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SECRET ADMIRER

Author: Lucky succy
last update Last Updated: 2022-06-26 06:00:01

   SECRET ADMIRER 

▪  ▪  ▪  ▪  ▪  ▪ NESSA ▪  ▪  ▪  ▪  ▪  ▪ 

     We rode in silence and I was comfortably enjoying the silence " so van hope you are okay?"he asked "first of all did you have to break the silence, secondly, my name is Nessa not Van and thirdly, I'm okay not like you care "I said with enough venom to kill a snake and that shut him up and we rode in silence. Getting there, some police men and journalists were already there. So I made my way toward the area showing my ID card to the as well as Zeke. Wait why I'm I calling him Zeke . We both made our way into the building with Zeke holding his camera to take pictures. And there I go again with the Zeke name.

        At a point we splitted and I went to the kitchen area to inspect, I found that there was no blood trace anywhere just weird bites on each one of them and there were looking pale like all the blood have been drain out of them. I picked up my walkie talkie " Zeke are you there?" I yelled " hmm I like that name Zeke. Yes Van I'm here" he replied . Ohh God please let him stop calling me Van. "I need you to come to the kitchen immediately " I said " roger that …van" he said and I'm pretty sure he must be smirking right now.

         In a twinkle of an eye he appeared .weird. 

"So what's up ?why did you call me " he said raising his eyebrow 

"Take a look at these people what do you notice ?I asked 

" well… No injuries, they are obviously dead "he said 

" no not that don't you see bite Mark's and aren't they looking pale?"I asked 

"Yeah" he replied so I took pictures on my phone and Zeke took pictures with his camera. I really need to stop calling him Zeke. 

After a while we decided to leave I offered to drop Zeke but he declined the offer so I just decided to go back to the office since its still early and Karen wouldn't be home yet.

        I got to the office and I was still wondering what could have killed them or rather who , as I continued to stare at the pictures, everything seems weird the pale faces the pale body and all well the bodies have been sent for autopsy. And yes the receptionist who survived I think I and Zeke will go see her tomorrow at the hospital.

After a while a knock came at my door who must that be anyways I yelled for the person to come in and was surprised to see MK " hey I thought you must have left" i said " no I didn't so what's up with you" he said giving me a hug " I'm good just stressed out with this case and I haven't even started that's all" I said sighing 

" oh I see , well it's late get up lets go"he said

" nah I don't want to "I declined 

" waah now get up , ok we'll go have a cup of coffee please" he pleaded 

" fine I'll just pack up"i said arranging the files 

I stood up took my coat and turned off the light as we both exited the door.

On our way out , we met Zeke at the argh " I thought you went home ?" I asked

" hey van I came to get something I left behind "he said smirking I wish I could wipe that smirk off his face.

"How many time do I have to tell you my name is Nessa not 'Van' I am not a truck dummy "I yelled "but you call me Zeke so its only fair I call you Van"he said smirking as MK raised his eyebrow and said " so Nessa you already got a name for Ezekiel " can they day get any worse

" can we go MK" I said yanking his crossed arms dragging him to the exit door .

We got into my car and drove to a cafè shop not too far from the office. We both sat while a waiter came to attend to us .

"Welcome!!" He said giving us the menu list . Coffee and pancakes,  coffee and sausage "well I'll go with milk coffee without sugar and pancakes "I said finally after deciding "ohh ok and you Mister?" He asked MK who has been staring at him for a while now" I'll go with sugar coffee with milk and pancakes " he said with a grin

" alright then I'll go get them just give me a minute " he said as he left immediately to get the things. 

I think MK might have a crush on him but is too shy to let him know lol.

In few minutes he was back with a tray , immediately he left we started eating and making little talks . Suddenly I felt like someone was watching me so I turned and a kite just flew in through the window and landed on my cup of coffee.  Gross. " something is written on it" I said as I picked the kite from the coffee. 

"Very well Vanessa drop the case or risk losing your loved one's " 

                                                  Secret admirer.

I read aloud to MKs hearing

"We need to get out of here Nessa " MK whisper yell as he dropped some dollar bills on the table then we walked as fast as we could to the car.

       I offered to drop him off before going back to my apartment. I was so tired "hey Nessa how was work " Karen said as I opened the door "well I have a new case which is a mystery anyways I wanna go sleep. I got into my room and took my bathe I was about to go to sleep when my phone rang " hey Van " a voice said which I could immediately recognise as Zeke's " how did you get my number?" I asked " don't sweat it I stole it from your file I just wanted to check on you "he said " I'm fine thanks I wanna sleep bye" I said and ended the call .

Before I went off into dream land.

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Hey people its succy ❤. I hope you are liking my book so far? anyways I like reading comments to know your thoughts on the book so feel free to comment.

~Succy

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