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YOUTHFUL MISTAKE twenty fourth
In Senegal many men want to marry women who have abstained until marriage and yet they are the ones who deviate women before marriage. So girls must be very careful because rare men who agree to marry a girl not a virgin, even if they agree, they won't hesitate to judge you all the time.Virginity, a very sensitive subject, In Africa, more particularly in Senegal, the virginity of a young girl is linked to the honor of her family: "When the young girl carries virginity within her, it is the virility of children males and the virginity of other women, members of her family, that she carries"...that's what we tend to say in Senegal.So some women are forced to abstain until marriage so as not to sow dishonor within their family or even more so to be respected by her husband because we say it or not keeping your virginity until marriage can be apprehended as a sign of good education. However, we really have to be careful and even the problem of virginity must remain between the two s
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE twenty five
It has now been two weeks since Kiné confessed everything to Mansour, kiné confessed everything to him even in relation to the video.Sophia had since gone to Mauritania to one of her uncles.Abdou and Doudou we haven't heard from them since that day.It was ten o'clock, Physio was easily lying on her bed talking on the phone with Sophia.- I miss you seriously my best friend... she said- To believe that you wanted me out of your life at some point… said she laughing- Please forget that, you don't have to remind me every time, life is so unpredictable but God has decided that we will always be together so let's forget this misadventure.- Ok ok, and Abdou, I hope he doesn't tire you anymore?- I can't hear him anymore and he has an interest, is he even living..., said Kiné laughing.-No, we went hand in hand with them, when I imagine the scene, I laugh until I have stomach pains....said Sophia laughing harder-They deserved it- What if they still have our videos?- Do you still thi
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE twenty six
"Lou bakh dagn siye gaw" you have to be quick when it comes to a good thing.- Physio, don't you think it's better that we get married now, I don't see the reason, to wait, don't you think?-Mansour, are you sure of what you want to do?- Why this question Kiné, I love you, you know it then no need to ask me, I am more than ready, Fatou Kiné Diop you are the most beautiful thing that has happened to me in this life, you are this light that illuminates the daily life of my life and radiates to the rhythm of my family each time, Physio you are the most wonderful woman in the world in my eyes, without you I do not see my life continuing, you are this part of my life that without her I become an empty carcass, the queen of my heart is you and know that I live for you, you are this pretty woman so innocent and full of mystery that I want to discover every morning. Kiné Diop will you marry me Do you want to continue this path with me our hands entwined against each other? Do you want to
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE twenty seven
Some past are always linked to the present and the future of the person.People never forget a dark past but sometimes forget a happy past, such is life.- I'm going to publish their videos....said Abdou serenely-What videos? They deleted them- You think I'm brainless like you, I'm not as crazy, I have copies of their videos in my computer, eye for eye tooth for tooth, it's time I give them back their coins.- Are you crazy or what, you forget that Sophia rubs off my video.- The video where you get sodomized by a minister… he said laughing.-At least I got sodomized by a heterosexual man but not by a gay man in the truest sense of the word, you fell so low sleeping with that rotten Samba kassé.- Don't judge me, I had no choice, I had to do it otherwise I would be unmasked, he knew I was selling drugs and I didn't want to end my life behind bars, at least I did made to protect me but you sold your body to a man for money as if you lacked it- I didn't have it for money, it was jus
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE twenty height
Life can sometimes seem unfair, we think we are happy and all of a sudden everything falls apart with the snap of a finger.Abdou was more than determined to publish Kiné's videos."I have to post her videos without her having proof that I posted them, I have an idea, I'm going to buy myself a brand new phone and a sim card and I'll I'll throw it away after publishing them."... Abdou said to himself, smiling in his armchair."Don't forget that Kiné has your video having sex with Samba kassé"...a voice whispers in his head."She won't for fear of ending up in a mess, I know what I'm talking about"...he replies"Beware of a wounded woman, the last time it went badly so be very careful Abdou"... another voice whispers in his head"I don't give a shit and please shut up, I don't want to hear you"....Abdou shouts very loudlyIt is at the same time that Doudou returns to the apartment.- Ah, I knew you were going to come back, you can't stay even a minute without me, I know you can't live
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Twenty Nine
A mother's heart bleeds when she sees her child on the wrong path or her child screwing up his own life before his very eyes.This is the case of Abdou with his mother- Unworthy child, what haven't I done for you, that's what you're thanking me for Abdou, what don't you have at home that you came here to look for, you have money, I gave you everything, everything Abdou, I sacrificed myself all my life for you my children and you in particular my only son.- Mom, you're talking about money, money doesn't buy happiness, I didn't need your money, it's you I needed, your presence, my father's presence, but what were you doing, always between two planes, how many times did I celebrate my birthday alone, how many times did I need to talk with my mother, with my father, to spend time with them but we were not there ,everything you didn't give me, the street gave it to me-Abdou!!!- And yes, it's because of you that I'm like that, I went to a nightclub for the first time because I had no
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE thirty
Life is so unpredictable and filled with ups and downs, life is never rosy, people who are unhappy or who regret their past sometimes kill themselves, is this a reason to commit suicide?- Mom dad!!!- Where are the good manners my daughter, you can't knock before entering- Doudou killed himself- WHAT !!!Suicide? What can drive a person to kill themselves?Author's Note: I've googled the various causes of male suicide, so I'm sharing them with you before continuing with the storytelling.“Every 40 seconds someone commits suicide somewhere in the world. Most often, it is men who end their lives because, in part, some of them do not tell their loved ones about their problems and worries. BBC Africa takes a look at World Suicide Prevention Day today. If you feel depressed or suicidal, please consult a healthcare professional.Suicide is the act of consciously killing oneself most often, taking death as a means or as an end. Durkheim proposed in 1897 that we call suicide “any case
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE thirty one
A person's death should always be meant as a moral lesson to those still living, a warning to change course if you are on the wrong track before death strikes.Death is at the end of everything, it can come at any time, anytime and anyhow, it always hits us hard.She's the only thing that has no remedy, she's the only thing that we can't fight, preparing our heavenly abode is a very good thing, let's spread the good before death strikes us, let's repent if we're on the wrong path before our call to heaven. Its very important.Life on earth is only a passage on earth and sooner or later we will return to where we came from.Abdou's family had just knocked on the door of his apartment.- What are we doing here? Since when Abdou moved?.... asks the father of the family to his wife- You don't know your son well then but it's not the time for all that, I'll tell you more even if I doubt that you want to believe me.- It's weird, a friend told me to see Abdou often in this building but
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So here we are at the end of this volume 1, it was not at all easy to write more than sixty thousand words in less than a month but we got there anyway and it's partly thanks to you, Writing an online story can seem easy and exciting when you have great readers reading it.So why the title?The title is for me an auspicious title that sums up the whole story, Physio and Sophia were fooled by youth, by fashion, by their beauty, they crunched the pleasures of life without thinking about their future, their story is a perfect version of what many young girls experience, through this title I wanted to show that many girls are fooled by youth, it is a very important moment in the life of a person who may have reflected in our present and our future, we really have to live it consciously and in moderation otherwise regrets will take place in the present or the future.How do you choose character names?I take the names of the characters according to my entourage, in general I take the na
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Fourthy three
Fear of losing a loved one, fear of losing the woman who gave birth to you, fear of losing the woman you married and gave you children.- The patient is fine, we managed to keep her alive but her condition is still unstable, avoid stressing her.- God be praised...they said while breathingMore harm than fear, Physio's mother was fine.Half an hour later, Khady and his father were at his bedside.- Call my physio daughter, I want to see her, she needs me... she said in a low voice.- All right, she'll come, don't worry.So they went outside- Dad, physiotherapists really have to come and see mum- No way, I don't want to see this girl here, I don't want to see her even in painting.- It's about mom's health anywayHe thinks for a moment before approving.- Go call her- Ok, I will call MansourThis is how she dials the number of Mansour who picks up on the second ring.-Hello yes Khady- Mansur- I hope everything is fine ?- Mom is in the hospital- Hospital !!!- Yes and she asks to
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Fourthy two
-Physician was raped Tata, she is innocent- RAPED!!!.... she screams in shock- And yes it is the sad reality, listen to his version of the facts first please- You're talking about rape there Sophia, no no I can't believe it, it's not possible, my daughter can't be a victim of rape without my knowing it.- Tata it's the truth- Ah no no..... she said still in shock- You all think that she gave herself to a man, that she is a wanton but I would tell you the opposite, Physio always wanted to keep her virginity for the man who deserved it, for her husband, she wanted keep it for herself but especially for her daughter especially you, her mother, she wanted to make you proud, she didn't want to dishonor you in any way, it's true that she went to clubs, she drank alcohol, she didn't never wanted to give herself to a man, she had the ultimate conviction to be a virgin for her wedding night but alas everything happened different, they snatched from her in the worst possible way what she
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE fourthy one
A pregnancy after a rape, what could be harder?- Physio you are pregnantThis phrase buzzed in Physio's ears like the sound of bees in the hive.-What!! What are you talking about?....she asks, unable to analyze the situation- I'm sorry to tell you but after your suicide attempt the doctor told me that you are pregnant and that the baby is doing wonderfully-Ah no no it's not possible, I can't get pregnant, tell me it's a joke, no it must surely be a joke Mansour but know that your joke is in bad taste .... she said not believing his ears.- Physio listen to me.... he said taking both her hands- I'm listening to you- I knew it since your hospitalization, I didn't know how to tell you but today I had the courage to tell you because you are the main one concerned-Ah no no it's not possible, tell me it's not.....said she shouting, holding Mansour's shirt collar- Calm down, don't hurt yourself.- I can't get pregnant, my life is crazy for good.... she said sobbing- I am here and
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE fourthy
Life is so unpredictable, we sometimes think we are coming to the end of our ordeal when it is we are just at the beginning of our ordeal. Dignity, it is sacred, we can lose everything and be respected, but dignity when you lose, you also lose self-esteem and the esteem of others. Some people did not ask to lose their dignity but their dignity was trampled on in the worst way. The girl is called to be a mother so everything she does, she must think about the future of her future offspring because the youth of a woman can harm the future of her child and no woman on earth would like to be pointed at her child so crunch the pleasures of youth in moderation, an excess could be a fatal error. boy is called to be a father so he must learn to behave well from his youth to then be able to educate his offspring. Youth is a great time, a good memory as long as we lived it with conscience .Youth is a bad memory as long as we have lived it without conscience. Do not let yourself be lulled b
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE thirty nine
Love is sometimes very complicated, it is supposed to be sweet, exciting but sometimes it is the opposite. This is the case when we see the loved one suffer..Physio's mother was in her room still crying when she received a visit from her older sister who lives not far from her home.- Good evening… she said- Good evening my sister....said wiping her tears to then show that she is strong.- Diaroul fompou, dioyal, there's no need to hide your pain from me, but know that all this is your fault.... she said taking her seat.- You too don't say that, I never wanted my daughter to behave like one- And yet, she did it, it's all your fault, you let Physio do what she wants and now here is the result, she spends all her nights in nightclubs, everyone knows it , everyone knew her vulgar, everyone knew that she didn't have good company but to show off like that naked, her video was even seen by the little ones, it's shameful, it's is the reputation of a whole family that is shameful, you
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE thirty eight
Suicide, how could we analyze it, when someone does it we say he's a coward but sometimes our mind tells us to do it.Kiné was still alive, Mansour immediately took him to the hospital before it was too late.Mansour was behind the scenes of the hospital with Fanta, a physiotherapist was taken directly to the emergency room, she was with the doctor. Mansour was so worried, he couldn't sit or stand, he was only going back and forth between the waiting room and the emergency room, his heart was beating hard, that's when he knew that he loves physio very much and does not want to lose her, fear was overwhelming his whole body, yes the fear of losing a loved one.-Mansour don't worry. Everything will be alright. Let's pray to God.-:May God hear you.Do you love her, Madame Diop?-yes very much Fanta, I love her despite everything I don't want to lose her.-:Do not worry. You will not lose it.- You don't think you should notify his parents.- Not at the moment anyway.Half an hour la
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE thirty seven
Marriage is something sacred, a promise made before God and before men, we decide to get married because we feel our life is going on with our spouse, we get married because we feel invested in living next to the man or woman of your life, we get married to build the family of our dreams with our spouse, we get married to share our moments with our spouse. Marriage is something serious, it's not neither a day nor two days, when you enter a marriage you have to abandon certain behaviors, you promised each other help and assistance then for nothing in the world Ok should turn your back on your spouse except of course in cases of force majeure.- Repudiate it I said- Mom, can you hear yourself talking?- But with your mother that you speak there El Hadj Mansour- Me and Physio is for eternity- We'll talk about it again... she said hanging upMansour takes a breath of fresh air before starting his car.It is a quarter of an hour later that he arrives at Tapha. As soon as this one ope
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE thirty six
No one on earth would like to disappoint their parents, no one on earth would like to see their mother cry because of us, life is so unpredictable, we can be happy at 5:20 p.m. and at 5:21 p.m. unhappy.It is with a bruised heart, tears in her eyes, heavy feet that she leaves her parents' home to leave with Mansour, the man who had just married her before God and men, their Happiness was only lightning, a shooting star, ice cream melted in no time.Her world had stopped following the words coming from her father's mouth, Physio really thought she was happy now but everything fell apart, she really wanted to turn the page but her past resurfaced and in the worst possible way manners, Mansour was at the wheel, Physio in her dress she wore for her religious wedding had landed on the landscape side with all the trouble in the world, she was crying without being heard, tears were streaming along her cheek, she was alone in her world, she no longer had a taste for life.-I'll always be t
