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The Promise
Last Updated : 2021-08-20
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Promise- a big word alright. Craig Anderson, the guy who hates promises. "Promising, it's plane bullshit! Those were just word spewed by those people who loves to play with people's hopes." He hates all the people who made promises including this guy named Yukii Amon. But what made him to be like that? Because he was once promised too. A promise that change him to what he is right now. And who is Yukii ? Let's find out! Will you risk yourself, believing on a promise again? That promise that was once broken? Or was it really broken in the first place? Who knows.
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Yuki? Are you okay? Y-You did you drink? Yuki is panicking as he looks at Craig who's gritting his teeth while his hand is on his forehead. He's a bit red and he looked like he's in pain. Yuki immediately goes to him and holds his shoulder shakily. Craig shook him off which hurt him a lot but he chooses to ignore it and tend to him. Craig is not a drinker. He remembered that when things were still alright, they went to a bar together with his friends and Craig passed out after one bottle. Just how much did you drink Craig? Yuki asked worriedly. Craig holds out his hand as he showed how many bottles he drunk. Craig's hand rotated two times which irritated Yuki. Y-You! You drunk ten bottles? What were you thinking? You can't even finish a bottle before? Yuki stated half shouting but Craig just crunched his nose and roll his eyes. Shut up will ya? I can hold my alcohol just right. Besides what's t
Last Updated : 2024-10-29The Promise Author's Note
Hello, it's Jzey. I just want to say sorry to everyone who's reading this. I haven't updated these days because I have been busy. I am processing some things and I think it will take a lot of time. But I will update the moment I got my schedule back. Anyway, I will update a chapter today, it'll be the chapter after the 5th chapter 'Jealous' . I hope don't get confused. Also a heads up about the side characters and the special chapters about Pim and Jin. I have a different novel for them. For now, I'll focus on Craig and Yuki's story so I will have to stop spoiling their story but don't worry, I will touch them from time to time. Also about Pim's brother, Dimitri- we'll see about him. He may be the one for the love triangle or maybe not😉.
Last Updated : 2024-10-29The Promise Ryko, Lou, Yuki, JinxPim
" I heard about what happened from Lucas." "Why did you do that?" "You were stupid in that part." "Jin was so furious you know?" "Who wouldn't? If that were to happened to my girlfriend I'd be very angry, I'd kill this guy." "You don't have one though." "Shut up Ryko!" The latter just laughed and went to sit next to him. "So what now?" Yuki just looked at Ryko and didn't say anything. Even him doesn't know what he'd do now. "No plans, nor any ideas on what to do now? You giving up now?" Lou, his other friend asked him. Yuki just heaved a sigh and ruffle his hair. "You think he'll forgive me?" "About that, I think he wont--" "Shut up Ryko, you ain't helping. " Lou said stopping Ryko which made Yuki felt his world even crumble.
Last Updated : 2024-10-29The Promise Pim x Jin 2
Why would you say that? You're my boyfriend remember? Don't tell me you've forgotten about it- Of course not! Jin shouted cutting his words. I'm your boyfriend but I still can't help but get jealous everytime you mention other guy's name. And I Craig is not an exception okay? I also don't like you hanging around him especially because Yuki is hurting you. Pim can't help but smile. How can he find Jin cute. Okay that's enough you two, I might die if you don't stop. Shut up Skyler! You're just jealous! Jin retorted back while Pin just blushed, out of embarrassment. He didn't even realized that the school nurse is still there. You take home Jin, don't cover the school with hearts and sparkles. And please let him rest. R-E-S-T, REST! The school nurse said emphasizing the word rest, as if he's i
Last Updated : 2024-10-29The Promise PimxJin (Boyfriend)
Pim laid in the bed silently. He stared at the white ceiling and then hevaed a deep sigh. No matter, how much he think about it, he really can't understand why the Prez hated him so much. Is it because of Jin? Hey. And speaking of the devil. A few meters from him is Jin who looked so worried. I'm fine. Pim said assuringly as he give him the sweetest smile he can give. Jin on the other hand just heaved a sigh and walk towards him. Are you sure you're not hurt? Jin asked as he sat in the bed next to him. Pim just scratch his nape and smiled awkwardly. I'm hurt a little- but it's fine. It's just my knees. Pim assured Jin before he can even react. Jin looked frustrated as he ruffles his hair dramatically. I really hate Yuki right now. I wish I could unfriend him but I just can't. It it isn't for what he's feeling, I would beat him to death.
Last Updated : 2024-10-29The Promise I am Jealous
"I'm really sorry Craig." "Am I hearing things, or someone is really apologizing ?" "I think you're just hearing things, it's just you and me here." Dimitri said as they continue to walk if iring Pim who's following them like a puppy. "Craig come on! I'm sorry." Pim pleaded but Craig hang in there and still ignore him. Sorry is not enough. "But I'm surprised to how photogenic you are Craig. Our producer told me to tell you if you're interested to modeling. He said you'll have a good future with it." Dimitri stated making Craig's ear heat. No one's ever complimented him about being photogenic, outside the family. Of course, his brother told him that a million times. "N-Not really interested about it. " Craig stuttered which earn a chuckle from Dimitri. He was teased about it as they walked and only stopped when they heard Pim shout. "Hey! Watch whe
Last Updated : 2024-10-29The Promise Dimitri
The rooftop is filled with 'uwu's' and warm atmosphere. Pim is smiling from ear to ear as he look at him mouthing 'you can do it's. On the other hand, Craig is suffering.He's in the middle of the crowd, sitting in a piano. He felt betrayed and shy at same time. He was told to just sit there press any key. It does not matter wether it sounds good or not. It's just an act anyway. How did it come to this? Let's flashback a little.20 minutes earlier~After Craig's shamefuk action, he looked down and wished to be eaten by the ground.'Cute'.Craig's face flushed after hearing that. Everyone in rooftop's "aww" is heard as well as the laughter of the boys including Pim. He was about to walk away because of shame when Pim's brother caught his arm and stopped him."Where are you going?""lease let go, I'm going to class." Craig lie
Last Updated : 2024-10-29The Promise Pim's Brother
The school is noisy and the girls are talking and squealing as they talk. This is one of those days that Craig wished he wouldn't forget his headphones but yet here he is- trying to calm himself.His headphones were forgotten, he lost his earphones and his airbuds were taken by Pim. The only option he's left with is covering his ears which did not help either. And to make things worse, here comes the top one of his most hated person.Craig immediately looked around to find someone to use as an interruption for the incoming however, he does not have anyone closed to. He was thankful when he spotted Pim yet felt awkward at the same time. Fortunately, Pim was also looking at him and seemed to get what's happening. Pim stood up, walked towards him and grabbed his arms to walk out the room. They succeeded in doing so but the awkwardness got them."I'm sorry-"
Last Updated : 2024-10-29The Promise Pim and Jin/ WHY
A deep sigh escaped Pim's mouth as he laid on his bed. He's been wondering how totalk to Craig without feeling awkward. He wanted to say sorry to him but he seemed to be not in a good mood earlier. Craig had this dark aura sorrounding him that most of the students at the the campus did not dare to look at him.Then, there's the incident in the soccer field. It has something to o do about being threatened, atleast that's how he understand it ."I guess they're exes huh?" Pim blurted out as he stretched his body, on the bed.Though seriously, it isn't really obvious. Well, aside from theidea of Prez always calling for Craig to the SC Office. And there's the mark too. Pim heaved a sigh again. Thinking about the mark brought back the angry face of Craig earlier. He must have misinterpreted how he reacted earlier, which Pim want really to explain to but was never given a chance."Hey, what's with that dee
Last Updated : 2024-10-29
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'You'll stay with me right? You'll never leave me right?' He just smile at me making me snort. I then grab the neckline of his shirt and pull him close to me leaving a little distance between our faces. I can smell his minty breath and his lips was so close, so close that I'm distracted by it. But this is not important right now. It can wait.'You'll stay with me right? You won't leave like them right?' Pathetic? I don't care, I just want him to stay. I want him to stay with me no matter what.'I will stay with you, you know why?' He stated reassuringly as he smile sweetly. Damn, I really love that smile.'Come on, you're not gonna ask why?' He said as if he's demanding me to ask him why. That made me smile, really.'Why then?' I asked as I my eyes locked with his green ones. It was like that for a moment. Our eyes were locked with each other until he smiles cheekily heating my ears up. His
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The Promise by jzeyrose is an unconventional love story about youth. Craig Anderson hates people who do not keep their promises. He dislikes people who have this habit. His main nemesis is Yukii Amon. Craig's hate roots from the past with Yukii involved. He wants to forget it. What was their previous conflict? Why was Craig so hurt? Craig and Yukii are now at a crossroads again. Will they be able to stay together this time? Or it adds to the long list of unfulfilled promises on Craig's list?
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