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Author's Note - The Story Continues
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2023-07-25 19:59:32Hi readers,
In my previous author's note at the end of this book, I shared that I wanted to start the second book based on one of the characters, Charles Smith.
However, after some deliberation, I have decided to add the second book from here.
With that said, the sequel will still focus on the character of Charles Smith. That's all I can say for now.
How will the story of Charles Smith be told here? Stay tuned and find out.
Thank you for your support. PLease look forward to the sequel of "Who's the Loser now?"
With Gratitude and Regards,
JDHWS
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