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Evil whispering of maids.

Author: NineStar 619
last update Last Updated: 2020-08-25 13:41:13

A town name "Sophesis" where the economy was poor and people were praying for jobs.

No way to travel out or bring in some hope.

However, in this devastated town, there was only one family who was at a rank of noble richness.

No one knew from where he got all this, but going through his wealth, the beautiful, magnificent building stood at the corner of the dull town, not even the level of the Mayor, of the town was nothing compared to theirs.

Every person would give his/her life to get a job here but, it all depended on the civilian of the house. 

In this house, a family of three members only, A father, A mother, and a daughter were the living owners. Early in the morning, as a new day begins, the mother wakes up and gets prepared for the day. As she's done, she walks to the lovely-looking cradle and opens up the curtain of it, calling in a sweet voice, 

"Wake up, my sweet princess Loathefiya. It's almost morning."

A little cute girl of age around three wakes and sits up, rubbing her eyes, "Good morning, mama"

Her mother, a young beautiful lady with no sign of tiredness or a spot rang out a bell. A maid knocked on the door, coming in, and greeted the lady morning day.

"prepare my daughter and bring her to the table," she ordered and left out. 

The maid begins her work. While doing, she spoke out in anger,

"What a waste of time!

She knows very well we are always busy then does she has to order us extra... Humph!" she wore the child a hat and cured, "I wish this woman just tear away from her child. Always her work blocks our daily routines." as she spoke this, her eyes were straight on the Child, who heard all but, didn't even get a glimpse of it. 

Bringing her down to the great dinner table, the maid helped the child sit on the chair and left. With her parent's company during the meal, the family had a good healthy breakfast.

After when the father was done, he stood up, carrying his bag, and said, "I am off to work." 

"Take care" wished his wife.

"Goodbye, papa" greeted the child. He wore up his hat and went out. 

The mother cleaned her mouth with a handkerchief humbly and said to her daughter, "I am done. I will be there upstairs." She went out of the room. 

There she called out, a maid named Misha and ordered her to clean up the table, leaving the child to eat on her own.

While Loathefiya was still eating, four maids entered inside with a trolley and begin to clean up. One maid spoke out while working, "This family is so greedy. They eat money so much!" she sounded harsh.

"shii! Quiet" interrupted the second maid, "The kid is here. She might listen."

The third maid said, "No problem. She wouldn't understand. After she's only three so, there's no danger. Besides, what you said is right. They are so greedy. Just buying expensive things and storing them. While there are only three members!"

The fourth maid complained, "And every end of weeks party! PARTY! PARTY! OFF!. They just don't think of our tiredness."

The first maid said, "I wish and I feel like to curse this family."

"No, you shouldn't" the second maid again calmed her, "Or else, where shall we work again?"

"You are right," said the first maid, glaring her sight at the little girl who looked up at her, "just wait till this whole family shall end."

They all nodded at a time. After clearing, they left out.

Loathefiya heard everything and thought in confusion what did they mean by the end of the family?

She heard evil clearly in her ears and saw the foes staring at her. But, she was just a child of three who could only hear things without any act of understanding. 

Even understanding wasn't clear for a decent child like her. She didn't know she was getting attacked in hide and there was no defense.

All Loathefiya did was after eating, get off her chair and head out straight to her playful room. With only toys roaming in her head, which one to choose to play today as every three years does...

When there is pure evil around, nothing can stop a man from erasing it...

NineStar 619

Quite a simple chapter but too much to go. Hope you all enjoy it

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