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2022-11-04 13:52:01It sometimes happens in life that a person, whether it is our parent or the person who exercises paternal power over us, calls us to account.
It happens that a person rebels, do not we say that in life it is the person who loves you who tells you the truth, it is proven, yes who loves well punishes well.When we love someone, let's try to tell them the truth when they go wrong, let's try to put them back on the right track because they are no longer in the right direction.Kiné's mother was in this situation with her daughter, she is one of her mothers who always gives in to her daughter's whims, everything her daughter does she likes, she shouts on all the walls that Kiné is her favorite daughter butis this the case, does she chastise her daughter when she does something stupid, no she has never done it.She knows in soul and in conscience that her daughter goes to a club every night to party but she prefers to keep quiet about it despite knowing the opinion that in Senegalese society, more particularly Islam, on this kind ofplace where there are many temptations.-Kine Diop!!!-Mom.....said Physio, stopping-Today you will tell me where you were or it will be war between us-.......-You are mute Physio, today I will not let it go, Physio I am tired, I am exhausted, I am out of breath, I am no longer worth anything in this neighborhood because of you, because of your indecent behavior-Mom it's not the time, we'll talk about all that later..... she said continuing on her way-Physio stop- What's going on again mum, I told you we'll talk about it later so you don't need to make a big deal about it-Physio why are you walking like that-............-Talk to me about physio, I'm not crazy, why do you walk like that?...... she asks again.-It's nothing mum, you're worrying for nothing....said she entering her room againBut it is without counting on Yacine her mother who pursues her.-Kine Diop!!-Yes mom-Sit down- Mom I'm tired, let me rest first, I'll tell you everything you want to know-I can't wait for physio, sit down, we're going to talk like adults calmly.Joining the word to the act, Physio manages to sit down with difficulty.-Physio what's going on, why are you walking like that?-Mom don't worry, I'll tell you again-Why shouldn't I worry-I just fell down the stairs at a friend's house-Physio I was not born yesterday, I'm not crazy, you can't coax meYacine gets up and wants to examine her daughter's body.- Mom, what are you doing here?-What are you afraid of? Let me see your body-Mom I hurt all over so please don't touch me-Then at least let me give you a massage- It's not necessary-Hum..... he said sitting down again-Kine do you think that all this is normal?- What mom!- Don't play the one who doesn't understand, I'm talking about the fact that you go out at such late hours of the night to go to a club, physiotherapist you are the daughter of a Muslim man and woman, you are aMuslim, your religion forbids you this kind of place, Physio don't you take your reputation into account, you are ruining your present and your future, physio in this neighborhood everyone has a negative opinion of you, everyonetax you as an easy girl, a girl who is fearless, Physiotherapist I sometimes hear poignant words because of you but I always take it upon myself but now I'm out of breath, your own father takes me forresponsible for your bad education and yet I did everything for you, you lack for nothing, I always give in to your whims, for me your desires were orders, I loved you so much that even people think Iam afraid of youIs giving in to the whims of the child educating the child?No, let's not always say yes to the child, let's learn to say no even if we have what he asks for, it's just to teach him that in life, we can't always have what we want, we must always be satisfied with what we have.- Mom I'm sorry-It's not about saying I'm sorry physio, I want you to change your behavior, that you show everyone that you are a good person, Physio you are part of a good family, it's youalone in this family who is capable of acting like this, look at your outfit, you are half naked, you look like a girl from the sidewalk, your body has physical value but you expose it and men will surely want itapproach, Physio I am your mother I gave you life, I love you like you can't imagine, it hurts me to see you like this, I wish you were like the other girls in this family, that you leave all these dating that bring you nothing positive in your life, Physio, my mother's heart does not thank you, no, my heart bleeds because it wants you to be a legit girl who stays by her mother's side until'until a man comes to marry her, physiotherapist have pity on me, have pity on our family, we don't deserve this, we don't deserve you to dishonor us........said eher with tears in her eyesIn Senegal, it is often said that making your mother cry is a big mistake and it doesn't bode well so let's be very careful, let's try to make our parents proud, any parent would like their child to be the best of all, any parent would likeMay her child be on the right track forever.- Mom please, don't cry, I'm going to change, this time I promise you-You always tell me the same thing and after two days you go back to your bad habits-Give your hand momWhat Yacine did- Mom an event taught me what life is, I'm ready to change and turn my back on my past and show everyone that I can become a good person.-There is only one way to prove to people that you are a good person- What mom?-Your physio virginityThis sentence buzzed in the ears of Physio like the sound of bees, this virginity she unfortunately no longer has.-Yes Physio only your virginity will be able to silence the people who say bad things about you.-............-Physio are you a virgin? tell me that you have never given yourself to a manWill physio confide in her mother?Is this the right time to reveal the truth?What do you think of Yacine?Your impressions will be welcome.Related chapters
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No child on earth would want to disappoint their parents who have done so much for them.No child would want to dishonor his own parents.Life is made up of ups and downs, it is unpredictable, sometimes we want to have one thing but God gives us the opposite, what should we do in this case? misfortune try to get up, the fall is not fatal it is rather to stay in the same place which is fatal, let us live our hard times with philosophy while bearing in mind that one day we were happy, happiness cannot not last forever just as misfortune cannot last forever, the importance is to live any situation with philosophy and to rely on the lord.Physiotherapist did not know what to answer when faced with his mother's unpredictable question, should she tell him the truth, tell him that she is no longer a virgin, how would his mother react? Is this the right time? moreover Muslim would not want to hear this sentence coming from the mouth of her daughter before marriage "MOM I AM NOT A ViRGIN"-
Last Updated : 2022-12-01YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Seven
-NoooooooooooooooooooooooooooPhysio had just shouted very loudly even jumping after a nightmare, she was so sweaty, her cry had even alerted her little sister Khady who was sleeping next door.- Physio, are you okay? Calm down, it was just a nightmare..... she said taking her in her arms.Physio was still breathing deeply, it was one of the worst nightmares she had had since birth.-It's over, calm down, it was just a nightmare- I'm scared Khady, I'm scared, my life is going to be ruined- It's not physical reality, it's a nightmare, nothing moreKiné knew what she was talking about but Khady no, she came to her senses little by little.- Try to go back to sleep khady and thank you-Are you sure you're fine, I can keep you company you know-Don't worry, it was just a nightmare, it's over-Ok cool then..... she said turning her back on him and went back to bed."Oh my God don't let this nightmare come true I beg you, soutoural ma yalla sunu borom, this video must not go viral under a
Last Updated : 2022-12-06YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Eight
In life, to turn your back on your past, hard is it, we have to try to put a cross on the people who remind us of our past, we have to put a line that prevents us from being on the right way, people who do not help us move forward in life positively.It is often said that like attracts like but that may not be the case.It is in this situation that Physio is with Sophia.Sophia is one of those shameless girls who likes to party, dress sexy, go out with rich kids, her virginity she lost it at the age of sixteen and she doesn't even regret it and ever since sleeps with the first man that comes along.Sophia doesn't care what other people think of her life, she doesn't even care what her own parents think, her philosophy is "my life, it's mine, I do what I do with it. I want, my virginity belongs to me, I do what I want with it"Kiné and Sophia had met one Sunday evening around twenty one o'clock, Sophia had just moved to the Kiné district a week ago.Physio hardly went out, she was a
Last Updated : 2022-12-06YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Nine
It's hard to separate sometimes from people from our past but sometimes it is necessary to be able to move forward positively in life. Some people have a negative impact on our life even if sometimes we become blind to it.-Sophia I want to change and I think it's better that you don't set foot in my house anymore.-WHAT!!!-You heard me right, Sophia, you're the only person I've had as a friend, I've never opened up to the world, you're the cause of everything that happens to me, I changed my life negatively. the day my eyes fell on you, Sophia my reputation is destroyed, since I know you I have only been doing nonsense, it was when I met you that I started going to clubs and since I got addicted to it.- Are you serious here?-More than serious Sophia-You want to end our friendship just because you want to change the world?-Friendship!!! Do we even know the definition of the word friendship, I don't think so Sophia, I want to change positively, I started to perfect myself so pl
Last Updated : 2022-12-07YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Ten
In life, it is when we decide to turn the page that people from our past resurface.In life, there is always someone who keeps us from being the best version of ourselves.Don't we say that we can't change the past overnight? And yes it's true, even the world was not made in a single day so everything takes time.In life there are pasts that are linked to the present and the future of the person, we can chase them away but they always come back at a gallop.Some men in life consider the woman as a toy, as a commodity that we use to throw away afterwards.The woman is sacred, we must protect her but not destroy her.These situations define what physiotherapist is going through with Abdou.The phone kept ringing, she still did not pick up but it was without counting on Abdou who kept calling, at the end Physio decides to pick up because tired of hearing the ringtone.- What do you want from me son of a bitch?..... she said annoyed-Hey you don't speak to me sure of your tone and don't c
Last Updated : 2022-12-08YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Eleven
In life sometimes in terms of confidence, we are told that it can drown the pain but is this always the case, here is the question that deserves to be answered, there are pains that cannot be treated , there are secrets that we risk confiding for fear that we will be judged, for fear that we will be turned away.We may have a person who promises to be there by our side, a person who asks us to confide in you, but can this person not judge us, can she keep this secret to herself.Physio was about to reveal everything to her mother but hesitated, she was afraid of disappointing her again.- Mom, don't worry.- Stop telling me not to worry, it's my duty to worry about you anyway, go ahead, give birth to the words- I just have a problem with Sophia, nothing more....... she lies- Is that why you're in this state? It's obvious that you care about her, your friendship dates back a long time-Mom I am no longer friends with Sophia-What!!!-Yes mum, I decided to change and Sophia is a bad
Last Updated : 2022-12-09YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Twelve
In some families, we like to get married in the family cocoon, that is to say between cousins and cousins, some people have even gone so far as to say cousins are made for cousins as if to say that cousins are obliged to agree to marry their cousins.And the love in all this? And the choice of the girl in all this? Forced marriage does not only concern the girl, it can also affect the man but most of the time it happens to girls.The basis of marriage must be love, some will say that love is not enough but when you don't love a person, it's hard to sleep on the same bed as them, it's hard to wake up all mornings by his side even if sometimes we hide him.Love is the basis of any household, it's proven, when we don't love our spouse, we don't understand these faults and these shortcomings, we don't endure in our household whereas when we love our spouse's faults are transformed for us in quality, we endure difficult times for him, we support everything in this household.For
Last Updated : 2022-12-10YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Thirteen
In life, there are men who only see sex in women, they think that life is only about carnal pleasure.Wanting to have carnal pleasure is not prohibited but having it under normal conditions is what is good, yes doing it with the consent of the person concerned or even having carnal pleasure in the bonds of marriage .Fornication, few of us talk about it, we trivialize it and yet it is a virtue, all the revealed religions prohibit fornication but we do it while knowing that it is not good, our world is thus made of nowadays, we know what is good for us but we don't do it, we know what is bad for us and yet we do it while being aware.Some will say that God's mercy is immense, yes God is merciful, very merciful even but let's try to follow these recommendations anyway, life on earth is only a passage, sooner or later, we will return where we came from so let's try to build our life here below while building that of the beyond, by what to do? by posing beautiful acts, by working in th
Last Updated : 2022-12-11
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YOUTHFUL MISTAKE THANKS
So here we are at the end of this volume 1, it was not at all easy to write more than sixty thousand words in less than a month but we got there anyway and it's partly thanks to you, Writing an online story can seem easy and exciting when you have great readers reading it.So why the title?The title is for me an auspicious title that sums up the whole story, Physio and Sophia were fooled by youth, by fashion, by their beauty, they crunched the pleasures of life without thinking about their future, their story is a perfect version of what many young girls experience, through this title I wanted to show that many girls are fooled by youth, it is a very important moment in the life of a person who may have reflected in our present and our future, we really have to live it consciously and in moderation otherwise regrets will take place in the present or the future.How do you choose character names?I take the names of the characters according to my entourage, in general I take the na
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Fourthy three
Fear of losing a loved one, fear of losing the woman who gave birth to you, fear of losing the woman you married and gave you children.- The patient is fine, we managed to keep her alive but her condition is still unstable, avoid stressing her.- God be praised...they said while breathingMore harm than fear, Physio's mother was fine.Half an hour later, Khady and his father were at his bedside.- Call my physio daughter, I want to see her, she needs me... she said in a low voice.- All right, she'll come, don't worry.So they went outside- Dad, physiotherapists really have to come and see mum- No way, I don't want to see this girl here, I don't want to see her even in painting.- It's about mom's health anywayHe thinks for a moment before approving.- Go call her- Ok, I will call MansourThis is how she dials the number of Mansour who picks up on the second ring.-Hello yes Khady- Mansur- I hope everything is fine ?- Mom is in the hospital- Hospital !!!- Yes and she asks to
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Fourthy two
-Physician was raped Tata, she is innocent- RAPED!!!.... she screams in shock- And yes it is the sad reality, listen to his version of the facts first please- You're talking about rape there Sophia, no no I can't believe it, it's not possible, my daughter can't be a victim of rape without my knowing it.- Tata it's the truth- Ah no no..... she said still in shock- You all think that she gave herself to a man, that she is a wanton but I would tell you the opposite, Physio always wanted to keep her virginity for the man who deserved it, for her husband, she wanted keep it for herself but especially for her daughter especially you, her mother, she wanted to make you proud, she didn't want to dishonor you in any way, it's true that she went to clubs, she drank alcohol, she didn't never wanted to give herself to a man, she had the ultimate conviction to be a virgin for her wedding night but alas everything happened different, they snatched from her in the worst possible way what she
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE fourthy one
A pregnancy after a rape, what could be harder?- Physio you are pregnantThis phrase buzzed in Physio's ears like the sound of bees in the hive.-What!! What are you talking about?....she asks, unable to analyze the situation- I'm sorry to tell you but after your suicide attempt the doctor told me that you are pregnant and that the baby is doing wonderfully-Ah no no it's not possible, I can't get pregnant, tell me it's a joke, no it must surely be a joke Mansour but know that your joke is in bad taste .... she said not believing his ears.- Physio listen to me.... he said taking both her hands- I'm listening to you- I knew it since your hospitalization, I didn't know how to tell you but today I had the courage to tell you because you are the main one concerned-Ah no no it's not possible, tell me it's not.....said she shouting, holding Mansour's shirt collar- Calm down, don't hurt yourself.- I can't get pregnant, my life is crazy for good.... she said sobbing- I am here and
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE fourthy
Life is so unpredictable, we sometimes think we are coming to the end of our ordeal when it is we are just at the beginning of our ordeal. Dignity, it is sacred, we can lose everything and be respected, but dignity when you lose, you also lose self-esteem and the esteem of others. Some people did not ask to lose their dignity but their dignity was trampled on in the worst way. The girl is called to be a mother so everything she does, she must think about the future of her future offspring because the youth of a woman can harm the future of her child and no woman on earth would like to be pointed at her child so crunch the pleasures of youth in moderation, an excess could be a fatal error. boy is called to be a father so he must learn to behave well from his youth to then be able to educate his offspring. Youth is a great time, a good memory as long as we lived it with conscience .Youth is a bad memory as long as we have lived it without conscience. Do not let yourself be lulled b
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE thirty nine
Love is sometimes very complicated, it is supposed to be sweet, exciting but sometimes it is the opposite. This is the case when we see the loved one suffer..Physio's mother was in her room still crying when she received a visit from her older sister who lives not far from her home.- Good evening… she said- Good evening my sister....said wiping her tears to then show that she is strong.- Diaroul fompou, dioyal, there's no need to hide your pain from me, but know that all this is your fault.... she said taking her seat.- You too don't say that, I never wanted my daughter to behave like one- And yet, she did it, it's all your fault, you let Physio do what she wants and now here is the result, she spends all her nights in nightclubs, everyone knows it , everyone knew her vulgar, everyone knew that she didn't have good company but to show off like that naked, her video was even seen by the little ones, it's shameful, it's is the reputation of a whole family that is shameful, you
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE thirty eight
Suicide, how could we analyze it, when someone does it we say he's a coward but sometimes our mind tells us to do it.Kiné was still alive, Mansour immediately took him to the hospital before it was too late.Mansour was behind the scenes of the hospital with Fanta, a physiotherapist was taken directly to the emergency room, she was with the doctor. Mansour was so worried, he couldn't sit or stand, he was only going back and forth between the waiting room and the emergency room, his heart was beating hard, that's when he knew that he loves physio very much and does not want to lose her, fear was overwhelming his whole body, yes the fear of losing a loved one.-Mansour don't worry. Everything will be alright. Let's pray to God.-:May God hear you.Do you love her, Madame Diop?-yes very much Fanta, I love her despite everything I don't want to lose her.-:Do not worry. You will not lose it.- You don't think you should notify his parents.- Not at the moment anyway.Half an hour la
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Marriage is something sacred, a promise made before God and before men, we decide to get married because we feel our life is going on with our spouse, we get married because we feel invested in living next to the man or woman of your life, we get married to build the family of our dreams with our spouse, we get married to share our moments with our spouse. Marriage is something serious, it's not neither a day nor two days, when you enter a marriage you have to abandon certain behaviors, you promised each other help and assistance then for nothing in the world Ok should turn your back on your spouse except of course in cases of force majeure.- Repudiate it I said- Mom, can you hear yourself talking?- But with your mother that you speak there El Hadj Mansour- Me and Physio is for eternity- We'll talk about it again... she said hanging upMansour takes a breath of fresh air before starting his car.It is a quarter of an hour later that he arrives at Tapha. As soon as this one ope
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE thirty six
No one on earth would like to disappoint their parents, no one on earth would like to see their mother cry because of us, life is so unpredictable, we can be happy at 5:20 p.m. and at 5:21 p.m. unhappy.It is with a bruised heart, tears in her eyes, heavy feet that she leaves her parents' home to leave with Mansour, the man who had just married her before God and men, their Happiness was only lightning, a shooting star, ice cream melted in no time.Her world had stopped following the words coming from her father's mouth, Physio really thought she was happy now but everything fell apart, she really wanted to turn the page but her past resurfaced and in the worst possible way manners, Mansour was at the wheel, Physio in her dress she wore for her religious wedding had landed on the landscape side with all the trouble in the world, she was crying without being heard, tears were streaming along her cheek, she was alone in her world, she no longer had a taste for life.-I'll always be t
