ruined- It's not physical reality, it's a nightmare, nothing moreKiné knew what she was talking about but Khady no, she came to her senses little by little.- Try to go back to sleep khady and thank you-Are you sure you're fine, I can keep you company you know-Don't worry, it was just a nightmare, it's over-Ok cool then..... she said turning her back on him and went back to bed."Oh my God don't let this nightmare come true I beg you, soutoural ma yalla sunu borom, this video must not go viral under a
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YOUTHFUL MISTAKE THANKS
So here we are at the end of this volume 1, it was not at all easy to write more than sixty thousand words in less than a month but we got there anyway and it's partly thanks to you, Writing an online story can seem easy and exciting when you have great readers reading it.So why the title?The title is for me an auspicious title that sums up the whole story, Physio and Sophia were fooled by youth, by fashion, by their beauty, they crunched the pleasures of life without thinking about their future, their story is a perfect version of what many young girls experience, through this title I wanted to show that many girls are fooled by youth, it is a very important moment in the life of a person who may have reflected in our present and our future, we really have to live it consciously and in moderation otherwise regrets will take place in the present or the future.How do you choose character names?I take the names of the characters according to my entourage, in general I take the na
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Fourthy three
Fear of losing a loved one, fear of losing the woman who gave birth to you, fear of losing the woman you married and gave you children.- The patient is fine, we managed to keep her alive but her condition is still unstable, avoid stressing her.- God be praised...they said while breathingMore harm than fear, Physio's mother was fine.Half an hour later, Khady and his father were at his bedside.- Call my physio daughter, I want to see her, she needs me... she said in a low voice.- All right, she'll come, don't worry.So they went outside- Dad, physiotherapists really have to come and see mum- No way, I don't want to see this girl here, I don't want to see her even in painting.- It's about mom's health anywayHe thinks for a moment before approving.- Go call her- Ok, I will call MansourThis is how she dials the number of Mansour who picks up on the second ring.-Hello yes Khady- Mansur- I hope everything is fine ?- Mom is in the hospital- Hospital !!!- Yes and she asks to
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Fourthy two
-Physician was raped Tata, she is innocent- RAPED!!!.... she screams in shock- And yes it is the sad reality, listen to his version of the facts first please- You're talking about rape there Sophia, no no I can't believe it, it's not possible, my daughter can't be a victim of rape without my knowing it.- Tata it's the truth- Ah no no..... she said still in shock- You all think that she gave herself to a man, that she is a wanton but I would tell you the opposite, Physio always wanted to keep her virginity for the man who deserved it, for her husband, she wanted keep it for herself but especially for her daughter especially you, her mother, she wanted to make you proud, she didn't want to dishonor you in any way, it's true that she went to clubs, she drank alcohol, she didn't never wanted to give herself to a man, she had the ultimate conviction to be a virgin for her wedding night but alas everything happened different, they snatched from her in the worst possible way what she
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE fourthy one
A pregnancy after a rape, what could be harder?- Physio you are pregnantThis phrase buzzed in Physio's ears like the sound of bees in the hive.-What!! What are you talking about?....she asks, unable to analyze the situation- I'm sorry to tell you but after your suicide attempt the doctor told me that you are pregnant and that the baby is doing wonderfully-Ah no no it's not possible, I can't get pregnant, tell me it's a joke, no it must surely be a joke Mansour but know that your joke is in bad taste .... she said not believing his ears.- Physio listen to me.... he said taking both her hands- I'm listening to you- I knew it since your hospitalization, I didn't know how to tell you but today I had the courage to tell you because you are the main one concerned-Ah no no it's not possible, tell me it's not.....said she shouting, holding Mansour's shirt collar- Calm down, don't hurt yourself.- I can't get pregnant, my life is crazy for good.... she said sobbing- I am here and
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE fourthy
Life is so unpredictable, we sometimes think we are coming to the end of our ordeal when it is we are just at the beginning of our ordeal. Dignity, it is sacred, we can lose everything and be respected, but dignity when you lose, you also lose self-esteem and the esteem of others. Some people did not ask to lose their dignity but their dignity was trampled on in the worst way. The girl is called to be a mother so everything she does, she must think about the future of her future offspring because the youth of a woman can harm the future of her child and no woman on earth would like to be pointed at her child so crunch the pleasures of youth in moderation, an excess could be a fatal error. boy is called to be a father so he must learn to behave well from his youth to then be able to educate his offspring. Youth is a great time, a good memory as long as we lived it with conscience .Youth is a bad memory as long as we have lived it without conscience. Do not let yourself be lulled b
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE thirty nine
Love is sometimes very complicated, it is supposed to be sweet, exciting but sometimes it is the opposite. This is the case when we see the loved one suffer..Physio's mother was in her room still crying when she received a visit from her older sister who lives not far from her home.- Good evening… she said- Good evening my sister....said wiping her tears to then show that she is strong.- Diaroul fompou, dioyal, there's no need to hide your pain from me, but know that all this is your fault.... she said taking her seat.- You too don't say that, I never wanted my daughter to behave like one- And yet, she did it, it's all your fault, you let Physio do what she wants and now here is the result, she spends all her nights in nightclubs, everyone knows it , everyone knew her vulgar, everyone knew that she didn't have good company but to show off like that naked, her video was even seen by the little ones, it's shameful, it's is the reputation of a whole family that is shameful, you
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE thirty eight
Suicide, how could we analyze it, when someone does it we say he's a coward but sometimes our mind tells us to do it.Kiné was still alive, Mansour immediately took him to the hospital before it was too late.Mansour was behind the scenes of the hospital with Fanta, a physiotherapist was taken directly to the emergency room, she was with the doctor. Mansour was so worried, he couldn't sit or stand, he was only going back and forth between the waiting room and the emergency room, his heart was beating hard, that's when he knew that he loves physio very much and does not want to lose her, fear was overwhelming his whole body, yes the fear of losing a loved one.-Mansour don't worry. Everything will be alright. Let's pray to God.-:May God hear you.Do you love her, Madame Diop?-yes very much Fanta, I love her despite everything I don't want to lose her.-:Do not worry. You will not lose it.- You don't think you should notify his parents.- Not at the moment anyway.Half an hour la
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE thirty seven
Marriage is something sacred, a promise made before God and before men, we decide to get married because we feel our life is going on with our spouse, we get married because we feel invested in living next to the man or woman of your life, we get married to build the family of our dreams with our spouse, we get married to share our moments with our spouse. Marriage is something serious, it's not neither a day nor two days, when you enter a marriage you have to abandon certain behaviors, you promised each other help and assistance then for nothing in the world Ok should turn your back on your spouse except of course in cases of force majeure.- Repudiate it I said- Mom, can you hear yourself talking?- But with your mother that you speak there El Hadj Mansour- Me and Physio is for eternity- We'll talk about it again... she said hanging upMansour takes a breath of fresh air before starting his car.It is a quarter of an hour later that he arrives at Tapha. As soon as this one ope
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE thirty six
No one on earth would like to disappoint their parents, no one on earth would like to see their mother cry because of us, life is so unpredictable, we can be happy at 5:20 p.m. and at 5:21 p.m. unhappy.It is with a bruised heart, tears in her eyes, heavy feet that she leaves her parents' home to leave with Mansour, the man who had just married her before God and men, their Happiness was only lightning, a shooting star, ice cream melted in no time.Her world had stopped following the words coming from her father's mouth, Physio really thought she was happy now but everything fell apart, she really wanted to turn the page but her past resurfaced and in the worst possible way manners, Mansour was at the wheel, Physio in her dress she wore for her religious wedding had landed on the landscape side with all the trouble in the world, she was crying without being heard, tears were streaming along her cheek, she was alone in her world, she no longer had a taste for life.-I'll always be t
