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YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Twelve
In some families, we like to get married in the family cocoon, that is to say between cousins and cousins, some people have even gone so far as to say cousins are made for cousins as if to say that cousins are obliged to agree to marry their cousins.And the love in all this? And the choice of the girl in all this? Forced marriage does not only concern the girl, it can also affect the man but most of the time it happens to girls.The basis of marriage must be love, some will say that love is not enough but when you don't love a person, it's hard to sleep on the same bed as them, it's hard to wake up all mornings by his side even if sometimes we hide him.Love is the basis of any household, it's proven, when we don't love our spouse, we don't understand these faults and these shortcomings, we don't endure in our household whereas when we love our spouse's faults are transformed for us in quality, we endure difficult times for him, we support everything in this household.For
Last Updated : 2022-12-10YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Thirteen
In life, there are men who only see sex in women, they think that life is only about carnal pleasure.Wanting to have carnal pleasure is not prohibited but having it under normal conditions is what is good, yes doing it with the consent of the person concerned or even having carnal pleasure in the bonds of marriage .Fornication, few of us talk about it, we trivialize it and yet it is a virtue, all the revealed religions prohibit fornication but we do it while knowing that it is not good, our world is thus made of nowadays, we know what is good for us but we don't do it, we know what is bad for us and yet we do it while being aware.Some will say that God's mercy is immense, yes God is merciful, very merciful even but let's try to follow these recommendations anyway, life on earth is only a passage, sooner or later, we will return where we came from so let's try to build our life here below while building that of the beyond, by what to do? by posing beautiful acts, by working in th
Last Updated : 2022-12-11YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Fourtheen
Little Fatima wanted to know what the expression "surrender" meant.Halima didn't know what to say to this, when she wanted to answer, her phone started ringing and it was Aly.- Hello Aly- Is it my father calling?...Asks Fatima- Where is Fatima?-Wait, I'll pass it to you, it's hereDoes she pass the phone? to little Fatima.- My loving dad, I miss you, where is mom? Why don't you come see me.She asked so many questions at once, she could answers.- Hello my princess, I miss you here- I'm angry with you, you left me here all alone, but tell me where is mom?-She's fine...said Aly remaining zen- Where is she ? Why didn't she come to see me, Auntie Halima told me that if mum is resting well, we were going to go out together to go to the beach, to the park, to eat ice cream? Today she is well rested but I just didn't see it on TV?.- What do you mean, on TV?- Yes I saw mom on TV today-HOW? 'OR' WHAT !!!-If not dad, what does "give up the ghost" mean, I heard the journalist s
Last Updated : 2022-12-12YOUTHFUL MISTAKE fifteen
Two best friends, two daughters, two women, the same fate.In life we sometimes believe that our situation is more difficult than all other situations but we always realize that no, we always find another person whose situation is more catastrophic that we even forget our own problems.Life is made up of ups and downs, a person cannot live happily ever after, it is impossible, misfortune will always happen.Sometimes our problems follow one another and we think that happiness will never smile on us, we lose hope and all of a sudden, a light illuminates our life.Just to say that in life, I must never lose hope no matter the complexity of the situation, as we often say, everything comes to the point to who knows how to wait, as long as there is life there. has hope.Sophia and Physio now live the same situation, will they hold hands and try to give a positive direction to their lives?When is the verdict for Abdou and Doudou? When will they finally pay the pots?We only reap what we
Last Updated : 2022-12-13YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Sixteen
People kill and regret it afterwards, don't we say that the decision of life or death belongs to God? Sometimes it emanates from the human will.It happens in life that they do something to us that we cannot digest so much that it hurts our hearts that we would like to do the same thing to the person who made us suffer.We tell ourselves that only vengeance can soothe our hearts.Women become heartless because men have broken their hearts, women become callous because men have stolen their innocence.Women become complicated in everything because they have been victims of rape.Women are afraid to open up to the world because they have experienced trauma in the past.Rape has effects in a person's life whether it is a physical or psychological effect, it is an event that is not practically forgotten.Stop violence against women again!!!Stop the rapes!!!Stop the destruction of women's lives!!!Do not force women to maintain carnal relations!!!Life is not just about that!!The woman
Last Updated : 2022-12-14YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Seventeen
A black box, almost everyone has one in their life, everyone hides one thing that they wouldn't want anyone not even knowing their best confidant for fear of being judged or denied or that their backs are turned .Life is very unpredictable, a very buried secret can be revealed at any time and change the course of our life.Our social situation can change overnight in a fraction of a second.This was the case of Doudou and Abdou, Sophia knew something about them.-I think I know how to hold them hostage…said Sophia- Hmm, what is it?-We will need time, since it's almost time for your meeting with Abdou, so that he doesn't get angry, you're going to call him and play the game, tell him that you'll be late but that you will certainly come, we need at least three hours to collect as much information as possible and I believe I know where to get this information.- Hum, you think... she said hesitating to call Abdou-Go ahead, call him quickly, we don't care about his state of mind, go
Last Updated : 2022-12-15YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Eighteen
The struggle liberates, they say, revenge can deliver a person, they say, but does it always have positive effects?This question really deserves to be asked, revenge sometimes destroys the person, it sometimes makes us do things that we may regret in the future, we sometimes act out of anger.Sometimes in life, we experience suffering inflicted by certain people and we would like to do the same thing as them if the opportunity arises.Life is really unpredictable, sometimes we make a person suffer and one day we can be in the same situation, don't we say that we only reap what we sow, it's true, even if we don't don't pay here underground, we'll pay it in the beyond.The wheel in life can turn at any moment, we think we will never be unhappy and overnight fate hits us hard, leaves us speechless that we think we are no longer happy in life.Sophia and Physio were about to go out when Sophia's mom surfaces.-Where are you two going?-Ah mum....said Sophia adjusting her veil.- What do
Last Updated : 2022-12-16YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Nineteen
Author's note: I put here some poems that I had to read concerning violence against women as well as rapes as well as their authors.These three poems really touched me and it tells exactly the story of Physio and Sophia, sometimes in these poems we glorify the woman sometimes we say that she does not deserve to be abused, so I share it with you before continue the story.STOPThe white line of respectfor so many feminine existenceshas been outdated for too longwith impunityEvery two and a half days what infamythe irremediable happensA woman falls under heavy blowsof a man of his vain drunken ragesSTOPThe line turned redof the blood of so many citizensis an insult to the laws to the ruleswho must protectall beingsregardless of genderSTOPThe woman has too longjust his two miserable handsin silence and sufferingalso in indifferenceonly had to oppose dementiaof an almighty maleSTOPAgainst the wall of these ignominiesthousands of hands togetherstand up loud and c
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YOUTHFUL MISTAKE THANKS
So here we are at the end of this volume 1, it was not at all easy to write more than sixty thousand words in less than a month but we got there anyway and it's partly thanks to you, Writing an online story can seem easy and exciting when you have great readers reading it.So why the title?The title is for me an auspicious title that sums up the whole story, Physio and Sophia were fooled by youth, by fashion, by their beauty, they crunched the pleasures of life without thinking about their future, their story is a perfect version of what many young girls experience, through this title I wanted to show that many girls are fooled by youth, it is a very important moment in the life of a person who may have reflected in our present and our future, we really have to live it consciously and in moderation otherwise regrets will take place in the present or the future.How do you choose character names?I take the names of the characters according to my entourage, in general I take the na
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Fourthy three
Fear of losing a loved one, fear of losing the woman who gave birth to you, fear of losing the woman you married and gave you children.- The patient is fine, we managed to keep her alive but her condition is still unstable, avoid stressing her.- God be praised...they said while breathingMore harm than fear, Physio's mother was fine.Half an hour later, Khady and his father were at his bedside.- Call my physio daughter, I want to see her, she needs me... she said in a low voice.- All right, she'll come, don't worry.So they went outside- Dad, physiotherapists really have to come and see mum- No way, I don't want to see this girl here, I don't want to see her even in painting.- It's about mom's health anywayHe thinks for a moment before approving.- Go call her- Ok, I will call MansourThis is how she dials the number of Mansour who picks up on the second ring.-Hello yes Khady- Mansur- I hope everything is fine ?- Mom is in the hospital- Hospital !!!- Yes and she asks to
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE Fourthy two
-Physician was raped Tata, she is innocent- RAPED!!!.... she screams in shock- And yes it is the sad reality, listen to his version of the facts first please- You're talking about rape there Sophia, no no I can't believe it, it's not possible, my daughter can't be a victim of rape without my knowing it.- Tata it's the truth- Ah no no..... she said still in shock- You all think that she gave herself to a man, that she is a wanton but I would tell you the opposite, Physio always wanted to keep her virginity for the man who deserved it, for her husband, she wanted keep it for herself but especially for her daughter especially you, her mother, she wanted to make you proud, she didn't want to dishonor you in any way, it's true that she went to clubs, she drank alcohol, she didn't never wanted to give herself to a man, she had the ultimate conviction to be a virgin for her wedding night but alas everything happened different, they snatched from her in the worst possible way what she
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE fourthy one
A pregnancy after a rape, what could be harder?- Physio you are pregnantThis phrase buzzed in Physio's ears like the sound of bees in the hive.-What!! What are you talking about?....she asks, unable to analyze the situation- I'm sorry to tell you but after your suicide attempt the doctor told me that you are pregnant and that the baby is doing wonderfully-Ah no no it's not possible, I can't get pregnant, tell me it's a joke, no it must surely be a joke Mansour but know that your joke is in bad taste .... she said not believing his ears.- Physio listen to me.... he said taking both her hands- I'm listening to you- I knew it since your hospitalization, I didn't know how to tell you but today I had the courage to tell you because you are the main one concerned-Ah no no it's not possible, tell me it's not.....said she shouting, holding Mansour's shirt collar- Calm down, don't hurt yourself.- I can't get pregnant, my life is crazy for good.... she said sobbing- I am here and
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE fourthy
Life is so unpredictable, we sometimes think we are coming to the end of our ordeal when it is we are just at the beginning of our ordeal. Dignity, it is sacred, we can lose everything and be respected, but dignity when you lose, you also lose self-esteem and the esteem of others. Some people did not ask to lose their dignity but their dignity was trampled on in the worst way. The girl is called to be a mother so everything she does, she must think about the future of her future offspring because the youth of a woman can harm the future of her child and no woman on earth would like to be pointed at her child so crunch the pleasures of youth in moderation, an excess could be a fatal error. boy is called to be a father so he must learn to behave well from his youth to then be able to educate his offspring. Youth is a great time, a good memory as long as we lived it with conscience .Youth is a bad memory as long as we have lived it without conscience. Do not let yourself be lulled b
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE thirty nine
Love is sometimes very complicated, it is supposed to be sweet, exciting but sometimes it is the opposite. This is the case when we see the loved one suffer..Physio's mother was in her room still crying when she received a visit from her older sister who lives not far from her home.- Good evening… she said- Good evening my sister....said wiping her tears to then show that she is strong.- Diaroul fompou, dioyal, there's no need to hide your pain from me, but know that all this is your fault.... she said taking her seat.- You too don't say that, I never wanted my daughter to behave like one- And yet, she did it, it's all your fault, you let Physio do what she wants and now here is the result, she spends all her nights in nightclubs, everyone knows it , everyone knew her vulgar, everyone knew that she didn't have good company but to show off like that naked, her video was even seen by the little ones, it's shameful, it's is the reputation of a whole family that is shameful, you
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE thirty eight
Suicide, how could we analyze it, when someone does it we say he's a coward but sometimes our mind tells us to do it.Kiné was still alive, Mansour immediately took him to the hospital before it was too late.Mansour was behind the scenes of the hospital with Fanta, a physiotherapist was taken directly to the emergency room, she was with the doctor. Mansour was so worried, he couldn't sit or stand, he was only going back and forth between the waiting room and the emergency room, his heart was beating hard, that's when he knew that he loves physio very much and does not want to lose her, fear was overwhelming his whole body, yes the fear of losing a loved one.-Mansour don't worry. Everything will be alright. Let's pray to God.-:May God hear you.Do you love her, Madame Diop?-yes very much Fanta, I love her despite everything I don't want to lose her.-:Do not worry. You will not lose it.- You don't think you should notify his parents.- Not at the moment anyway.Half an hour la
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE thirty seven
Marriage is something sacred, a promise made before God and before men, we decide to get married because we feel our life is going on with our spouse, we get married because we feel invested in living next to the man or woman of your life, we get married to build the family of our dreams with our spouse, we get married to share our moments with our spouse. Marriage is something serious, it's not neither a day nor two days, when you enter a marriage you have to abandon certain behaviors, you promised each other help and assistance then for nothing in the world Ok should turn your back on your spouse except of course in cases of force majeure.- Repudiate it I said- Mom, can you hear yourself talking?- But with your mother that you speak there El Hadj Mansour- Me and Physio is for eternity- We'll talk about it again... she said hanging upMansour takes a breath of fresh air before starting his car.It is a quarter of an hour later that he arrives at Tapha. As soon as this one ope
YOUTHFUL MISTAKE thirty six
No one on earth would like to disappoint their parents, no one on earth would like to see their mother cry because of us, life is so unpredictable, we can be happy at 5:20 p.m. and at 5:21 p.m. unhappy.It is with a bruised heart, tears in her eyes, heavy feet that she leaves her parents' home to leave with Mansour, the man who had just married her before God and men, their Happiness was only lightning, a shooting star, ice cream melted in no time.Her world had stopped following the words coming from her father's mouth, Physio really thought she was happy now but everything fell apart, she really wanted to turn the page but her past resurfaced and in the worst possible way manners, Mansour was at the wheel, Physio in her dress she wore for her religious wedding had landed on the landscape side with all the trouble in the world, she was crying without being heard, tears were streaming along her cheek, she was alone in her world, she no longer had a taste for life.-I'll always be t
