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Chapter 50 Painful screams fills the underground bunk she was in and Rosa trembled in fear. Hand and neck shackled like a dog on the cold concrete floor and metal fence in the space she was in reminds her of every serial killer movie. Each scream made her flinch and tears wouldn’t stop falling down her cheek. She couldn’t see anything nor can she stops shivering.“How are you doing over there, Rosa?” A voice spoke in the dark and Rosa gasped loudly. Her soul almost left her body when she see a pair of golden eyes in the dark. It glows so widely, that it couldn’t be human. Only when the owner of the eye or Marius pulls the long switch of the bulb above them she can see him.Bars behind him made her realize she was caged. Her blood boils and she tries to stand up and hurt him any way she can but, the shackles pull her back until she coughs from the pain. Nevertheless, she glares at him and screams.“Shackled like a dog? How do you think I should feel?” Marius chuckled. He went closer
~Flashback~“Allocate the humans to safer places. Put more guards near the royal chambers. Lead them and make sure the castle won’t fall, Jakub. I have to check the borders. Vadim is there.” Armand was ready to leave when Jakub held his shoulder and pulls him so they would face to face with each other.“No, Armand. You have to guard the king and queen. I have a bad feeling about these attacks. The queen is sick and only the king is guarding her now. Most guards are already dispatched at the borders.”It was the first time Armand had ever seen his uncle look so worried. “She still is? Goddammit! Father told me she was fine yesterday. I thought her fever subsided?”“He lied. He probably did that to not make you two worried and I understand, but we vampires don’t get sick, remember? Just go and be beside your parents. I have a feeling that the attacks will be focused in their chambers. The king and queen are in a vulnerable state right now.”Armand hesitates for a second. His mind keep
"Your hand is not tied up, right?" Rosa sighed and replied to Ayara. "No, but it's chained to the wall, even my neck." Ayara growled and, hit the metal bars separating them. "Darn dogs. Can you still reach my hand? Though this bar? Can you touch the chains on my back?" Rosa tried to reach out to Ayara's wrist by turning her back to her back and reaching out to Ayara's hand. "Y..yeah. I just can't reach the front gates. Let me take a look at it." Turning around her body so she can look at the handcuffs, Rosa was shocked to see the fuff digging into her wrist and there were burn marks around it. It was still bleeding and droplets of blood even wet his hand. There's a hole where the key is inserted and the metal is pretty thick to be smashed by you seeing how weak you are now. "Oh God, why is your wrist burned like that? It's silver, right? I thought silver only hurts werewolves?" Ayara scoffed. "Exactly and the one thing that could do this sort of damage if the chains are blessed.
A/N: Yet to be edited. will do it soon. Enjoy for now....Rosa was sneaking inside the mansion like a rat. Hiding, running then hiding again whenever there were wolves around. Its odd that none of them could scent her seeing they have actual wolf DNA in them. Didn't matter. Her goal was to find the spot where Marius will meet the so call traitor and when she peek through one of the window, he see Marius and about 50 something wolves behind him. They remind him of the one in Twilight clothes with some wearing wife beater, denim jeans, messy hair and tanned all over. Black and white compare to the vampires. Nothing like the light skin vampire. It was evening and the sky above her was getting darker by the second. It was going to rain soon. She went outside, making sure to avoid anyone sight and hide behind a wall with huge tree covering her. The wolves are waiting for their guest and so did she. leaning on the wall and getting annoyed by the second because she was starting to think
Rosa steps out slowly. She couldn't stop shivering, terrified as the night Matei first found her but, she knows damn well not to show her vulnerable side to these people. The wolves look curious, Marius looks concerned while the vampire with a dozen of his men stood behind him. Smirking. Rosa stood away from both crowds but close enough to observe his features. So familiar. So, so familiar. She knows him. She sees him before and though it was hazy, she remembered a few times who he was closed with. " You... I know you... I've seen you before." She says to him. The vampire grin and his long fangs made her skin crawl. "Pray tell how, my lady?" As if a lightbulb has been switched on in her head. She gasped in shock "Their uncle! Marco... don't tell me.." She knows now. Hyatt... The scary silver hair, red-eye, and scarred face vampire that is always being seen with Marco. When Jack says that the traitor could be someone close to the family... Holy Hell, it was Marco. No way a va
A/N : Not Edited yet. Will do it once I end this story this month. TQ...Rosa was free falling. Her arms and legs spread, the heat of the air currents buoying her body from a dead drop. Loud whooshes of air tugged at her hair.Hundreds of deep whispers reverberated around her. She struggled to open her eyes. But each time she opened them, an intense burning blazed through her.Armand! Vadim!Rosa! She can hear their voice. Desperate, tired and begging - shouting back to her, their voices felt so far away. It felt as if an eternity had come and gone. Where was she? What happened to Armand and Vadim? Her temples suddenly began to throb. Rubbing them, she closed her eyes. She was having a nightmare. Dying and bleeding out. It had been so scary and not having her mates around almost broke her sanity. She hated being alone. It was such a horrible feeling. How is is possible for someone to live like this? She couldn't even remember what happened before this? Why is her memory so bl
Unedited with grammar sh*t but I'll fix it once I complete this book. TQ...The battle ended after it lasted for 45 minutes. Armand genuinely believe that there would be tons of collateral on every side though the one he was concern for was his soldiers. Every one of them... it hurts him and he knew he wouldn't be able to sleep in peace tonight or any other nights knowing these people had sacrifice their life for his family.“Where the fuck did your guy takes her?” Vadim yelled at Hyatt’s face with his fist dripping with blood. His rings has bits of flesh and skin stuck on it after continuously pummelling Hyatt’s face whose hand was nailed on a pillar.No longer was Hyatt as confident and proud as he was before. Vadim remembers vividly the way he would look at vampires who are lower level than him. The disgust and hate he felt for vampires who are turned than born. Bastards forgot how it was Marco who saved him from slavery years ago and he thinks he was indestructible?He can’t wai
Vadim remembers when he was a kid, playing hide and seek with his brother at their castle. Their birthplace and home for decades. Vadim and Armand were inseparable and it's not just the fact that they are twins and bonded by blood, but they are best friends by choice. They would have each other back no matter what.When Vadim tried to hide as Armand counted to a hundred, he ran as fast as he could through the corridor leading to his parent's room. Victorian design with the color red and gold everywhere, there were so many places to hide but probably looks too obvious for Armand.In the midst of searching for the right spot, he heard Armand screaming from afar and he was 110 meters away from him, literally at the end of the castle. With his speed and burst of energy, absolutely smart beyond his age, Vadim decides to throw in the towel and hide in the wooden cupboard facing the bed.Her parent's clothes were placed in their own built-in closet so the cupboard here was only to keep old d
Rosa folds the letters and set them aside. Letting all the things she had read, rest and engraved in her thoughts and heart. Tears wet her cheek so she quickly uses her napkin to tap on her cheek. Made sure her makeup was not messed up too much. She had spent one whole week reading Marco Demyan's POV.A letter to his children before he died but not directly addressed to them. more like his story for the twins to understand his side better. He wrote all the important details of his life, his first-person point of view, and tells the story from his sad childhood to the day he decides to have his revenge. She had gotten the letter from the reading room where both Vadim and Armand has spend their day sorting out all the coven official matters once their ancestry was revealed to the council. Though anger and detest quickly swarm from the elders, the crime of Bethran, Jakub, and King Alexander was also revealed and they all know which situation would be more deserving of their wrath. Th
I stayed in the Makkari castle for months, even being made into King Aleksander's advisor but, I doubt my opinion matters to him nor did I give him any. I notice he just wants me to be around him and when I see how affectionate he tries to be with Marie, I would bite my lip so hard until it bleeds and ache to bury my fist into the pathetic king's face. Marie would look at me when others weren't looking and smile. Even she knows how our situation is affecting all of us badly. Hyatt and Isaac were still kept to my side but even I can see the treatment of the guards here towards them was mean and not as accepting as I thought they would be. Then I learn that these guards and soldier whom Hyatt would train within the Makkari castle is none other than one of the most powerful general in vampire history. Jakub Maelstrom. A Dutch who was raised by the Makkari former kings. Strong, powerful, and a good friend of every king of Makkari. Including Aleksander and from the way he looked at us,
" You three are the only survivor of the massacre and I am truly sorry for what you all have been through. Unfortunately, I could not give you your home or livelihood back. You are welcome to stay here. This will be your new home." I stood at the end of the stairs. Forced to kneel despite being a king - former king with my two fight mates on my sides. No longer were they my servants. They were my fight mates because just like me, they are all orphans now and we have indeed survived the hell that had attacked us two nights ago. In the cellar covered by rubbles, I forced my fight mates to hide with me, trying to bring some wounded vampires we could find but trying to save them only lead us to disappointment. They all died in the cellar we all have hidden in. Isaac, Hyatt, and I were forced to hide with those bodies for 3 days and without the sun, the bodies turn grey and start creating a foul odor. Once we felt like it was safe to leave our hideaway, we carry those bodies to the g
A/N: Unedited. Will do soon. Just trying to catch up with the due date. tq...My Marie is now officially married. And not to me. My beautiful mate whom I loved from the age of 9 and from the very first time I met, is now married to King Aleksander of Makkari Coven. Her head was bent down while the groom raised his head eye, ecstatic and waving to everyone in the village. They all spoke of Marie being the blushing bride. Unable to face anyone because she was too shy and being as young as 18 years, they claimed the young queen was lucky and blessed to have the king as her husband. Only I knew it was all false. I knew my Marie wasn't happy. Just like me, she was broken inside to be making bonds with another man who is not even her mate. Father know this and yet, he pushed the wedding to be done as soon as possible. He thought he was doing the best thing he can as a king hut he was far too delusional to accept that his decision was a mistake that would soon cost all of us. My mot
Unedited. will do it soon....Our love story was risky and so many times would our time together be caught by people in the castle. Hence, we found a way to spend time together and do whatever we want, kiss whenever we want and proclaim our love for one another without the judgement of others. The waterfall was our secret oasis. It's the only place we could be lovers and within a month after our birth day, my beloved Marie allows me to hold her. Touch her and love her like any lovers do. Our first time was definitely not our best time. It pains me to see her bleed and hurt when I first make love to her but along the way, we learn about each other bodies. What ways we can pleasure each other and find comfort in a way only a mate couple can. I tattooed every detail of her body in my heart. Her moles right above her breast, her birthmark on her left inner thighs, her luscious curves, soft cries, blushing skin and the way her eyes would stare at me all glassy and dilated made my bl
I stood at the wide balcony. More vampires behind me as Marie and I stood around the pillar holding a huge stone goblet. Inside was red win poured by the castle mage earlier. The man wearing an elegant fur robe and braided hair stood near the balcony rails. Beneath the castle was the crowds. All villagers gathered to witness as the king only daughter come of age. Including myself of course. I wore a white shirt with white pants while Marie wore a white dress. Simple, plain and we both look at each other nervously and excitedly. The king and my mother stood behind us, witnessing the moment the moon becomes full and its light graze this wine into blood. A sacred blood that will recognize us as an immortal and part of the royal family. Normal vampires don't do this but for royalty? They always wants to make such important event as fancy as possible.Since both of us will come of age at any second soon, I held the edge of the goblet. Staring at the crimson liquid shines brightly an
A/N: Chapter is complete. Don't want to waste time but more chapters is coming out. No worries....8 years passed 'Marco! Marco! Tell me! What are you getting for me for my birth day?" I continue to walk through the hallway and smile as Marie basically jumps around me, tried to squeeze out information from me yet I just walk passed her. No way was I trying to hurt her feelings but she has been going on and on about what she wants from me for her birth day tomorrow. "Did you forgot that I will reach my maturity tomorrow as well?" I replied.She giggled as she twirled around me with her beautiful moss green dress that goes well with her fair skin and dark hair.She was so excited about wanting to know her gift, she forgets that we would both reach our maturity the same day tomorrow night.Fate must've plan for us to meet and know one another when they made us born on the same day, same month and same year. From that knowledge alone, I believe there is a fair God.Though I tower her
10 year old I've been staying at pretty palace for a month now. My mother and I were given a pretty room with comforts of bed and tastiest of blood. No more did we dine on animal blood. We sustain ourselves with human blood and right from their necks. While I saw the people around me and the king drank human blood until the human died, my mother and I drank until it is enough for our hungry tummy. I was surprise to see Princess Marie, King Stephan of House of Raavan cuts a human female hand and let her blood pour into a champagne glass. On the table was also hearty human meals that royals tend to enjoy. It's their ability to walk under the sun and blend in with the humans that made them stronger, sneky and powerful than a red eye like mine. Just like me, my Marie would take a glimpse at me and even sneak a peak at me whenever she thinks I didn't know. Hunting animals made me aware and more careful of the movement around me. Even a gaze to make sure I will always be ready for dange
Not edited yet. Will do soon....With my mate by my side again, I watch as she falls asleep on my arm, soft snoring with her thick lashes hiding her deep blue eyes that reminds me of the ocean.I brush away her curls to stay behind her ears and kiss her forehead. Her smiles made my chest feels full and I cant imagine being anywhere else but here. My Marie. My precious bride.How I long to see you after so long. How I weep at your death and suffer in silence when you are not around?If this is what death feels like, to be able to see you again and love you as you have loved me, I would have stayed in the sun and let the light that shines the prettiest upon you burn me to the ground.Perhaps I had to stay alive for a little while to help our children. Just like me, they have missed you. Lost and broken, so many bad people wants to destroy them. All because they are ours and symbol of our love.How can a love this beautiful is seen as ugly by these vampires?We have shared no blood yet