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Additional Chapter 1 : Part A
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* You are not some prize to be won, you should be free to make your own choices. ---- a quote from the movie, Aladdin. *
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Adam somehow managed to catch Lucy before she fainted.
She was immediately taken to the emergency room where she was attended to by the nurses and doctors...
Later, the doctor assured him that she was fine but only fainted out of shock.
He was a little relieved.
But...
That wasn't enough...
Walking through the deserted corridors of the hospital on that Sunday morning...
He could feel the intense pain in his heart.
The pain of losing someone he can never get back... His daughter.
His lovely daughter...
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