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CHAPTER 23: YOUNG DETECTIVES ON DUTY!

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Atty. Galiego, we want to help you. We have the gut feel that your client is innocent, said the three (Hannah, Adam and Vhiann)

Atty. Nicdao, we want to be part of your party. We believed that the accused must be punished in jail, the four said (Terrence, Kesiah, Dave and Kiarra)

After hearing what these youths uttered, they decided to talk to one another first before accepting what both teams are offering them.

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