I hope you enjoy reading!
im so excited because this is my first vampire book. As a writer, I would like to people think
of my book, I need feedbacks.
I am only human,I have flaws and there's no such thing as perfect well except God,so please let me know what's I'm doing wrong but I'm a sensible way nor rudely. I won't allow anyone disrespect me all in the name of point out my flaws.This book is a work of fiction. To all my vampire fans,this is the right book for you to feast on. That said, let's dive in!
"In a world of vampires and witches,humans and ghosts,the dead and living," their mother said has she got up to close the windows. The breeze had knocked off the flower vase from the table. The house was a bit old as the paint was weathered and peeling off in spots,it was a modern house.A normal vampire house.
"Mom,but isn't Vador the name of our vampire king?"
"I'm the dark lord," Vador replied with a sly smile and this is Aleister," he said pointing to Alei.
The next morning Ava woke up with a smile on her face."Vador," she murmured ,sitting up straight she saw a note on her bed.It from Vador,he asked of how she slept and told her some clothes and food would be brought to her room.
"Excuse me, Vador asked me to get a coffee for him," Ava said to one of the maids in kitchen."Vador!" Vandora exclaimed, "how dare you call
Since the incident in the garden happened. Ava had kept to herself considering the fact that Vador didn't mention anything about it.She took his coffee to him whenever he asked for it,avoided making eye contacts with him and even started calling him my lord. The lord wasn't pleased with it at all.
Ava was on her way to the garden when she heard someone screams.Who might be screaming,she thought as she was walking past the kitchen when Vandora called her.
"Excuse me," someone knocked at the door."Hello," Ava said opening the door.
Ava and Aiden were talking in their room."I don't know how I would have been if you didn't come into my life Ava"
"Good day Aiden,Ava," Lord Jack bowed."Your grace," Lady Mary greeted.
"I would never get rid of my own child...""Listen. We should never underestimate the powers of a witch." Alizon groaned.
***A week after Aiden and Ava's wedding ceremony"It's a baby girl" The Vampire doctor said giving Ava her child.
"Ava,no," Vador shouted "She can't die on me just like this. Never,"he said carrying Ava to his room."Vador,are you okay?" Addison asked appearing in the room with Emma.
"Vador is in danger,I can feel it,Teleport us back to the royal house"
"Vador," Ava whispered as Vador gently laid her on the bed."Yes damsel," he replied kissing her softly which made her heart melt.
"Who are you?" Ava asked in a whisper.
Vador ordered Mary to leave his room after feeding on her,he saw sadness in Ava's eyes before she left his room and felt bad. He wanted to prove himself that he wasn't in love with the damsel,he was dark and that was all that mattered,darkness shew no light or weakness.Lovee fucks you up than anything else would,he thought,Love was the reason why Addison wasn't who she wanted to be.