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The last Elder left before Tyler summoned Katida inside. Surprisingly, he let Lana stay for his brief meeting. “Elijah and Viktor, what do you suggest we do to them? Their treat is growing. I want to avoid resolving it with violence. We have to maintain an alliance with as many packs as possible.”Elijah rubbed his chin, lost in deep thought. Finally, he spoke. “We have to either drive fear into the hearts of some of these packs to earn the respect we deserve.”“I don't think you heard him,” Viktor corrected. “He doesn't want any violence. It is unhealthy and might lead to war. The other packs despise our existence without truly knowing us.”“We can give more tribute,” Katida blurted out. She wasn't meant to talk yet but had gotten carried away with the accolade Tyler gave her when she swooped in and fought by his side. “I am sorry,” she quickly added when she noticed that Tyler was furious.“Learn to guard your tongue, Katida!” he barked. He wasn't angry that she spoke. This was a bu
One week has drastically passed. Lana began to feel the advantages of a coordinated and well-governed pack. Everything had time. Everyone obeyed. And, the environment was safe to move around in at any time. For the last seven days, morning, afternoon, and night, Lana relentlessly trained. Katida made it obvious that she wanted to make Lana quit. Same with Elijah. When her bones ached and her nerves could no longer function, Lana found Kamala or Levi to spend time with. She extracted as much information as possible from them. They told her stories about the pack, gossiped about others, and made jokes. These two were the primary source of her happiness.Lana's body was back to its proper state. Her mind focused. She had less to worry about since the prisoner 'mysteriously' died. Today was one of those days that she woke up with cramped muscles and an aching head, yet, she had to train. Tyler made sure to keep himself so busy that he inky caught occasional glimpses of her. Whenever he
“Come on, Lana. I can smell your scent and hear your heartbeat. Don't think that a few tree branches will safeguard you from me.” Katida licked the blood oozing from where Lana had cut her. Slowly, it began to heal. A mark will still be left there, as healing completely will take a full day.Lana winced in agony when her broken arm accidentally hit against a tree. She almost screamed but held that loud shrieks of wordless sound in. She ran and ran without looking back. Her hearing scanned for Katida's footsteps. Hearing nothing, she exhaled, having lost her for a brief moment. Lana slumped against a tree, forcing herself to sit.Her bleeding palm had completely healed still, but her arm remained the same. Suddenly, she remembered one of the things Elijah taught her about pain and healing. She had to trigger her healing if she wanted the arm to be okay. Lana took a deep breath and used one hand to tear the lower part of her pants, stuffing the pieces of clothing into her mouth.Through
Lana didn't know how long she was on the run. She only stopped when she felt her draining strength. Around her was a waterfall with a sloppy area where one could sit. Her arm and palm had completely healed. She exhaled, breathing in the safe air of the space. Opening her eyes, she studied her environment, using the peacefulness to relax.Looking down from her rocky perch, mist billowed out in soft clouds where water and gravity collided. Lana screamed into thin air, the roaring water masking her sound. It was an outburst of all emotions that she couldn't explain. The breeze played with her hair, brushing it against her shoulders. A stray water droplet landed on her arm as she pulled in another deep breath. She carefully walked to the flat boulder that rose from the center of the plunge pool when her voice began to itch from all the screaming. She eased herself onto it, sitting.From where she sat, she was able to scoop a palmful of water and drank from it, quenching her thirst. Star
Viktor was welcoming like Levi. Who wouldn't love such a pure soul? They were all around him in no time. Lana paled, waiting for Viktor to drag her out or do something negative. “Lana, dear,” he greeted before giving Levi a curt nod.Lana also waited to sense the tension between the two exes. They handled it pretty well. None of them gave the other person an attitude. They acted like professional buddies.Due to how beautiful and colorful this place was, it was difficult not to spend some time playing with one or two of the instruments. The entire Silver pack was both beautiful and creative.Dripping the last child he played hide and seek with for a few minutes, “you two, Alpha Tyler, wants your audience at the council.”Lana feigned ignorance, waiting for a precise indication that Viktor included her in the two. “Lana, did you hear me? Alpha Tyler wants to see you and Levi.”“I am sorry. I thought you were talking to someone else.”“Nope. Let us go.”Levi didn't object. He enthusiasti
The afternoon rapidly came the next day as a mother delivering a child. Tyler had Kaylee and three of the elders over to the mansion to decide on the gifts meant to be sent to the Wordsworth pack. He also involved Lana and Viktor while Elijah stayed at the training ground putting things together.After passing swarms of guards, Lana with chatting Viktor entered one of the luxurious rooms that held items of clothing on one side and ammunition on the other. There was also a partition that had jewelry, colognes, and drinks. These were excess, which Tyler chose to either gift a pack or pay the yearly tribute.“The boy is turning eighteen. I think those Jordan's sneakers would excite him,” Kaylee suggested, hands on her his.“An expensive wine for the father isn't a bad idea,” Elder Ryan added.Viktor and the rest nodded in agreement. Lana stared and admired the abundance of this pack. Even in the store, it was sculptured artistically. When the previous day passed without getting summoned,
Shortly after getting her senses together, Lana left with Levi to find Kamala, who was tending to Katida. Viktor was done getting instructions from Tyler, he then went to inform Elijah of their absence.They got ready and drove out in a van. Every one of them was armed, but Tyler refused to let Lana have any ammunition. In his defense, she had either Levi or Viktor to closely protect her and if they weren't enough, Kamala was there too.Their ride was entertaining because Kamala kept chirping about everything. She was trying to kill the awkwardness of having both her exes at the same place on the same mission. Levi tried to avoid talking to her, but also made it clear that things were okay between him and Viktor. Viktor drove the van, occasionally blasting hip-hop on the radio. Lana herself was coordinating her racing heart since it was her first time outside after what happened to her.Around eight at night, when darkness had taken over the night sky, they pulled up to the Wordsworth
Levi and Viktor were still getting a hang of her insensible sentence and movement when they heard a chilling scream. The scream was so distinctive and piercing that it made them run after Lana.Lana couldn't tell them what she saw since she wasn't sure how it happened or what it was except Kamala's face that she had seen.She turned around from the now locked doors, and as she did so, she heard it again. It was coming from behind the house. The gate was open, so they walked toward it. The voice was losing strength and it sounded confusing. It was certainly Kamala's, but it sounded different, but then they heard it for a third time. This time, it was louder and more uneasy.As they neared the back gate, Lana saw movement in a window. Kamala was desperately opening a window. Lana picked up her pace, running now. She wrenched up the window, looked over her shoulder, and then jumped from the upstairs window.Fuck!She dropped behind some hedges, where Viktor and Levi heard her scream and
The soft rays of the morning sun painted the room in a warm golden hue as Lana cradled her newborn daughter, Kaylida, in her arms. She was a replica of her father, Tyler but had gotten her mother's hair. She was the best gift to the United pack, loved by all.The little one cooed gently, her tiny fingers grasping at the air. Tyler stood beside Lana, his eyes filled with awe and love for the precious gift they had been blessed with.Nine months had passed since Kaylida's arrival, and the family decided to celebrate by going on a picnic. They invited Kamala, to join them. The tranquility of the pack's garden provided the perfect setting for a relaxing day under the azure sky.As they set up their picnic spot, Lana saw the memorial stand nearby. It bore the names of fallen loved ones: Elijah, Kaylee, Katida, and many others. A wave of bittersweet memories washed over her, and she felt compelled to honor their memory.Lana turned to Tyler, her voice filled with emotion. "I'm glad we decid
Several months later...Months have passed with Tyler and his community doing nothing but rebuilding. He had Kamala brought over to join them. The land has brought together several packs focused on making the King's pack unmatchable.Lana agreed to have everything attributed to her past buried as it was a long time. A few times, she heard from Jack and Alpha Raven.Amid the reimagined Pure Crescent pack, a vibrant tapestry of unity and diversity unfolded. The once desolate lands had transformed into a breathtaking haven of life and serenity. As Tyler and Lana strolled together, their footsteps accompanied by the gentle rustling of leaves and the sweet scent of blooming flowers, their eyes beheld the beauty that surrounded them.Fields of wildflowers stretched as far as the eye could see, their colors blending harmoniously, painting the landscape with hues of crimson, gold, and azure. The air was alive with the melodic chorus of birdsong, and the delicate whispers of the wind through t
Afterward, he clasped her against him so tightly, it was to the point of pain. She needed it and wanted him to squeeze her even harder.They had no idea how long they remained like that, hearts thundering together, his hips softly rocking. Hours might have passed. When the now aggressive air began to flog their skin through the open window. "Is there a bathroom here?" Tyler questioned.Lana nodded pointing to the closed door on the left.Tyler didn't pull out. He carried her, with him buried deep in her straight to the bathroom. It was a simple one with a shower head, bathtub, and toilet area which was demarcated by a transparent glass. There was a cabinet with toiletries and towels and a bug full-length mirror.Tyler carried Lana under the showerhead, switching in the water with a free hand. The water from the showerhead began sputtering. Nonchalantly, he gave both of them a rinse without pulling away.Lana giggled, her breathing hoarse. "You do know that we need a proper bath after
Like an addict yearning for her drugs, Lana shuddered as Tyler teased.Once she managed to reach the heavy weight of his cock, he rasped, “Use it.”She rocked her hips up as she pulled his shaft to her. When the head made contact with her pussy, he bit out a curse, his length jerking in her hand. Panting, she ran the crown up and down between her swollen, flaring lips.“So slick,” he growled. “So ready for me.”As she petted her clit with the bulbous tip, his towering body shuddered with need. “Enough teasing. Wanted this too long.”He covered her hand with his own, fitting the crown against her entrance, pressing forward just a fraction. As soon as she knew without any doubt that she was about to have the best moment of her life that has been denied for months, she relaxed.He pulled their hands away, then began easing deeper, wedging the broad head inside. Her gasp was cut off by his lips, hungry and insistent as he sank his cock farther. Each inch forced her to stretch more and mo
The whole place was still in a frenzy as the dead and injured were being carried out. As Lana swayed her hips ahead of Tyler trying to help in whatever way she could, Tyler pulled her aside.Cupping her face with both of his hands, he brushed his thumbs over her cheekbones. “I need you," he whispered against her ears, and his breathing quickened."I need you too," Lana replied. "However, the pack needs us more. We need to put things in place. We have to decide where everyone would settle before we can have our moment," Lana reminded him as she ran her slender fingers through his now lengthy hair.The last thing as having a haircut and trimming his beard has been at the far corner of Tyler's head due to the whole commotion.He burrowed his stare into Lana's eyes, smiling proudly at her. He couldn't believe that he had almost given up such a wonderful soul due to anger. He was beyond glad that they found their way back to each other.With a calm face, he wrapped his hand around Lana's w
As the smoke cleared and the victorious warriors gathered, Lana and Tyler stood on the grand balcony overlooking the battlefield, the weight of their recent triumph heavy on their shoulders. Annik knelt by their side, his eyes reflecting a mix of embarrassment and anger. The gathered wolves, both from the Pure Crescent pack and other clans that had come to their aid, watched with bated breath, their attention fixed on the trio who had emerged triumphant. The wounds of the battle were evident on their bodies, but their spirits burned with newfound hope. With a commanding voice that resonated across the assembled wolves, Tyler spoke, his words carrying the weight of authority and compassion. "Today, we have emerged victorious, not just as separate packs, but as one united force. We have proven that when we stand together, there is no darkness we cannot overcome." A chorus of howls echoed in response, a symbol of unity and agreement from the wolves who had fought valiantly side by side
As Lana and Ryler joined forces to combat Annik, trying to save the fate of their world that teetered on a fragile edge, the strength of the other packs that had joined hands with them increased too. Lana kept striking blows until Annik shoved her hand on the chest, causing her to swerve back. Her gaze locked with Alpha Annik's hauntingly possessed eyes. She clutched her knuckles so right that they turned white. "You ruined the lives of the innocent, and changed fates, so you could have power. Until your head has been fed to the crocodiles, I will not rest!" she promised.Alpha Annik's possessed voice resonated with a sinister undertone, distorted and chilling. "Foolish girl! You cannot comprehend the power that flows through me. Prepare to face your demise!" With a swift motion, Annik unleashed a wave of dark energy, causing the ground to tremble beneath their feet.Tyler, his eyes burning with determination, stepped in front of Lana, shielding her from the brunt of the attack. He g
"Do something!" he roared at the witches.Before they were able to take another step, with agile grace, Tyler launched himself into the fray, his movements calculated and precise. He evaded Annik's frenzied attacks, his keen instincts guiding him through the chaos. Each clash of their fangs and clash of their claws echoed with the weight of their shared history, their former brotherhood.Amidst the battle, Tyler's voice rang out, laced with sorrow and urgency. "I can't believe you did this to me. To our family"Lana who had managed to invade from the east side showed no mercy as her talons dug into the neck of her enemies. With Jack and his sister by her sister, they were in the Sapohore room in no time.With a full blast of wind, "sisters!" Alpha Raven yelled at the three witches, who hissed in disgust."If it isn't our father's favorite daughter, I wonder who it would be?" the witches sneered, turning into a gigantic python.Tyler was invested in his attack on Annik, that he paid li
"Who are we?" The couple burst out laughing.Giving him a gentle push, "Don't be silly, son. Go join your siblings to play. We have an important occasion to attend shortly," his father informed.Tyler couldn't believe his eyes. "I won't take a walk," he announced to his parents who absentmindedly gave him a nod. Whatever they were discussing was more important than their son who wasn't in the mood to play with his siblings.At once, Tyler's spirit in his trance left his body so that he could see the whole of where he was. He remembered the place from his constant nightmare about the fire.In the heart of the countryside, nestled amidst rolling green hills, stood a breathtaking mansion. Its exterior was a vision of elegance, boasting a harmonious blend of classic architecture and vibrant nature. Surrounding the mansion was a meticulously landscaped garden, ablaze with a riot of colors. Blooming flowers of all kinds, their petals delicate and vibrant, adorned the grounds, filling the ai