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Chapter 4 - The Stranger
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2024-10-29 19:42:56Ystal woke up to the soft cries of his fellow villagers. He put a hand to his face, confused and still vaguely numb from the night's sleep, concentrating on the feverish frenzy that ran through his village.
He sits down on that corner of straw and dust, scratching his shoulder, feeling the flesh burn under his nails. He thought he had been stung by something, and was immediately horrified at the knowledge that - whatever it was - was still alive beneath him.
He meets quickly, shivering, dismissing with horror the slight numbness caused by the night's sleep just passed.The sun hadn't quite risen yet, yet the men and women had already poured into the street, in a hurry, taking older children and boys with them.
Ystal wondered what was happening. It was certain it was not yet the time of the Purge; there were about two full moons left. Nor was it harvest time. So why all that movement at such an unusual time?He dismissed the thought, quickly reaching his
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