Disclaimer.Just a disclaimer, I'm not too good with grammar, I've had tons of complaint about it and I correct where I can. But the story is good, I hope it captures you as much as it captured me. EnjoyPrologueHere's an extended version of your scene, now at 500 words:---Gavin’s grip tightened around Fernanda’s arm, his response to her defiant remark swift and unyielding. He pulled her closer, his arms winding around her slim waist, trapping her in a moment thick with tension.“Why did you come all the way up here with me?” His voice was low, but his gaze bore into hers, searching for an answer she seemed unwilling to give. Without waiting for her response, his lips descended on hers, fierce and demanding, as if he couldn’t afford to wait another second. Fernanda, caught entirely off guard, froze beneath the force of his kiss. Her heart raced, but she couldn’t deny the electric heat spreading through her body. His lips were a fire she hadn’t expected, and soon, she couldn’t fight
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