THE HIDDEN PIECE : MOVING FORWARD IN THE EYE OF THE STORM

THE HIDDEN PIECE : MOVING FORWARD IN THE EYE OF THE STORM

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By:  OGECHUKWU AKAGU  Completed
Language: English
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The Hidden Piece is a creative fictional story about the life of a young girl with a promising future. Faced with many life challenges that she didn't handle well, she had regrets and wished she behaved differently. Each phase of her life contended to activate her inward strength when confronted with these challenges, but she easily gave up which almost affected her dreams and aspirations. The only required tool to push through her difficult moments was using the power of her mind, which was also the strong force opposing her progress. This story is highly recommended for young adults searching for headway through life storms.

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CHAPTER ONE

THE MISERY'Life might look complicated, yet it's pretty simple. Had I learned anteriorly how to meander my way through life, possibly I wouldn’t have been where I am right now…’"Mummy! Mummy!! Mummy!!!" My heart skipped a bit when I heard Zara yell out my name in a manner that presumed risk. She had been calling until the third time that halted my whimsical mind from its incessant chattering. ‘I hope it’s not what I'm supposing…,’ I rushed out towards her voice, switching from the racing deliberations that jostled for room in my head, back to reality.My life would have been filled with regrets if I hadn’t retraced my pathway

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Julia Nora
such a great work..i really like it! by the way, do you have any socmed that i can reach out?
2021-08-04 19:58:37
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innocentisong
Excellent read so far. Ogechi is evolving into a master storyteller...
2021-03-18 16:49:40
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Chidot
Lovely story
2020-12-13 01:23:11
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Ronan
a promising story, love the first few chapters. ❤️
2020-12-11 17:02:19
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Innocent Isong
Great story and storytelling
2021-04-07 20:01:37
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27 Chapters

CHAPTER ONE

                                                               THE MISERY 'Life might look complicated, yet it's pretty simple. Had I learned anteriorly how to meander my way through life, possibly I wouldn’t have been where I am right now…’ "Mummy! Mummy!! Mummy!!!" My heart skipped a bit when I heard Zara yell out my name in a manner that presumed risk. She had been calling until the third time that halted my whimsical mind from its incessant chattering. ‘I hope it’s not what I'm supposing…,’ I rushed out towards her voice, switching from the racing deliberations that jostled for room in my head, back to reality. My life would have been filled with regrets if I hadn’t retraced my pathway
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CHAPTER TWO

                                                      MY MOTHER'S WOES  Sarah lost her parents at age two to a fatal car accident, leaving her as the only survivor. Following the tragedy, her maternal grandmother took over the parental responsibilities and brought her up in a pretty humble background. They both made a living by selling home-made packaged food to labourers at various construction sites. Although her grandmother couldn’t provide her with all the luxury, Sarah believed her parenting style was the best thing that happened to her after her parents’. She provided her with love and care, instilling the moral values that have helped to improve her Christian life. Like some say, ‘Good things don’t last forever, life is all about suffering!’,
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CHAPTER THREE

                                                      THE SADDEST DAY The news about my mother's pregnancy got Daddy hyperactive. He has been all smiles and someworth mouthy, always talking about his fantasies with his baby: how beautiful he imagined it would look and boasted about how great and endearing a father he'd be to his children. He would keep talking and talking that it got Mum cracking up at some point. She'd hold her stomach out of pain because she had laughed so hard that she'd beg him to stop to avoid hurting the baby, and after a while, he'd start suddenly again like someone out there pressed his remote-control button. He can be that fay and full of fun. It was always charming to see Mum's face lit up each time she talked about
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CHAPTER FOUR

                                                                                                               LIFE IS CRUEL The following morning, I woke up to bright exterior sunshine that lit up my room. It shone on my face so brightly that it got me squinting the moment I tried opening my eyes. I bent my head to shield my face as I turned away from the direction of the sunrays. As I moved, I felt a pulsating pain in my temple which I supposed must have been from last night's cry. I held my
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CHAPTER FIVE

                                                         THE FAMILY RIFTS Mum didn’t press charges against my paternal family for sure reasons best known to her. We had to move to a faraway, remote area in Uttar Pradesh, to start out life afresh. I remembered vividly how she told me the story about what happened after Daddy’s family got the news about his demise... “This may be a bad omen! My family has mixed itself with hostility. I actually have never liked her a touch from the very first day Aadi introduced her to us. She has this inexplicable dispelling presence, and now she has killed my son together with her witchery. Darling, please visit the seer before she comes for us, one after the other. Visit him to guide us on the way to set about the cleansi
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CHAPTER SIX

                                                      LET PEACE LEAD My grandfather received the Letter of Administration as the legal heir to my father’s assets a few weeks later. The next hurdle was to find out where my father lived before his demise. But it wasn’t easy for Grandpa, who became frustrated and angrier at some points. With the likes of aunt Adhira nudging him on, he persevered with his search. Three months later, Adhira came with the news of figuring out where we lived, after sighting my mother at a supermarket and trailing her to my father’s house in Delhi. Seeing her going in and out of the house many times, she knew she had come to the end of her search. Soon my grandparents knew about it. Everyone was glad about the good news and flung into actio
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CHAPTER SEVEN

                                                                                                              The Power of WordsI relaxed on the bed, amazed at how many sales we made. Mum’s spoken words of positivity for good sales before we left the house had brought us good fortune. Unlike other days, I didn’t strive for buyers to patronise us. They just walked right to us, despite calls from other sellers with more attractive food items. ‘Mum is a rare breed!’ I thought aloud. Before we left for the market, she talked about taking charge of my thoughts, and not allowing Daddy's demise and loss of inheritance affect my t
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CHAPTER EIGHT

                                                            The Dream  One morning, I sat on the edge of the mattress with my elbows on my knees and my face in the palms of my hands, as I tried to create the strange dream, I had last night…  'I passed by a crowd of people inside and outside, crying and cursing God for taking the life of a man and his wife after the death of their four children who died mysteriously, six years ago. I kept wandering without stopping when I heard a loud voice say, "People are quick to call me many inappropriate names for something they think scares them. But the truth remains that I am the Alpha and the Omega; They are my children and I love them. Their work on Earth is finish
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CHAPTER NINE

                                                                                                                            FAMILY COMES FIRST  News about my scholarship reached me and I couldn’t contain my joy, as I screamed and jumped all over the place out of excitement. Months later, I was posted to Delhi Public School in Delhi. On getting my admission card, I was happy and sad at the same time. I was happy because of my admission, and sad, because of the distance of the school from Uttar Pradesh where we lived, but which was quit
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CHAPTER TEN

                                                              THE VISITThe mission of reconciliation to my paternal home in Mumbai turned out in the manner we least expected. On sighting Grandma from afar, Mum knelt down, touching her ears as she moved on her knees from the gate to where she was, begging for mercy in tears. Her knees bruised as she moved along, desperately in need of peace. It would take the devil himself to be unmoved at the sight of this scene. Grandma never saw this coming, as she was motionless throughout and quite difficult to tell her next line of action. Mum was obviously in pain, and I hated to see her in that manner. I gently wiped away the tear that dropped my cheek. When she got to her, she bowed and touched her feet, kissing them
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