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Hello, my beautiful readers!

I hope you that enjoyed reading Violet and Caleb's story as much as I loved writing it! I always read stories where the main characters jump right in to a relationship, but haven't read many about the journey leading up to it. That is what I wanted to create. A book where my readers feel the emotions with the characters as they develop.

I've also heard a lot of feedback that epilogues should only include marriage, pregnancy/ child birth, or a proposal. I wanted a story that broke the norm. I wanted to create a story that was about the creation of a relationship with a look into their future without it being a stereotypical epilogue, so I gave bonus chapters instead. I hope you enjoyed.

Your feedback and comments mean the world to me. So, please leave the book a review or comment to let me know what you thought!

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Ashley Breanne
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Loyce Mtonga
I love it,I was actually looking for a book with a simple love story,boy meets girl,they fall in love, a bit of drama here and there but they work on it ...too much toxic relationships in this world we don't need them in books as well!
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leelee
I've read this book a few times.
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Armida Garcia Cudney
The story is good. But having an ending or epilog would have been even better. I guess if you keep on writing like this with no ending or epilog. Then, I won't read more of your stories.
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