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작가: Jeon Mehjabin
last update 최신 업데이트: 2021-12-02 04:39:22

READ THIS!!

I want to clear something that's why I'm posting this note. I know many people can blame this side , so here I am to explain.

Here in this story, Tyler has a positive character and he loves Avyana. Avyana also loves Tyler while Jayden is obsessed with Avyana.

But many of your misunderstanding the plot again and again. I mean my other platforms reader used to misunderstand this, so I am not sure if you guys also have the same question. If I want I could just ignore again and again. But now , I need to be strict. I am really sick of haters now. They don't worth this book, but my sweet reader does I know.

Still when you guys read the book , you should understand that it contains many relationships, it's totally dark, mature , a typical triangle love story ,one need to be mature to understand.

I heard many people blaming at first in the story, still blaming me. So their point is Avyana is a weak female lead, she sometimes used to look characterless ,like how can she can't understand his hidden intentions?

One could easily know by understanding someone touches, his intentions bad or good. She must be a gold digger. Keep on Blaming the female lead. Keep on doing this. I keep on ignoring till now. Like come on. You need to understand.

Sometimes our life turn into something, when we are not able to know someone, they might have a dark side , yet they manipulated us with their sweet words , it's just like a sweet knife. But at last they will surely stab you from back, Jayden character is similar to this. That's the main point. This book name is "sinful". Hope you understand. I don't have any words now.

Maybe I sound too harsh but still it's already on disclaimer. If you don't like this, don't read this. It's someone's hard work. Still I blame myself, maybe there was something I couldn't show, I couldn't explain.

Well I don't care anymore now, about my haters,  if any of them wanna increase my comments, by spreading hatred. Sure honey, do it.

I won't stop anymore cuz I answer those dumbheads already. And yah this time I won't say anything, I will only write and write. And about my readers, your author is always here as far you guys are with me. So , sure there will be a update soon. But still it's true that even many readers were confused, like the brother zoned area, so please guys , try to understand. I guess I clear your misunderstanding.

I used to feel demotivated but not anymore I will surely write this book and gonna finish this soon.

I am really sorry if I scared my sweet readers here. 😘

It's a story of betrayal, obsession and lust. It also contains mature stuff such as abuse, rape.

Read this on your own will.

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Tehreem zehra
Such big talks author...and suddenly you disappear. Well I hope you show some real courage and complete the story. There is a way to deal less with harsh criticism and that is to upload the entire book so that the readers get to know abt how the things wrap up... and satisfy their curiosity
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James Bonde
I really the story Ms. Author.. looking forward for more updates thanks...
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    Author pov: The room was dark, deadly silent. She had been kidnapped! Both of her hands were tied tightly with a chair. She couldn't move at all. Fear took place in her heart. Her eyes looked everywhere in the room with horror. Thank god her eyes weren't blindfolded! She was terrified, more then anything. She was lost! Her mind was filled with lot's of questions. She tried to look around herself when a little light fell at her figure. When she tried to scream, all she could hear was muffled screams. She was surprised and confused. Her mouth was sealed with a tape. She couldn't scream even if she want to. Who played such a dirty joke with her? She remembered Christian! She fell at his arms, and then she blacked out! How...could he break her trust? Why? A tear escaped from her eyes when she remembered everything that happened. She heard someone's fo

    최신 업데이트 : 2021-12-09
  • Sinful Obsession   22| His Victory, Her Loss

    Author's pov: The poor soul slowly opened her eyes, trying to adjust to the sudden attack of light while blinking her eyes.She looked around her room, finding herself in different surroundings. She was in a bedroom, not her own. She sighed, closing her eyes as she remembered how Jayden confessed all the painful truth to her. She could already feel tears welling in her eyes as she continued thinking about it. She felt tired, with everything that was happening. She hugged her knees and rested her face on them. Staring at the wall, she didn't know when tears sprang to her eyes. A cracked sob left from her mouth as she cried. Everything was so out of her control. She didn't know what to do except crying. So she cried and cried until she fell asleep again. She woke up with a headache. She didn't know how much time must have passed. She sighed for the ninth time, thinking what she should do. Even a

    최신 업데이트 : 2021-12-18
  • Sinful Obsession   23|Nightmare

    Author Pov"Mam, Young master will get mad at us, please eat something." The lady staff requested her eagerly, as she was sitting in the bedroom silently, broken, silently. She was sitting stiffly staring at the floor blankly.The room was messy as well, pillows were laying on the floor. The room screams loneliness, just like her broken soul."Mam, please at least just eat a little bit, you will get sick." The maid whispered again while putting her hand on Ava's shoulder. But Avyana didn't move, not even a bit.The maid put the plates of food in front of Avyana, porridge, and her medicines.No wonder she was sick, she was looking vulnerable, sad, only sadness could define her broken soul.She looked towards the food plate, and threw the plate on the floor making a loud noise, she didn't even look at anyone. Just stared at the floor blankly. Her messy yet life

    최신 업데이트 : 2022-01-15
  • Sinful Obsession   24| Her Cruel Fate

    Author pov: Avyana made some delicious foods with some desserts and other side dishes. Some maids helped her in making that food. She would die rather than make something for him. But he told her he wanted her to cook for him. And she had no other option but to obey him. She looked at the food and sighed. She was sick mentally and emotionally. But she still tried to be strong, because being weak wasn't a choice. She knew that if she wanted to run away from this monster, she has to play some ticks on him, just like how he did to her. She can't even talk back or do something. She still remember how she slapped him and the way he kissed her after that, how every time she tried to do anything against him and just got failed. She hates every fucking thing about him — his presence, his touch, his words, his whole existence, that is. She didn't do anythi

    최신 업데이트 : 2022-02-13
  • Sinful Obsession   25 | Ruined

    Author pov:Hearing his dreadful words her whole body started to shake in fear. The pain she was feeling right then her eyes were saying everything. Her eyes were filled with painful emotions, they were saying her painful story. Her mind were asking one think ' Is he for real'Her hands were cold while her brown eyes were blank while looking deep into his dark ones. He could witnessed everything. But he wanted to hurt her more.He pulled her more closure by her waist, while gripping her hands tightly with his rough actions which will surely leave red marks on her milky skin. She tried her best to pushing him away, but nothing bother his well build up body." Didn't you hear me darling? I told you strip! Strip for me sweetheart." He erotically whispered near her earlobe while trailing his lips on her milky skin making her shiver and disgust. He almost moan in satisfaction when his nose touches her neckline.Her scent. Which

    최신 업데이트 : 2022-03-30
  • Sinful Obsession   26| His Rage

    Author pov:Slowly slowly she opened her eyes, she found herself in her room. Tears kissed her cheeks when suddenly yesterday night flashed in front of her. She remembered how brutally Jayden take her yesterday. How he showed up his truth colour. She never knew that he was a devil from inside. She trusted him,That was her mistake.That night she saw the real devil, her mind screams nothing but betrayal, hateness for him. The way he raped her make her literally change. She doesn't even only hate him, she also hate this hell. From then she realized something, that now she is his. She have to accept this, she felt disgusting whenever she remembered that even when she is a married woman, he is still crazy for her.She could witness one think, that Jayden always was a sick bastard. Those were always acting , Jayden always used to hate Tyler, he always used to hate his own brother. She didn't knew what was the reason that he

    최신 업데이트 : 2022-03-30
  • Sinful Obsession   27| Dangerous Night, Dangerous Devil

    Author pov:He puffed punch of smokes from his red lips with a smirk on it. His sinful stares never leave the canvas in front of him. He smiled like a psychopath, he keep on gazing every inch of his painted canvas.Her pretty features, Her pretty eyes.Everything of her was something different, she was attractive. And he can't deny the fact, he got what he always wanted to have. He never knew his infatuation and craving will increase even more after this. He was impressed by her acts, always.She make him satisfied in a way who never did for him before. He was not attracted with her just for his desires, but because of her every simple acts, He never knew that he need to caged a angel like this, but he did.But he was shocked at her recent acts he can't deny the fact, she was all rebellious before, but after yesterday. Her behavior were hard to read for him, Is she again playing hard?But Again hit him the fact that If she was playing hard she wouldn't have listen to him silently. She

    최신 업데이트 : 2022-05-08
  • Sinful Obsession   28| His Secrets

    Author pov:She blinked her eyes looking at him, she was not only shocked but also confused at his words. she was just his mistress and a pleasure toy for him. Then why did he confess to her to be his date?But after watching the devilish sign of this bipolar psycho she could understand that he was just playing with her. She didn't say anything she just stayed still at his words, there was no sparkle in her eyes, her whole face was blank at his very words.When he witnessed that she didn't react to his words he didn't get mad or he get surprised, he knew she will never answer him and he doesn't want to ruin his beautiful moment just by showing up his anger.That's why he grabbed her wrist and jerked her towards his body hard and she fall at his chest. His one hand were wrapped around her waist tightly, while another went towards her face.He carefully touch her face as if she was his precious doll, indeed she was. He looked direct towards her eyes with his sharp, dark glare." Don't r

    최신 업데이트 : 2022-05-08

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  • Sinful Obsession   Playlist 'SO'

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  • Sinful Obsession   Epilogue

    Author pov:2 years later "Avyana! Come down for breakfast!" Tia called out, chewing on her jam bread. It was already 7 a.m.!"One more minute!" Ava shouted back as she hurriedly styled her hair.She was dressed impeccably, wearing a black shirt with nude formal pants. Her accessories were perfectly matched: golden hoops, a chain watch, and a matching pair of heels. She adjusted her shirt and slung her office bag over her shoulder." Ava, I'll be late for school, and you'll be late for your event!" Tia said again, sipping her milk. Avyana quickly took the stairs two at a time, hurrying down to join her.Eric, wearing glasses and reading a newspaper, glanced up with a warm smile. His sweet fiancée lived

  • Sinful Obsession   48|Her Sinner

    Author pov:Avyana was paralyzed with pure terror as she witnessed another monster stepping onto the rooftop."Vows, huh? Planning to forcefully marry my past lover—how ridiculous you are, mentally disabled Jayden Black. You always lick what I spit," Tyler spat, a sinister smile playing on his lips, madness flickering in his eyes.Jayden chuckled, unfazed by Tyler's presence, as if he had expected his arrival."Welcome, brother. So, did you come to rescue Ava this time, or to congratulate us on our wedding?" Jayden taunted, holding Avyana tightly by her waist."Leave Avyana right now, Jayden! I don't want to shoot you," Tyler warned, his voice trembling with barely contained rage as he aimed his gun at Jayden.Christian, standing beside Jayden, pointed his gun back at Tyler, ready to protect his friend. But Jayden

  • Sinful Obsession   47| Dreadful Night

    Author pov:The sky looked like molten lava, a surreal blend of orange and red hues. It hadn't rained all day, yet the sky seemed to symbolize her worst nightmare. The blood-red expanse might have seemed beautiful to others, but to her, it was an ominous sign, foretelling the horror unfolding in her life.Bride!That single word shattered her entire world.How silly of her to think, even for a moment, that Jayden had changed. She recalled the times when he had saved her from Spencer, the moments when he had apologized for everything.A bitter, almost hysterical chuckle escaped her lips, catching Jayden off guard. He stared at her, dumbfounded, clearly not expecting her to laugh this hard."I'm not surprised, Jayden. Even the sky is blood red today. Beautiful, right? How can my life possibly get better?

  • Sinful Obsession   46| He Is Back

    Author povA tear rolled down her cheek as she heard the familiar tune again. It was strangely captivating-an expert violinist, no doubt, playing with incredible skill.She knew who was playing that tune. He was back, once again playing the violin. Her head pounded with pain, and she remembered what Eric had told her: He had been a patient for a long time, and his obsession with her had driven him to an irreversible mental state.She recalled the doctor's words about his condition being so severe that recovery was deemed impossible.Now, the haunting melody and the chilling presence made it clear-he was here, and her nightmare had returned.He might be in the mental asylum right now, and some of his memory getting erased . But doesn't matter how much we try to keep him, control him he won't listen. He can get very stubborn and behave like a child sometimes. He might can try to return and escape again and again. Specially for Avyana.Cuz his obsession has no bounds. As long as he is al

  • Sinful Obsession   Author Note

    Hey guys, how are you all. I hope you all are fine. So finally I finished my first book " sinful obsession" kindly look forward to it. I have worked quite harder on it's ending I tried my very best to finish S.O With the characters perfect reaction and punishment. Whoever was wrong I tried to punish as much I wanted to. And which characters suffered I tried my best to give each and every character justice. From 2020 July to 2024 July. Damn man, almost 4 years! The first chapters weren't that good cuz I was quite young. Cheez XDXD!I was only 16 when I started writing it. Now I am 20. Sinful obsession has gave me so many opportunities. I have given the most late updates!I thought alot while writing the ending, I know lots of you didn't expected sad ending, and alot of you wanted the male character to suffer. I had to do both at a same time. I believe it's the perfect ending for them. If you guys even need sequel let me know.I will try my best to write more regularly from now on

  • Sinful Obsession   45| Death Note

    Author pov:His eyes were locked on her sparkling, furious gaze, clearly reflecting her frustration with his twisted game.She looked different-beautiful, yet fierce. Tyler was struck by the realization that he had never seen this side of her before. He had always been drawn to her naive, somewhat silly demeanor, seeing her as a pretty, uncomplicated woman whom he could easily manipulate.But now, she radiated a strength and fierceness that made her seem like a woman who would be challenging to handle. This was no longer the easy target he had once thought her to be.He continued to stare at her with a manic intensity, captivated by the transformation he saw. Her eyes sparkled with a new intensity, her beautiful face taking on a striking, almost ethereal quality. Despite her baby-like features, there was a fierceness that was both unexpected and compelling.How could a woman with such a cute, angelic face exude so much power and menace? Her bangs partially hid her eyes, and her soft b

  • Sinful Obsession   44| New Her

    Author pov:6 months later "Careful, my love. Playing with fire is dangerous."He whispered, gazing intensely into her brown eyes.The girl looked cold. The man seemed hungry, needy, and desperate, as if he had been thirsting for his prey for years.Her eyes flew open as she sprang up from the bed, panting heavily while sweat beads trickled down her forehead. Another nightmare.She hurried to the kitchen and chugged down a glass of water, rubbing her chest as a tear rolled down her cheek.No, she couldn't be that pathetic person anymore. It had been six months.He's in a mental asylum. He can't be here, right? He's undergoing treatment. So why is she still so afraid? He was just a manipulative psycho.She had learned to confront these monsters and put them in their place. She reminded herself of that.But something about the dream was different this time. The wedding gown, Jayden's menacing presence-there was something about it that left her feeling numb. She tried to push the though

  • Sinful Obsession   43|Guilt?

    Author pov:3 weeks later She slowly, slowly opened her brown orbs, only to find herself surrounded by people. She was in a hospital; for the past month, she had been struggling to recover.Her head was aching badly, yet she was doing her best to cooperate with the painful situation.She gradually improved, better than before. Every day, Tyler came to visit her, even though she never responded to him. Her bruises and marks had healed; she was finally beginning to resemble a human again. Three days had passed since her recovery, and she was still resting in the hospital bed. Today was the day she would be discharged.Having escaped from those monstrous brothers, she was finally experiencing life again after a long time. Eric and her sister visited her daily until she fully recovered. She was finally able to breathe freely.With the door opening slowly, she caught sight of Christian His eyes were heavy with the weight of guilt, a sight she had never witnessed before. It took her aback.

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