Certainly! Here's a revised version of the passage with added introspection and sensory detail:---“Fucking—th-thank you,” Lexus muttered, his voice thick with emotion. “That means a lot. I didn’t realize those moments meant that much to you. I’m still so damn sorry. I have so much to make up for, especially after this royal fuck-up. God, where do I even start?”His mind raced, the guilt gnawing at him like a persistent itch he couldn’t scratch. He could feel the weight of his failures pressing down on his chest, suffocating him.“How do I unlock the shackles, Lex?” Azrin’s voice broke through the haze, pulling him back to the present.“Rin, I don’t think—,” Lexus began, his voice tight with apprehension.“You asked. I’m just giving you an opportunity,” Azrin cut in, his tone firm, yet soft, like the way he touched Lexus's shoulder, grounding him.“Fuck my life,” Lexus breathed out, the curse slipping past his lips before he could stop it. He felt Azrin’s eyes on him, pleading, a sil
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