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I'm Kelly. Everyone calls me Speed. I'm all about control. I'm in control on the racetrack. I'm in control of my car. I'm in control of how I fought to raise my deaf little brother. I live for being in control. Except in my personal life, I have no control and I don't know how to handle it. I don't know where I fit. Should I go with what I have been taught all my life as normal or should I give in to myself and let my true desires come out. I'm Brick. When I first met Speed I could see instantly she needed someone to take control. She needed the Dom in me to help her safely explore her needs and desires. She needed to submit to me and to her true self. She needed me to guide her as she explores who she is and what she wants. She needs a safe place only I can give her to step past what was drilled into her as right and follow her heart. I'm Gretchen. I'm a bunny for the Reckless Renegades. I service the members, most of the time means having sex with them. I was ok with that. Well, I was ok with it until I met Speed. I was drawn to her instantly. I wanted to get to know her but more than that I wanted to be with her. Before I can even make a move she finds out I'm a bunny and won't speak to me anymore. Being a bunny was fine for me but now I want more. I want to help Brick to get Speed to open up. I want to be with her in every way even if that means sharing her with him and giving up my bunny was.

Des thought she has found the man to spend her forever with, only to find out that her boyfriend was two timing her. After taking a break for her heart, she was ready to move on. A common friend introduces her to another lonely heart. However, there was a 20 year gap in their age. Would love see them through till the end when that new guy is her ex 's rich uncle?

Kisah ini menceritakan kisah cinta sepasang Kekasih berbeda kasta. Kinanti Larasati gadis kampung yang memiliki hubungan asmara dengan murid baru di sekolahnya yang bernamaKinoy Prayoga. pada awalnya hubungan percintaan ini baik-baik saja.penuh keromantisan,hingga membuat orang yang melihat mereka akan bawa perasaan. Namun saat hubungan cinta itu terdengar oleh orang tua Kinoy. hidup kinanti mulai berantakan.orang tua Kinoy sangat membencinya karena miskin. Lalu Kinanti di minta menjauhi Kinoy.tak cuma itu saja,ornag tua Kinoy berencana akan membuat hidup Kinanti sangat menderita. Akankah Kinanti dan Kinoy kembali bersatu? akankah cinta sejati menyatukan mereka?

After the death of Nathan, Novie fell in love with the man who received a heart transplant from her ex-boyfriend. She’s an old soul spice woman who falls in love by just looking in Miguel's eyes, but how they can get through the circumstances when the world against their relationship.

Cerita asli dari apa yang aku alami semasa hidupku, kisah horror yang nyata tanpa penambahan unsur apapun. So yups guys happy reading ️

Apa jadinya jika kita mencintai seseorang yang ternyata sebuah arwah yang tanpa jasad? Begitulah yang dialami seorang opsir polisi. Dia terjebak drama percintaan berbeda alam. Bukan secara kebetulan itu terjadi, melainkan karena memiliki nasib dikhianati oleh pasangan masing-masing hingga membuat mereka kian dekat dan merasakan cinta yang tumbuh secara perlahan. Dialah Zack Abraham. Seorang opsir polisi yang sudah dikenal dengan dedikasinya yang tinggi, pemikirannya yang luas serta cerdas dalam mengungkap kasus-kasus kejahatan. Opsir Zack berakhir dengan melabuhkan hatinya kepada arwah seorang gadis yang jasadnya masih terbaring koma di rumah sakit. Kisah cinta mereka bukan hanya terhalang oleh perbedaan alam, tetapi gadis cantik itu adalah keluarga dari seorang mafia kejam yang merupakan musuh besar dari opsir polisi itu sendiri. Apakah cinta mereka akan bersatu setelah si gadis terbangun dari koma-nya? Ataukah harus terpisah karena terhalang restu keluarga? IG Aleena_Anonymous Fb Aleena

"I am Giovanni Russo, Selena Jerome..Right?" He asked,stretching his hand for a handshake.I was so lost in his green eyes that carried so much darkness.His presence made all the hair in my body stand in perfect attention as I felt goosebumps, not in a good way though. Mostly, out of fear.His Aura felt evil as I shook his hands and said.."How do you know my name?""Because your father committed a grevious act against my family and I am the guy who destroys him by ending you..." Selena's Life changes in one night when her true identity as the lost black daughter of Russian's richest arm lord gets revealed without her knowledge, resulting into a threat against her life.Her identity was hidden for a reason... its because she was birthed unto .Be Warned: Matured Contents..

Askara Banyu Manggala atau kerap disapa Aska, merupakan leader geng motor bernama Rekals. Cowok tampan dengan segala tingkah konyolnya itu dikenal sebagai sosok yang humoris dan penyayang, terlebih dengan Elin-sang kekasih. Namun, siapa sangka, di balik sifat humorisnya itu Aska menyimpan banyak luka. Lantas, bagaimana cara ia menyembuhkan diri dari luka yang menyeretnya pada takdir yang rumit tersebut?

Blurb. Jake has everything he wants, money, women and power, he can have anything he wants except the one woman he is obsessed with. Kalia Kiari, daughter of an Italian kingpin, who wants absolutely nothing to do with that lifestyle. When all his efforts to get her yield no results, he orchestrates a series of actions that leave her father in his debt and his only daughter Kalia under his power. Jake is a merciless killer, dangerous, fearful and the embodiment of everything Kalia does not want in a man, so why does she crave him so much? She will fight him in every way but how can she fight her attraction towards him?

Laras seorang anak petani biasa, yang bercita-cita membanggakan orangtuanya. Tapi setelah masuk perguruan tinggi, Laras mengalami masalah keuangan dan saat itu juga Laras sedang menjalani hubungan dengan Banyu, tapi apakah Laras dan Banyu akan bersama selamanya?