Here's the revised version, written more professionally:*** AT LUNCH ***I quietly packed my books into my worn-out white school bag, ignoring the murmurs and glances from my classmates as they filed out of the room. Some whispered to each other, and others snickered, but I pretended not to notice. I made my way to the cafeteria, grabbed a small salad and a bottle of water, and found an empty seat. I didn’t have many friends, apart from Rilynn Blonca Thompson, the headmistress’s second child. Despite her status, she didn’t carry herself with the same arrogance as most of the others.As I began eating, I noticed Kaylle approaching with her group of friends—her so-called "clique." “Hi, Bella,” Kaylle said as she passed by. She only called me “Bella” when she was in a good mood. I felt a flicker of happiness but quickly suppressed it, not wanting to give her the satisfaction."Eww, she eats like a pig!" one of Kaylle’s friends, Cole, sneered."Pigs eat better than this one," Kaylle rep
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