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The Big Reveal
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2024-10-29 19:42:56I don’t know what I am doing anymore…I feel my life is totally out of control…Maybe I should move back home…Things between me and Josh are a total mess and I don’t think that a normal relationship is possible at all anymore…I really do miss him…guess there goes another failed plan.
I suck at making plans!
Becca ~”Sammy I am leaving now, will s
Tatum_WhispersDear Reader Thank you for reading the first chapter of the book called, My Perfect Mess. The Perfect Mess was originally written as an Interactive Story Game. I am in the process of adapting it into a novel form. The original version contains a great deal of dialogue to fit the platform for which it was intended. I beg you to please be patient as the book is turned into a novel. Though you can enjoy the story in its interactive format too as currently published. Let me know what you think, of The Perfect Mess. Happy reading, Tatum Whispers
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