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XII - Intense

Author: Mowtie
last update Last Updated: 2024-10-29 19:42:56

Third Person's Point of View

“Montemayor, are you okay? You look like you just saw a ghost,” Elaine commented, looking at Louis' pale face. She did not know why the young man reacted so much to her picture when she was younger, cradled in the arms of her mother.

"How are you related to that woman?" Louis asked. He was confused by what was happening and his head hurt suddenly. The memory of his former nanny comes back to him.

***

“Lou-lou, you shouldn't go out at times like this. Your father will definitely scold you,” his favorite nanny, Serena, preached to him.

She is kind and always puts his feelings first before hers. Honestly, she was the first person to see him cry especially whenever his father scolded him.

“But I want to go to Uncle Liam’s mansion. He will probably get mad at Sirius because of what we did. I want to defend him,” said young Louis who raised his hand as if he's on a mission. Compared to other children, Louis thinks more maturely even though he was only seven years old. Serena immediately knelt to match the face of young Louis.

“You know, you are a very kind child. I hope when you grow up, you will also be kind to my child,” Serena commented and pinched the cheek of young Louis who is oozing with charming cuteness.

“Na-na, stop it. I'm not a child anymore. Besides, I have gained a little muscle. Look!” Louis even bragged. He showed her his arm that he has glued with pandesal in order to achieve a bulging look. Serena laughed at what he did and took the pandesal from Louis' arm.

"Na-na, give it back. And besides, I promise someday I will treat your daughter as a queen!" said young Louis, making Serena smile. She had heard enough to leave her daughter in peace. In fact, she had been hiding in the Montemayor mansion for several years. Now, she is ready to put an end to her family's evil scheme.

“Thank you, Lou-lou. You are a very good kid. We'll go to Sirius and save him in secret, ah?” Serena whispered because they were in the kitchen while young Louis was eating his lunch. Every day, Serena follows a schedule for Louis that extends until the day ends. Because both of his parents were always on business trips, he had a hard time seeking attention from them which alienated him from his parents.

But because Nanny Serena is here, his life seems to be easier because she will always support him.

***

"Montemayor, what happened to you?" Elaine asked as the young man when

he fell on the bed. His headache was as if it was being torn apart as if something wanted to get out of his head. It's been 20 years since he lost his favorite nanny, but Louis still blames himself.

"Is she your mom?" he asked when he recovered. He held his head, processing everything that was happening.

"Yes," Elaine answered directly. Now, Louis doesn't even know what he

should feel finding out that his favorite nanny is Elaine's mother.

Not only that, he could not fully understand why his parents wanted him to marry Elaine, the daughter of their former housemaid.

There is something strange going on and that is what he is sure of.

All Louis has to do is spy on his father Izaak. Louis knows he certainly wouldn’t speak in case he asks about Elaine.

"Hey, what now? Are you two done fixing things? It's been half an hour already,” Kaizer complained, scratching his head as he opened the door to Elaine's room. 

He almost killed Mang Pedro for what he did to him. 

He would have chased after him with a knife after he brazenly kissed him on the cheek but Mang Pedro was fast enough to run.

“It's you, Kaizer. What is that red mark on your cheek?” Elaine asked, suppressing a laugh because of his reaction. He looked like he was sabotaged by ten deadly lions.

"Don't ask, baby. You might get jealous if you find out," Kaizer said uncontrollably. He must have finished that old gay. He never once let his flings kiss him in the cheek and lips but this Mang Pedro was too brave to kiss him. Fortunately, the old man escaped. Otherwise, he might be in hell after he's done with him.

“Get out, dickhead. We are still not done,” Louis replied, looking at Kaizer seriously. It's like they're in a staring contest together. No one wants to lose because the two have grown competitive especially because they are used to fighting each other.

Similarly, they joined a swimming team that competed at another university. They are both goods in this field, but only one of them can be the captain. To avoid Kaizer and Louis' parents quarreling with their coach, they chose Eron Coleman, one of their competitors on the swimming team.

“That's enough. We're going out too, Kaizer, we'll just fix my clothes,” Elaine replied. Louis smiled softly and pulled her back to the bed after he closed the door. Kaizer knocked and knocked from the outside but Louis locked it already.

“Get out! Do you think marrying Elaine can earn you all rights to do what you want?!”  Kaizer growled. Hearing what he said, Elaine's father came out to ask what was happening.

"What the hell, Montemayor?" Elaine shrieked, embarrassed with their position together. Louis leaned over her. She felt the young man stare at her down to her chest which she immediately pushed against it.

"Ah, what are you thinking!" Elaine's complaint of turning away from Louis. He could feel the speed of his heartbeat so he turned to the young man so as not to see the redness on his face.

"Wife," the young man whispered. He slowly approached the girl and hugged her from behind. The heat Elaine felt increased even more when she felt the organ hardening in between Louis' pants.

"You're making me hard," he added. His warm breath hit her nape that made her heartbeat even faster. She was in utter surprise when Louis' hand reached out to her womanhood. He slowly played with her clit making her moan.

“Ah, Louis. Hmm... ”

"You're just calling me by my name when we're making out," Louis said and she did realize how true that is. She always called Louis by his last name. She only mentions his name once in a while.

"Shut up," she silenced him. Honestly, she no longer knows how to stand properly because he was busy pleasuring her. Elaine was startled when he suddenly lifted her towards the bed. He slowly undressed and his abs were exposed to her. He approached her, unbuttoned Elaine's blouse, and began to remove her pants. The young man's lips immediately crushed to hers.

It’s aggressive compared to the one they shared before. One of Louis' hands traveled to her rich chest. She can't help but moan as he squeezed her nipple.

"L ... L-Louis," she stammered between their kisses.

"Shit, you're driving me crazy," he cursed. His lips reached her neck, planting kisses that left red marks on her skin. His lips then went to her nipple, licking it hungrily like a thirsty baby.

"Ohh," the girl growled as she covered her lips with her two hands so that nobody would hear. The young man sucked on her nipple. His right hand slowly traveling down her panty. He started rubbing her clitoris that gave her a strange and overbearing sensation.

"Child, are your things ready?" her father from outside asked and they both stopped. She is sure he has a key to her room. If they don't respond, he would know that they're doing something inside her room.

"Yes, we'll go out too," Elaine shouted. Louis on the other hand did not stop.

“Hurry up. Louis' parents are waiting,” her father hurried them.

Elaine could not speak because her fiance slowly inserted one of his fingers into her slit. She felt that she's soaking wet because of what he's doing. He carefully covered her lips so as not to let her make

any noise.

"Child?" Elaine's father asked who did not yet leave the door of her room.

“Ah, yes, Dad. We'll get out after a minute. I'm just showing Louis our album,” she reasoned out. Her father seemed convinced because he never spoke again. Louis then stopped.

"Maybe we should continue this later, wife," he said. Elaine nodded because she had just caught her breath from what Louis did to her. She almost ran out of energy because of what Louis did. Not only that but she also clearly saw how he worshipped her chest as if he didn't want to let go.

Louis stood up and put on his clothes that were scattered on the floor. The young man stopped in front of her cabinet and opened it.

She was surprised when he suddenly offered her a dress he had taken from her cabinet.

Honestly, she rarely wears such clothes because she is not comfortable. She prefers pants and T-shirts and only wears a skirt when it is her school uniform.

"What is this?" she asked. He looked at her as if he didn't want to answer her question. She wanted to know why the young man would want her to wear a dress. Are they going to a party?

He sat on the bed and drew their distance closer, whispering the answer to her question.

"Easy access," Louis said and finally stood up. Elaine's still confused with what he said. What does he mean by easy access?

However, she just obeyed what he told her and wore the red dress that he gave her. When she came out, Kaizer immediately went to her, complimenting her with the dress.

“You’re so pretty, Elaine. I've never seen you wear that kind of dress. You seem to prepare real good for the private resort we are going to,” he told her.

"Thanks a lot. Where is Dad? ” she asked as she narrowed her eyes inside the house but she could not see her father.

“He's outside, talking to Louis. What do you think they are talking about? ” Kaizer curiously asked as he took the suitcases inside her room. She also has no idea what her father and Louis might be talking about. Did her father hear the noise he and Louis were making inside the room?

If that is the reason, he would have talked to her about it. She knows her father, it will make him angry because he doesn’t want anyone to trample her dignity, especially when it comes to her femininity. He would always dictate that she has to face the altar as a virgin because many men have evil intentions.

Once they get what they desire from a woman, they will just leave them be and that is what her father doesn't want to happen to her. But she feels strangely for Louis. It isn’t just the simple admiration she felt for Kaizer back then. There seemed to be something even deeper.

Whatever her father and Louis are talking about, it shouldn't be about what happened inside her room or she'll be dead meat. But could it be about her mother? Why did Louis react like that? Did anyone know about her mother's death?

She just hopes no one does because if there, she cannot forgive.

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