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Chapter 14

Author: hajjdj
last update Last Updated: 2021-06-23 17:08:12

One o'clock came, she got a message from Max he was parked down stairs. Grabbing her bag and having one final look in the mirror she left her apartment and went down stairs. Max was waiting leaning on  his car looking gorgeous as ever. His black pants, white shirt with his tie hanging around his neck and messy hair just made my heart go crazy.  

I was ready to tell him off when he cupped my face in his big hands and kissed me.  I would of fallen had he not helled  me.  " Hello beautiful " he's said as he opened the door. I turned to look at him and he kissed me again. I shock my head at him and was about to say  " Max" but before I could finish he said " Every time you look at me with those beautiful big brown eyes I'm going to kiss you! So we can stay here all day and I'll just have to keep kissing you, I don't mind."   

I shook my head and started to laugh as I got into the car.  He makes me so happy.  He is so into my head. Please God don't let me fall in love with him.   

We drive for about fifteen minutes, not speak but he held my hand in his lap. It gave me butterflies in my stomach I didn't want that feeling to end.  

Arriving at our destination, we got out of the car I looked up into the building we were about to enter and stopped. " The Design House by Evangelical " Max I can't go in there it's to expensive I can't afford this." I said   

Totally ignoring me he pulled me into the building, we got into the elevators which was the size of my whole apartment. I looked around it was all made of glass going up the levels the view was wonderful you could see so far. I wanted to stay and look when I noticed Max looking at me, I stared into his eyes, my face flushed he leaned down and kissed me so slow so softly, my hand went to his cheeks and held him to my face,  I was enjoying the kiss when the doors had already opened and a lady was leaning against them.  

"Ahem Maxy" she said  

I pulled away from him, so embarrassed at being caught, But the beautiful lady, staring at us,  was as tall as Max she so elegant and dressed so casually.  

He hugged me and laughed then took my hand and gave the lady who was called Carolyn a big hug and kiss. After he introduced me she gave me a hug and kiss and told me not to be shy. I liked her straight away but stayed closer to Max.  

She spoke to Max for a few more seconds told him to wait in the waiting room, took my hand from his and pulled me after her. We sat down at her desk. She got out her pencil and started drawing she was actually going to design me a dress. I looked at her drawing she asked me what I liked. I was quiet and she looked up at me saw my eyes tearing she passed me a tissue and said " what's wrong, " "nothing, but this is not for me"  I said.

"Why" she said as she folded her arms and looked at me.  "I can't wear anything like what you have on display. I'm not a sexy person and me and Max well it's not going to last.  I'm not his type.  He needs to be seen with someone like you so pretty and elegant. I didn't even want a dress I have heaps.  I ... "  she cut me off and said again "Why"    I looked at her lost but she continued.  " I've know Max for years since our Uni days and I have never seen him look at anyone in the five minutes that  I saw him looking at you. He loves you and you love him. I can tell.  Stop shaking your head at me and stop being in denial. I can tell in your eyes and the way you just sitting here!  Yes your out of you league but Max is a wonderful human and women would give an arm and a leg to trade places with you. Now tell me how you want me to design this sexy dress for you.

Now you need two dresses one for the twenty first and one for his father's birthday. Yes? "  "No " shaking my head  as she was saying "Yes"  She continued drawing. She showed me and I gave up on arguing so I said ." No " I'd like the back all covered. She looked at me.  She showed me the front low cut in a V shape I said " No I need it to cover up to my neck like this " pointing  to my skivvy.  She stared at me and shook her head.  Carolyn stood up and pointed towards the fitting room and told me to take my clothes off so she can take my measurements and leave my panties and bra on.  I looked at her and said "No just take the measurements like this". " how am I supposed to do that I won't ruin my design by doing the wrong sizing. Now strip!" She said. I walked towards the fitting room and took of my clothes I was staring at the mirror in my crappy unmatching bra and undies. As I heard the fitting room door opening I lowered my head when I heard her gasp. I'm so embarrassed and ashamed my tears started to spill down my cheeks. She stood staring at me but I could see her by looking at the mirror. "Now you know why I don't want anything to do with him, but he won't let me." She turned me around and I saw tears in her eyes. She just hugged me so hard. I had never had another person hug me like that like a mother figure.  She made me cry.  Pulling back she wiped my cheeks from the tears and said I'm going to design one of the best dresses I had ever made. You will be a knockout at both parties. I laughed at her, still shaking my head.

 She took my measurements and said you have a hell of a sexy body.  

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Although this is not based on a true story, it did happen to a very dear friend of mine. I’ve exaggerated a little but it’s very true a lot of children are forgotten in the system.

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