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The group started walking. Thea got next to Alessia and put her hand on her arm to slow her down. When they were behind the group, Thea whispered so only Alessia could hear. “That girl from Crescent Moon, do you recognize her?” “I don’t recognize her as an omega or slave,” Alessia whispered back.
“Can we go for a ride?” Arella said. “Hold on one second,” Thea said to the girls. She turned back to the refugees. “Get settled in. Go to pack training. We’ll see you at pack dinner tonight.” The refugees nodded. “Luna, Alphas, Alpha Sharpe is at the gates,” one of the guards at the gate mind li
XAVIER'S POV That bitch. Thea Lyall. The bane of my existence. My father had been on my case ever since New Dawn's Alpha called him and told him what I did to Thea. Didn't matter that she was asking for it. No one should've known because my Alpha command should have worked on her. Something wasn'
XAVIER'S POV I hoped there wasn't life after death. I was profoundly disappointed. I woke up in the dark. Weight pressing around me from all sides. It made sense that I would go to hell after what I did. I thought it was supposed to be fire and brimstone. Maybe werewolves went to a different he
"Vampires!" Conri yelled over mind link to Delta team, Alpha Ulric, and Beta Walter. "We're coming," everyone said over mind link. Conri alerted the patrolmen but told them to stay at their posts and keep watch in case vampires attacked from other areas. The Delta team guards closed in on Thea a
Kai shifted into his human form just as Alpha Ulric, Beta Walter, Alpha Sharpe, and the rest of Delta team came bounding up to the group in wolf form. “Why does any of this matter?” Kai said out loud. “Look at him,” Thea said. “He’s filthy. Dirt under his fingernails—he clawed himself out of his
Once Xavier was locked in a dungeon cell, Thea had the kitchen send down whatever animal blood they had. She passed it through the bars and set it on the ground of the cell. “Drink, Xavier,” Thea said. “It’s pig’s blood.” Xavier shook his head. “I just want to die,” he said. “I say we give him wh
“I never expected to be having this conversation,” Thea said. “Sounds serious,” Alessia said. She tucked her long, red hair behind her ear. “You know Xavier died last Thursday after his father ripped out his canines,” Thea said. “Yes,” Alessia said. “Well, what you don’t know is that I went over