“Wtf is this Mia wake up” Carl says as he taps her laps“Mia you’re bleeding!! are you okay?”“It’s not my blood Carl and how did this mess even happen?” Mia asksBut had already confirmed her suspicions after seeing Carl holding a letter“I know it’s your ex friend sister this is getting too much can’t she just leave us alone” Mia says as she held her tummy as if there were a baby in there“Mia I want to tell you something before it comes out from else where” Carl says Mia then stretches her hand out and holds his“Honey I guess was a bit too much at a time and that’s why you cheated on me, and am not saying what you did isn’t justified but I know running away with the kids isn’t right as well but now we have a new baby on the way and we can start afresh again”Mia says and left Carl speechless“I’m sorry honey for what I did to you I am a jerk and it wasn’t right of me” Carl says as he puts on a weird smirk on his faceIn his slightest thought mia would forgive him that easily“Mi
Here is the rewritten text in a more polished and refined tone:Carl's POV:As I watched my wife, Mia, struggle with her mental health, I felt my world crumbling around me. The memories of our passionate nights together now seemed like a distant dream. I was restless, consumed by the desire to put the person responsible for our struggles behind bars.My wife's condition was taking a toll on me, and at times, I found myself growing impatient. But I knew I had to be there for her, now more than ever.I was clueless about how to improve Mia's condition, but I knew I had to do something. The best idea I could think of was to send her back to Spain to stay with her mother and receive proper treatment.As I sat in a meeting, my mind wandered back to Mia. I was snapped back to reality by one of the managers."Have we concluded, sir, before we end the discussion?" he asked.I shook my head, trying to clear the fog. "End what?" I replied, realizing I had missed the entire discussion.The meeti
Here is the rewritten text with corrections and enhancements:Carl's POV:As I rushed back home, my mind was racing with thoughts of Fiona's disappearance. "What do you mean Fiona is missing?" I exclaimed, my anger and worry evident. "I just left the house a few hours ago, and now you're telling me this?"May, our house help, trembled as she explained, "I don't know where she went, sir. I saw her open the door, but I didn't think she would run away like that."I didn't waste any time. "I'm coming home right now," I said, already rushing and speeding through the roadsAs I drove, I scanned the roads, hoping to catch a glimpse of Fiona. And then, I saw her - a small, lonely figure sitting on the sidewalk, just a few blocks away from our home."Fiona, what are you doing here?" I asked, relief washing over me as I scooped her up in my arms."Daddy, I was coming to look for you and Mommy," Fiona said, her voice trembling.I smiled, trying to reassure her. "Awwn, baby, I told you Mommy had
Carl's POV:"Liam!" Carl cried out in horror as he watched his son roll roughly down the stairs. He rushed down the stairs quickly "Son, wake up! Speak to me, son!"It seemed Liam had passed out due to the hard fall. Carl then calls the driver, and they both picked Liam up and took him to the hospital while Fiona was already sound asleep in her room."Son, wake up," Carl said desperately to Liam, who was still unconscious.They then arrived at the hospital, and the doctor had to do something to revive him. Apparently, he had a severe shock to the heart when he realized he was about to fall down the staircase."Sir, I'm afraid your son's leg would be paralyzed for some period of months. But don't worry, we will be sending a nurse to supervise him and make sure he's back on his feet by all means," the doctor says, giving Carl hope and relief from the tension he felt"Can I go in and see him, or he isn't awake yet?" Carl asked as he checked his watch"I don't know, but I feel that he's
Mia's POV:"What the hell are you doing, Mia?" my mum said, her voice laced with shock and concern, as I looked up at her with shame in my eyes and one of my hands still down in my panties.When I looked up to see it was my mum, I buried my face in shame, quickly removing my hand from my p*ssy. I couldn't believe my mum had just caught me masturbating."Mia, next time you wanna do this, please close or lock the door. What if it wasn't me that walked in here? What if your brother did instead?" my mum said, trying to composed herself."You almost got me; I don't even know if I was worried or stunned," she continued."But, anyway, I was just going to tell you that breakfast is ready, honey. And, please, before you come downstairs, get on some new panties," my mum said, trying to lighten the mood, before leaving me feeling even more embarrassed.But I didn't mind all that. I was just eagerly waiting for the day I would go back to New York to see the love of my life and our kids.Somewhere
Carl's frustration reached a boiling point as he thought about Delilah's relentless harassment. "This lady is really getting on my nerves, but I don't know where she lives or where she even came from. Bullshit!" Carl yelled, his anger palpable as he picked up his phone to call Delilah. But at that moment, she didn't answer the phone."Oh, so when she calls and disturbs me with her incessant calls, I'll eventually pick up. But now, the dumb ass doesn't want to pick up. I don't want any lunatic person talking to my kids when I'm not present. Pick up, damn it!" Carl's anger reached a fever pitch.Back at Carl's home, his daughter ran towards him, wrapping her arms tightly around his waist. "Daddy, I don't know what's wrong with Liam. He's always angry by himself since the past few days. Maybe he's just missing Mommy.""Yes, baby, maybe it's Mommy that's why he's behaving like that. And, baby, I want you to promise me that no matter what, you will always love me," Carl said, struggling to
“Bunny, your baby's going to fall off your lap!" Mia yelled, dropping the trail mix she was holding and rushing to catch the baby before it could hit the ground."What's on your mind, Bunny?" Mia asked, concern etched on her face. "You seemed a million miles away.""Is my baby okay, Mia? Please don't mind me; there's just a lot going on in my head," Bunny replied, her voice laced with worry.The baby's cries pierced the air after hearing the sound of shattered glass."Hey, do you want to talk about what's bothering you, Bunny?" Mia asked calmly, sitting down beside her."Nothing's wrong, okay? Why don't you just focus on yourself and your own problems?" Bunny said abruptly, standing up and leaving immediately, as if Mia had offended her."That's weird," Mia muttered to herself, heading up to her room.Carl's POV:Oh man, if I don't get my mind back on my company and my partners, I'll lose a lot of deals.Third-person POV:Carl already knew it was time to bring Mia back home, but the p
“What could you possibly do to me, you’re such a good husband in deed by ordering the kidnapping of your own wife” the man says deviously as a weird smirk develops in his faceJust when the man and Carl continued to talk Mia woke up from her unconscious stateImmediately realizing where she wasShe quickly bites the man hand as he used it to cover her mouthMia runs with out looking back“Shit my hand this crazy woman bite my hand” the man then swung his hand in order to reduce the pain and begins to chase her down the stairs and into a nearby forest“Leave me alone who sent you, and what do you want to do to me you monster” Mia says as tears rolled down her cheeks as she runs ever deeper into the forest“I’m gonna get you and if I do your going to be sorry alright” the man says to himself as he ran after her even faster, his pace becoming an equal with hers “Somebody help me anybody, Carl!”“Someone please come to my rescue”Mia shouts in tears as the chase continuedShe then stop
falls down on his back,All he thought of was to runaway,Carl had already frightened the daylight out of him, people stared and tried to get him up but he refused,“You were screaming for help not to long ago now you are behaving adamantly, just go to heck”, said angrily by one of the strangers that walked passed by the street.“Ohh my goodness I gotta go,The young man stood and began to quickly run away the moment he sighted Carl and his son coming.“Hey stop there am not gonna hurt you I promise, I just want to give pay your money, apologies and also thank you for bringing my son back to us safe and sound”, Carl says with a forced grin on his face.“No you can keep the money, as long as I knew that I meant no harm am good sir, the you cab driver pushes the hand Carl brought forward to give the man his money.“No please accept it, and if it is about what happened inside early don’t mind me I guess I overreacted just a little bit, Carl says.Carl stood at the edge of the driveway, w
But the man refused to let him go, “you are gonna get hit,We can’t catch up with them, it’s to late.“Let me just take you home okay, then there will still be time for your parents to go to the police station and file a case with the description you will be providing.“Sir, Liam said with his voice low.The man pulled him into his not so new kind of car and took him home, the fear of getting himself in trouble.Both Liam and the taxi driver arrived at the mansion and Liam busted through the door, grabbing Mia and Carl’s attention, Mia’s heart skipped when she saw her son in a distressed look and their personal driver and Fiona were nowhere to be found.“Liam where is your sister, and why didn’t you wait for the driver to go pick you both from school, Carl asked.Before Liam could utter a word, the taxi driver walked in behind him inorder to collect the his money, Carl who had already began to assume the worst, and without any hesitation he went ahead and grabbed the young man’s colla
“What do you mean, she can’t be sick she has a childYour child I mean” Mia’s forehead folds as she continued to speak“She is sick and if not attended to properly she could lose her life”“Am sorry Aiden but that’s not my problem, that’s between you and bunnyI just want out of all this okay, Mia says“Why what’s wrong I thought you really cared for and that you two were really closeSo why did your tone and the way you were speaking to me change as soon As I mentioned bunny’s name”, Aiden curious, he asked in order to clear the doubts he had in his head.“There’s a lot you don’t know about, and I don’t think I would ever tell anyone about what happened or what she tried to do to me,I still have some respect for her and wouldn’t want to spoil her name just because of her baby”mai uttered while she began to fold her hand in to a fist.“You can tell me Mia, remember we use to be close friends in the past, but just tell me since I was once bunny’s husband, so I demand you tell me”“Sh
“What do you mean, she can’t be sick she has a childYour child I mean” Mia’s forehead folds as she continued to speak“She is sick and if not attended to properly she could lose her life”“Am sorry Aiden but that’s not my problem, that’s between you and bunnyI just want out of all this okay, Mia says“Why what’s wrong I thought you really cared for and that you two were really closeSo why did your tone and the way you were speaking to me change as soon As I mentioned bunny’s name”, Aiden curious, he asked in order to clear the doubts he had in his head.“There’s a lot you don’t know about, and I don’t think I would ever tell anyone about what happened or what she tried to do to me,I still have some respect for her and wouldn’t want to spoil her name just because of her baby”mai uttered while she began to fold her hand in to a fist.“You can tell me Mia, remember we use to be close friends in the past, but just tell me since I was once bunny’s husband, so I demand you tell me”“Sh
“Ohh my goodness”Carl sat across from Delilah, his fingers clenched around the edge of the table.In Carl’s mind, there was only silence a deep, suffocating void as Delilah leaned forward and whispered the words that shattered his entire world, words that made his dark past flash before his eyes“I want you to tell the whole world what you did to Mia before you married her” she said, her voice smooth almost amusedDelilah wasn’t doing that to get justice for mia or anything, but just to embarrass him or even get him arrested for a while.And anyways that could also make his business go down the drain as well,But Carl was left speechless for seconds and couldn’t think straight at the moment“Tell them how you raped her, you were really a monster”.Carl's breath caught in his throat.His entire body stiffened, and for a moment, he could only stare at her, his pulse hammering in his ears The air felt thick, suffocating.Then, barely above a whisper he choked out, “why will you tell me
For a second there Mia’s heart nearly skipped a beat, her eyes widened and she tuned sharply to look at him, her stomach twisting at the same time.But before she could react Carl’s entire demeanor collapsed. His breath hitched sharp and uneven like he had been thrown into ice water, his hands shut up to his ears and pressing against his skull as if he was trying to block out a deafening noise only he could hear.“No…no no no”, Carl muttered under his breath, and shook his head violently. His chest rising and falling really quickly.Mia’s own pulse was racing nkw and her eyes darting between Carl and the phone phone still vibrating on the nightstand.“Carl”, she called softly stepping closer it seemed he didn’t hear her“Carl” she called again and firmer this time, reaching out to touch his armHe flinched, his entire body jolting as if her touch burned.Mia swallowed hard and turned her attention to the phone, the screen was still lit and the call coming throughBut when she saw the
The sharp call call sliced through the moment like a knife,Mia instinctively turned her head, her gaze snapping toward the voice.Carl’s grip loosened, and the ring slipped from his handA soft gasp rippled through the crowd as the diamond tumbled in slow motion.Then…clickThe ring hit the floor.The voice that had called Mia’s name was still hanging in the air, waiting.Who ever it was, they had just shattered the perfect moment.Mia’s breath hitched as her gaze snapped towards the voice.Jackson santavo!Her stomach twisted.He stood there looking completely at ease in the crowd, a half smirk on his lips as if this were just another casual night.As if she hadn’t told him never to speak to her again.Mia’s heart racing, a rush of memories colliding all at onceThe stolen purse, the betrayal and the way she had turned her back believing that was the last time she’d ever have to hear his name,yet here he was.And then the second realization hit her like a tidal wave.He wasn’t just
What do you think that you are doing?!, Mia yelled the moment she saw her husband lifting up his plate of food, and for a moment she watched him as he flung his food awayMai stood there frozen and staring at the mess on the floor,the plate had shattered and food splattered everywhere.Her hands trembled not from fear but form frustration and her feelings were hurt.“Carl!” She called after him, her voice breaking as she hurried up the stairsShe reached for the door handle but it wouldn’t budgeHe’d locked it.“Are you serious right now, Mia’s voice cracked as she spokeHer heart racing as she rests her head on the door,“Carl, honey open the door am sorry okay, I don’t know why you are taking out all your frustration on meAnd you even went far in throwing away Mia food i could with love.Meanwhile Carl sat angrily on the bed and listened to his wife as she continued to speak at the other side of the door,His frustration and ego brushed aside, a wave of guilt washed over him as soo
Carl’s pov… I dropped the necklace back in the case it was placed in Delilah snorted, I rolled my eyes. “Here you can have it” I answered through clenched teeth. “I don’t want it anymore, it’s old fashioned anyways I can bet Your wife wouldn’t have liked it as well, you can count on me on that, Delilah made sure of placing her hand on her chest and sent me a wink, “For the love of God Delilah is so frustrating! At this rate, I could get a heart attack before I even reach home” I yelled as the wind whipped against my hair harshly. At Carl Gonzalez’s mansion.. “Honey I’m home”, I said loudly and my wife comes downstairs in a haste just to welcome me. Mia then helped me to take off my jacket then went ahead to drop it on the chair “You are back so early, is there anything wrong” The sunlight peeked through the window and reflected through the mirror and treasured her face and left me in awe until she turns around to glance at me. I tore my eyes away quickly not w