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Author: Nyx Rai
last update Last Updated: 2024-10-31 10:17:09

Hey Guys!

I finished a batch of modifications today, and sorted out some issues and the pace of the story.

The chapters with "[Mod]" mean content in that chapter is changed; Two chapters have "[Add]" in front of them, I moved things around and paced up, cut out two chapters of redundant stuff, and added them. (So no extra charges are needed, and you can see the new content as of now).

Hope the modification makes more sense, and hope new readers can enjoy the fixed ride!

Nyx

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Andrea Warren
right wth??
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Trish An Thomas Irvin
i think this is ridiculous give your readers a little credit . I think we all know what is going on in the story we didn't need modifications. We need new chapter to see how the story is going to end .
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Joan Martin
,I'm beginning to dislike this app. at least, possibly, 4 of the stories. I am reading , have been serialized and it's been days since I have seen a new chapter. It is seriously pissing me off.
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