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Chapter fifty
MAX'S POINT OF VIEW
I felt a mix of emotions as I watched the notifications on my phone flood in. My heart raced with excitement as I saw that my book was trending on TikTok, and I couldn't help but feel a sense of pride as I read through the positive comments from readers.
I had poured her heart and soul into writing this book, and to see it resonate with so many people was an indescribable feeling. As I checked the sales rankings on Amazon, I couldn't believe what I was seeing. My book had become a bestseller, and the thought of so many people reading my words filled me with a sense of joy that I couldn't quite put into words.
I had always dreamed of becoming a successful author, and now, that dream was becoming a reality. I knew that there would be challenges ahead, but for the moment, I was basking in the glow of my success.
As the day went on, the positive feedback continued to pour in, and I found myself feeling more and more grateful for the reader
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