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CHAPTER TWENTY-NINE
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May 19, 2021
MADDY
I felt a damp cloth touch my skin, jolting and awakening my senses, but I couldn't open my eyes. My head is ringing and my back is aching. I heard murmuring everywhere, but I couldn't figure out who the voices were or what they said to me. Someone is holding me and wiping my face with a damp towel; I am in a condition of profound disorientation. Whenever I try to open my eyes, a powerful force pulls me back to sleep. Or was it sleepiness?
"She's awake." I tasted blood on my lips as I strained for air. I was terrified, but I couldn't bring myself to move. I'm so bewildered and afraid that the last thing I remember is that someone pushed me down the hole.
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