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The Suit Series (14) Inhale Exhale
Hi yo peeps!THANK YOU FOR THE VOTES, COMMENTS, AND SUPPORT!THIS IS JUST A FILLER CHAPTER, LIKE A REALLY SHORT ONE 😅Enjoy 😊~-~"Stop acting like a jealous girlfriend? I scoffed angrily. Gripping the car's gear tightly, I pushed it forward. "That butt."Like seriously, he really is a butt, especially since he has one."I'm just your best friend Charlie..." I muttered silently, "I've been doing a great job about that since we were born, so no need to remind me you piece of garbage that smells and looks good."I pulled in one of the parking spaces outside the ice cream shop. I hopped out and did a short exercise to calm my nerves. What is it?10 seconds of Inhale-exhale exercise, of course! It works, big time.I inhaled through my nose, then exhaled through my nose.1.I did that step for another 9, making sure to get rid of that butt's face while doing so.At the number tenth, I smiled sadly, "Damn you. You didn't have to rub it in my face." I went back in my car, and with that, I
Last Updated : 2023-05-22The Suit Series (15) Story Telling By Me
"Hey...." I greeted Dean Castro silently, "How's it going?" I took a sit in front of him and smiled nicely.He looks like he's studying my every movement, so I made sure not to let the reason slip of why I'm late, show."You're late...." He raised an eyebrow.I may or may not cry for 20 minutes straight, but if I did, then it's for a reason."Yeah, sorry about that." I chuckled awkwardly.He frowned, "Your nose is red.""It is..." I nodded, opening the menu, and read it.Hmmm? Weird.I don't have the appetite for ice cream."Your eyes are puffy.""And you're stating the obvious." I chuckled awkwardly, closing the menu and raised my hand to order. Noticing the tall glass that's already empty with a used spoon in front of him, I asked, "Have you ordered?""... Yeah." He nodded, "And ate it too. Sorry, I thought you weren't coming."The young waiter walked towards us and asked for our orders."It's alright." I smiled at Dean, "Let's just order for you again. A little more wouldn't hurt y
Last Updated : 2023-05-22The Suit Series (16) Mr. Bean
So there's this transferee in my section, and he underestimates MY school. So I'm really pissed off right now. Like how dare he?Anyways, thank you for the votes, reads, and comments!Enjoy 😊~-~"Go on..." I muttered silently, taking a spoonful of ice cream in my mouth."So first grade, I met this really chaotic and crazy girl. She had this curly short hair, pale skin, and cheeks that turns red when it's hot. She was clumsy, noisy and yeah, she was pretty. I got really attracted to her for some reason." He grinned toothily, before looking down. "I knew she was younger than me, how? I was her brother's best friend.".... right..."I loved her, and I kept it in silence. Anthony, his brother, noticed my affection for her. He threatened me to end our friendship and cut my balls off if I ask her out." He raised his head and faced me, "I was ready to die for her, but I can't..." I paused for a moment, "put my friendship at risk with his brother. I want to be on good terms with him so that
Last Updated : 2023-05-22The Suit Series (17) Car Trip
OH MY GOSH.The first week of school was a NO.NO! Like there are already assignments, incoming quizzes, reports -Like aaaahhhhhh!-But since it's Saturday and I'm currently taking a break from making my power point, here's a chapter for ya 😊DEDICATING THIS TO EVERYONE! (update june 21, 2018 = I dedicate this too to @yellowpunksterbird hahaha, everyone deserves to receive a dedication~)Thanks for the votes and comments peeps! I appreciate it!Thanks for reading too 😊Enjoy 😊~-~"Although, I must say." He dropped my hands and shrugged awkwardly, "We need to keep this as a secret. Please don't tell this to anyone.""Sure.Sure." I grinned, brushing him off playfully. I grabbed my car keys from my front pocket and pointed at him, "We're going to her apartment right now.""Wha-?" He asked, "What do you mean-""Follow me, okay?" I stood up, paying for the food we ate, and left the shop."But I didn't bring my car-""Better." Turning around, I gave him a smile. "You're coming with me. W
Last Updated : 2023-05-22The Suit Series (18) Who?
And look who decided to update!Hi yo peeps! An update for you lovely people!It has been a really busy week. And yet I'm slacking off 😅 Thank you for the votes, comments, and shares!I LOVE YOU GUYS! Thank you!Enjoy 😊~-~My eyes fluttered open and immediately closed them again.Damn."Vanchel?"I blinked before settling my sight to Charlie. I watched silently as my perspective focuses on him, with a man behind him. Felipe?I sat up but immediately fell down.Have I been eating too much lately?"Stay, lie down." Charlie took my hand and was about to say something when I shook my head and told him that I want to sit up.Felipe walked towards us and pressed a button, making my bed to slowly sit up."Charlie..." It came out raspy, making me shut my mouth and tried swallowing some saliva."Here, here." He immediately sat up, grabbing something besides me -a cup. He gave it to me and with no objections, I drank the water."What happened?" I asked, wiping my wet mouth. I frowned when I
Last Updated : 2023-05-22The Suit Series (19) Hos P. Tal
Drama! Drama! Drama! 😁 Yay!I've got an update for you! Do you guys love me now? 😉Plus, I've learned that I have a Brazillian reader, it may be plural, or maybe not, but COMO ESTÂ, PATINHO?!And for all those Bangladesh people out there! TOMI KEMON ACCHO?! P.S, what do you call the people living in Bangladesh?P.S, I need a favor. What's I LOVE YOU in your language?example -> (Philippines - Mahal kita)THANK YOU GUYS FOR EVERYTHING, I LOVE YOU GUYS!Here's a new chapter, enjoy 😊~-~"So I was the one driving the car?" I asked, fixing the way I sit on the hospital bed."Yes.." Charlie nodded."And I was alone?""Yes..." Charlie nodded, something flashed in his eyes but that something was erased immediately.Oh..."Where was I going?""We don't know." He shook his head, "I don't know.""But... you're my best friend. I would've told you where I was going!""I..." Something flashed again and as usual, it went away immediately. "You've called me but I uh, haven't answered it.""Oh..."
Last Updated : 2023-05-22The Suit Series (20) Mr. Bean
Hi yo peeps! How ya doing?I'm doing fine! Except for the fact that my left eye power is 1,075 and my righ eye power is 950. My eye doctor told me to rest my eyes, so I did.That's why this update was late 😅THANK YOU GUYS FOR EVERYTHING! I LOVE YOU GUYS!ENJOY 😊~-~"Charlie-""Shh."I snapped my mouth shut and let him push me silently. He's currently driving the wheelchair I'm in. Yes, I'm that immature that I call it 'driving'.I stared ahead and pointed at my bedroom door. "Just go right the-""Shhhhh..." He hissed as we entered my room. "Hold on, I'll carry you.""Where's mom?" I whispered, "Is she here?""No, she's not." He whispered back, doing something with the wheelchair, and eventually, we came to a full stop.It's not that I'm still living in my parents' house, actually, I have my own small apartment. But my mom insisted on me staying here so that she could help me, and I told her that I'd leave as soon as possible."Oh.." I stood up and limped toward my bed."Hey, hey,
Last Updated : 2023-05-22The Suit Series (21) TV Show
Bringing my phone up, I asked Charlie. "Have you really moved everything from my old phone to this one?"Apparently, my most beloved phone broke in the accident, yeepee. But thanks to a certain golden boy here, aka Charlie, he said that he moved my back up to my new phone. Yay!"Yes, Vanch." He laughed, "And since I respect your privacy, I didn't look through it." He winked jokingly, "Although it was really tempting.""Good. I'm hiding rated r stuff." I joked playfully as he laughed. Looking back on my phone, I answered the call, "Beth?""... cakes that bake..." She whispered, "Is this really you, Vanchel?!""No." I snorted, "I'm just impersonating me.""Oh..." She paused for a while until she realized that I was being sarcastic since she shrieked, "OH MY GOSH, VANCHEL!""Hey!" I chuckled, switching my phone from my right hand to my left. "How's it going?""How am I doing?! How are you doing?!" She cried, "Is... is everything alright?! I heard that you got amnesia, do.. do you still r
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The Suit Series (20) Escalation
Okay, I've been doing my best to stall writing this particular chapter because I'm not ready -but I'm ready- to end my journey for this series. I'm just being a big sissy, really. Thank you so much for reading this, for all the votes and comments. Love lots Crazeeps ••-••-••-••-••-••~"Did she answer your calls yet?" I asked Elliot, who was busy pouting on my bed. "She still wouldn't." He groans, "It wasn't my fault that the phone connection was choppy.""Choppy?" I asked.He nods. "Choppy."Okay."Riley is probably busy tending her boyfriend's wounds, El." You know, the one you and your brother did. Because of a misunderstanding. Because of you.He sighs while shaking his head, "This is terrible.""Aww." I cooed as I sat down beside him and giving him a hug, "Don't feel too bad, it wasn't totally your fault," it's true! "Verizon should also take the blame."He rests his head on my shoulder, which has to be uncomfortable for him because he's tall. "You're the only one w
The Suit Series (19) The Sons of a Snake
"YOU TRAITOR!" Elliot pounces on my brother, obviously forgetting the fact that he's a police officer, and screeches from Riley, my mom, and El's were so loud that it made me go blind.Yes. You read that right."You seem calm," I told Vanchel without my eyes leaving the scene."Yeah," She sheepishly answered, "I've been in Charlie's fights in the Underground." She clears her throat, "This is nothing.""Ah." I nodded because I totally understand. The Underground is an illegal place that is located under the grounds of Denovan where fights happen. It has been there for decades. No joke. It's the same place where both my dad and El's used to fight too.Riley gasps as she tries to pull the men away from her now-husband, "What are you guys doing?! Stop this!"Jay, my twin who can totally handle himself because he actually does work in my parents' assassination company, tries -and fails- to block the hits coming from Charlier and Elliot. My dad and Reed are the ones doing the easy job of bl
The Suit Series (18) Popcorn
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The Suit Series (16) Questions
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The Suit Series (15) No, you.
"If you skipped the long butt author's note," Elliot whispers, "It's okay. I still love you.""And me too." Northon smiles alongside his brothers."To summarize the author's note though," I rolled my eyes because let's face it, Kryzel is being a little bit overdramatic, "The author just wants you to know that she appreciates you reading her work."Weston grinned cheekily. "And that she loves you!" "We," Easton flicks his glasses, "We all love you."-••-••-••-••-••-••~Losing something special can make an impact big enough to change a person's life. Sometimes, it takes losing something important to find something you have been unconsciously needing all along.In my case, this sometimes happened not too long ago. And this something? This something is my car. I may have lost my Lexus, but I did find Elliot. And he is something I need. I would have traded a hundred more Lexus to get back in the arms of Elliot Langston. I know I sound cheesy, but it is the absolute truth.Okay. Just to be
The Suit Series (14) Adorable
THIS IS GONNA BE REALLY SHORT. JUST A QUICK "I'M KIND OF BACK" UPDATE :)I will be writing chapter 15 later, or tomorrow lol. What do you guys prefer? Shorter chapters but daily (or 2) updates? Or Longer chapters but weekly updates? COMMENT HERE!Okay, I LOVE YOU GUYS! THANK YOU!💕💕Enjoy :)-••-••-••-••-••-••~"I can not believe that you have burnt my dollhouse." I murmured angrily while glaring at the three spawns of the devil in front of me. "I do not care who started it, and I do not care who did it -I just do not care."Easton coughs out awkwardly, "But-""No buts." I glared harder, "From now on, you guys are not allowed to enter my room."Northon's eyes widened as Weston whined loudly. "But it was just a dollhouse!""Well, that's true." I sighed while nodding, "Correction then, you are not allowed to go to my house."Both Easton and Northon groaned. However, Weston only sighed out in defeat. "Then, I guess only my brothers can visit you."I pursed my lips tightly and raised a g
The Suit Series (13) FIRE!
So for those who had read this book years ago, you would know that I've only been putting up old works (lol). But do not fret! Chapter 14 was the latest chapter before I took the chapters down, meaning, I will be writing Chapter 15 soon. OMG. I can't wait. New readers! WELCOME!Thank you so much Crazeeps ••-••-••-••-••-••~"HEY LOVEBIRDS!" I pulled away from Elliot and turned around to face West, who ruined the moment by the way. "So happy to see you all patched up after a century and all-""What?" Elliot asked impatiently, obviously annoyed. I giggled silently because I can not blame him. After all, we were in the middle of something.West screamed on top of his lungs, "THE HOUSE IS ON FIRE!""WHAT?!" I gasped out in shock and was frozen for a second. I heard Elliot take in a breath sharply before running to where my parents' house is.I felt goosebumps around my body and suddenly felt a little lightheaded. "W-w-what h-ha-happened..." I stammered out, "Why is the ho
