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Chapter 35: The Promise He Broke
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The silence was unbearable.Ethan’s breath came in short, ragged gasps, his pulse still hammering from the encounter outside the door. Isla’s grip on the knife hadn’t loosened, her knuckles white. Elliot stood motionless, eyes locked on the door as if expecting it to move again.Nothing did.But the house had shifted.It was subtle almost imperceptible but Ethan felt it, like a change in air pressure before a storm. The shadows were darker now, stretching further, the walls seemed to breathe, as if the entire house had become something alive.And worseHe was certain the house was aware of them in a way it hadn’t been before.Elliot exhaled, breaking the tense stillness. “We can’t stay here.”Isla glanced at him sharply. “You think I don’t know that?”“There’s a way out,” Elliot said.Ethan looked up at him, throat still dry. “How do you know?”Elliot’s gaze flickered toward the bookshelf against the far wall. “Because I’ve been here before.”Silence.A slow, sinking feeling settled i
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Ethan couldn’t breathe.The voice was right there, too close, the whisper curling into his ear like smoke.He spun around, heart slamming against his ribsBut there was nothing.Only darkness.“Who said that?” Isla’s voice was sharp, low.No answer.Elliot exhaled slowly. “Keep moving.”Ethan’s fists clenched. He could still feel the whisper against his skin, the lingering sensation of someone something standing just behind him.Watching.Waiting.But there was no time to hesitate. The darkness pressed in on all sides, thick as fog, and he could barely see Isla’s outline just ahead.So he forced himself forward.One step.Then another.But the feeling didn’t leave him.The presence was still there.Just out of reach.The corridor seemed endless.The air was damp, heavy with something rotten, and every step felt like it led them deeper into something they weren’t meant to find.The lanterns had gone out, but there was still light—a strange, pulsing glow from the cracks in the stone wal
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The doorknob turned.Ethan’s breath caught, his body locking up. Isla’s grip on his wrist tightened. Elliot took a step back, his face unreadable.The door didn’t creak. Didn’t groan.It simply opened.Silently.Smoothly.Like it had been waiting.A gust of cold air rushed past them, carrying the scent of something old and forgotten.Ethan’s stomach twisted.Because the space beyond the doorIt wasn’t just another room.It was something else.Blackness stretched endlessly ahead. A vast, open void where the walls, the floor everything just stopped.The air inside the doorway shimmered, like the surface of a lake disturbed by a single ripple.And at the center of it allA figure stood.Watching them.Ethan’s breath hitched.The figure was tall. Shadowed. Its features blurred, shifting like smoke, flickering between something human and something not.And yetHe knew it.Somehow, he knew it.It was him.But wrong.Elliot swore under his breath. Isla took a slow step forward, her knife rai
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The storm raged outside, wind howling through the skeletal trees that lined the long, winding road to Wintercroft Hall. The figure in the doorway shivered violently, their breath coming in ragged gasps as rain dripped from their soaked clothes onto the marble floor.Elliot didn’t move. Neither did Isla.The house had chosen again.The newcomer clutched a damp, crumpled envelope in their trembling fingers. Their knuckles were pale, their hands shaking as they held the letter out like proof of something they still didn’t fully understand.“I—I got this,” they stammered, their voice raw with panic. “I don’t know why. I don’t even know why I came.” Their wild eyes darted between Elliot and Isla. “I think I made a mistake.”Elliot exhaled slowly, his fingers curling at his sides.They always say that at first.The house was never wrong.“You should come inside,” Elliot said.The figure hesitated, looking over their shoulder as if debating whether to turn and run.Elliot had seen that hesi
