Author's POVIt seems I misinterpreted the passage. Please give me another chance to edit the passage while staying true to the original story. Here is my revised attempt:Nathan, in all his glory, led the sexy, pretty girl he had just snatched away from the two unlucky fellows. He took her by the hand to another area of the dance floor, where he could have her all to himself. Nathan never liked to share.As they danced, he held her close, her soft chest pressing hard against his broad, hard chest. There was no space between their bodies as they moved in an intimate, sexual fashion. Nathan's hands slowly roamed from her upper body down to her lower parts, enjoying the softness and smoothness of her arms, tummy, and thighs.The feel of a pretty woman's body was something Nathan savored. He wanted to explore every inch of hers, to enjoy his time with her to the fullest. She meant nothing to him, and he felt nothing for her; he could easily kill and drain her blood in that very instant.
Pearl's POV"I am so sorry for yelling. I didn't know you were the one, Mr. Daniel," I apologized sincerely, my bright blue eyes locking onto his with a hint of embarrassment. My delicate facial features scrunched up in a contrite expression, and my long, curly brown hair bounced slightly as I nodded my head.Mr. Daniel's worried face softened, and he offered a gentle smile. "It's alright, I should be the one apologizing. I wasn't looking at where I was going. I ought to be more careful," he said, his eyes crinkling at the corners.I tilted my head slightly, curiosity getting the better of me. "Sorry, but why are you here? I honestly wasn't expecting to see you or any teacher here," I asked, my slender body shifting slightly as I spoke.Mr. Daniel's expression turned serious, his eyes clouding with concern. "I had to come to make sure everyone was safe, especially you. I had to make sure you were safe," he said, his voice low and urgent.My eyes widened in surprise, and I felt a flutt
Pearl's POVAs I walked alongside Mr. Daniel, the trees seemed to close in around us, casting long, ominous shadows on the ground. The air was heavy with the scent of damp earth and decaying leaves. We had returned to the clearing where Jack had attempted to ruin my life, and I couldn't help but feel a shiver run down my spine.As we approached, I saw Jack struggling to walk, his limp evident with each labored step. My initial instinct was to feel a pang of pity for him, despite the wicked intentions he had harbored just hours before. It was clear that he had suffered a severe injury, likely a fractured bone in his leg, courtesy of Eden's powerful throw against the tree.I watched in wonder, still trying to process the events that had transpired. How had Eden managed to summon such extraordinary strength? His anger had seemed to grant him superhuman abilities, and I couldn't help but feel a sense of awe at the memory.As Mr. Daniel hastened towards Jack, I felt a surge of fear. I thou
Author's POV The air was electric with passion as Nathan's lips devoured the lady's, their kiss a frenzied dance of tongues and teeth. Soft, sweet moans escaped her mouth, mingling with Nathan's own labored breathing as he squeezed her ass and fondled her chest. His hands roamed her body, tracing the curves of her slim tummy before returning to her chest, his touch igniting a fire within her.The lady's eyes were closed, her face tilted upward in ecstasy as Nathan's lips continued their assault on her senses. Her right leg was wrapped tightly around his waist, holding him close as her arms roamed his back, her fingers digging into his skin. The tree trunk behind her seemed to fade into the background, its rough bark a stark contrast to the smooth, perfect skin of Nathan's chest.As she broke away from the kiss, her eyes fluttered open, drinking in the sight of Nathan's half-naked form. His shirt lay discarded on the ground, revealing a broad, wide chest that seemed chiseled by the go
Author's POV Eden's piercing blue eyes narrowed, his refined nose twitching with annoyance, as he grasped Nathan's hand and pulled him away from Carolina. The sound of laughter and music from the party faded into the background as they stood in a relatively secluded spot, the only sound being the rustling of leaves beneath their feet.Nathan's emerald eyes sparkled with curiosity as he asked, "What's wrong, man?" His blond hair was perfectly messy, and his angular features seemed relaxed, but Eden's expression was a stark contrast.Eden's frown deepened, his sharp jawline set in disapproval. "What's wrong? I can't believe you're asking that question," he said, his voice low and even. Nathan's eyes widened slightly, a hint of realization dawning on him.Eden's eyes flashed with a hint of amber, his voice rising in indignation. "What was that about? Were you about to bite that girl? You wanted to suck her blood." Nathan let out a sigh, his shoulders sagging slightly as he nodded.Eden'
Author's POV Kyle's piercing sapphire eyes widened in stunned incredulity as he gazed at the woman standing before him. His chiseled features seemed frozen in shock, his sharp jawline slack with disbelief. He blinked rapidly, wondering if his eyes were playing a cruel trick on him. The woman's presence seemed like a cruel jest, a sorcerous illusion designed to torment him."Abigail?" he called out, his voice laced with doubt and uncertainty. The woman's response was like a gentle breeze on a summer's day, soothing and calming."My love," she replied, her voice husky and familiar, accompanied by a lovely smile that seemed to light up the surrounding area. Kyle's eyes drank in the sight of her, his mind reeling with the implications of her presence.Kyle's dark hair was mussed, his eyes wild with emotion as he struggled to comprehend the impossible. He thought he had lost her, witnessed her death with his own eyes, and yet, here she was, standing before him, alive and vibrant."Abigail
[50 years in the past] "Ouch...my legs," she cried out softly, her bright blue eyes welling up with tears.Kyle's expression turned frantic, his eyes wide with concern as he leapt off his bicycle and sprinted towards Abigail. He skidded to a stop beside her, his dark hair mussed, and gently lifted her into a sitting position. "Thank you," she whispered, her voice laced with pain.Kyle's eyes scanned Abigail's body, his gaze lingering on the bruises and cuts on her arms and legs. A faint line of blood trickled from a cut above her right eyebrow, and Kyle's face twisted in concern. He seemed to be reliving the anxiety of that moment, his eyes filled with a deep-seated worry for Abigail's well-being.."You are hurt?" he asked, his voice laced with a hint of distress.Abigail's bright blue eyes fluttered closed, her slender body wincing in discomfort. Kyle's gaze lingered on her face, his eyes burning with a desire to erase her pain. With a swift motion, he bit open his wrist, the sound
Author's POV Kyle's piercing sapphire eyes, filled with a deep longing, locked onto Abigail's as he spoke, his voice laced with a mix of emotions. "Where have you been all these years? Why didn't you come for me when you woke up? You have no idea how I have missed you. My life has never been the same ever since that day," he said, his words spilling out in a rush.As they sat facing each other, Abigail's bright blue eyes sparkled with unshed tears, her slender fingers intertwining with Kyle's as she began to explain. "I am sorry I didn't come sooner, but honestly, I couldn't. My transformation into a vampire wasn't an easy one," she said, her voice barely above a whisper.Kyle's gaze never wavered, his eyes drinking in every word as Abigail continued. "I was lost in the sea, and I had to die over and over again. Drooling myself inside the sea because I had to hide my skin away from the ray of the sun that burnt like fire," she said, her eyes clouding over with the memories.Abigail's
Mr. Daniel, their English teacher, appeared out of nowhere, his eyes blazing with a fierce, otherworldly energy. He raised his hand, and a blast of magical energy shot forth, striking Gracko with incredible force and sending him tumbling through the air.Pearl's eyes widened in shock as she stared at Mr. Daniel. She had no idea he was a witch, let alone a powerful one.Mr. Daniel's gaze flicked to the brothers, and for a moment, Pearl thought she saw a glimmer of disdain in his eyes. But then his expression softened, and he nodded. "Take them away to safety," he said to Eden.Eden didn't hesitate. He scooped up Pearl and Carolina in his arms and took off at superhuman speed, leaving the chaos behind.But Gracko was far from defeated. Enraged, he took off after Eden, determined to finish what he had started.Nathan, seeing his brother in danger, sprinted after them, his eyes fixed on Gracko's retreating back. "I've got your back, Eden!" he shouted.As the two groups disappeared into th
As the twin hunters emerged from the shadows, Eden's expression transformed in an instant. His eyes darkened, and his jaw clenched, as he swiftly positioned himself between Pearl and the hunters."What do we have here?" Eden growled, his voice low and menacing.Gracko sneered, his eyes flicking to Pearl. "Eden, and it seems he has a little snack with him."Dracko's smile was pure evil, sending a shiver down Pearl's spine.Eden's gaze never wavered from the hunters. "I'm sorry, Pearl, that I brought you here. I didn't mean for you to be harmed."Pearl's confusion was evident, but before she could ask any questions, Dracko's voice cut through the air."We're going to kill her, and then you'll lead us to your brothers."Pearl's eyes dilated in terror as she realized the hunters' intentions. Eden's reaction was instantaneous."Over my dead body will I allow that," he snarled, his fangs bursting forth from his gums.Pearl's gasp was audible, but to her surprise, she didn't feel fear. Inste
Pearl's POV As I stepped into the musty darkness of the old house, a shiver ran down my spine. We used to call it the Ghost House when we were kids, and the memories of our childhood fears came flooding back. Kaleb, however, seemed undeterred, his flashlight casting eerie shadows on the walls as he searched for the mysterious package sent by his uncle."Why would your uncle send a package here, of all places?" I asked, my voice barely above a whisper. The house seemed to swallow sound, making me feel like I was speaking into a void.Kaleb shrugged, his eyes scanning the dusty floorboards. "I have no idea. But I'm going to find out."As he continued his search, memories of our childhood adventures came flooding back. We used to dare each other to knock on the door, to see if the "ghosts" would answer. Now, as I looked around at the cobweb-covered chandeliers and the faded wallpaper, it all seemed kinda silly. There were no ghosts, just a creepy old house that seemed to have been left
Author's POV As the twin hunters, Gracko and Dracko, stood over Maxwell, their eyes blazing with an unnerving intensity, they asked again, "Where can we find the brothers?"Maxwell's eyes widened in incredulity. "You're still asking me that? After all these years? I don't know any brothers! I swear, I don't know what you're talking about!"Gracko sneered, his face twisted in a cruel smile. "Save it, Maxwell. We know you're hiding something. You're just not remembering yet."Maxwell's frustration boiled over. "I'm telling you, I don't know any brothers! You have to believe me! I'm not lying!"Dracko chuckled, a cold, mirthless sound. "We'll see about that. Gracko, why don't you help refresh Maxwell's memory?"Gracko's eyes lit up with sadistic glee as he began to inflict pain on Maxwell. Maxwell's screams echoed through the car pack, but Gracko just laughed, his eyes gleaming with excitement.Finally, unable to bear the pain any longer, Maxwell begged, "Please, stop! Just tell me what
Pearl's POVKaleb killed the engine of his car with the vehicle keys as we arrived at our destination.A large, old abandoned mansion or as it is popularly known.The ghost house...“What are we doing here?" I asked and Kaleb just smiled.“To get the package my uncle sent to me, remember?"He answered in a smooth manner then came down off the vehicle.I also came out of the vehicle, slamming the door shut in a civil manner.“Yeah, I know that but why will your uncle have a package delivered to an unoccupied and abandoned building?" I was really trying to figure that out.Kaleb laughed softly, “Guess you don't know my uncle that much. He lives for the crazy things but he always has a reason for doing anything he does."“Really?"“Yeah, come with me." Kaleb said then started walking towards the building and I walked to meet up with him...I can't actually believe I am here again. It's been so long since I came here, since when I and Kaleb were kids, that's probably 9 or 10 years ago I t
Author's POV[80 years in the past]“Ahhhhh!"The musician Angeline screamed out in total horror when she found her personal assistant, Augustine lying on the floor covered in blood.“My God, Augustine!.. somebody help!..help!..oh God!.."She was terrified and confused but yet she still managed to compose herself enough to examine him, to see if he was still alive.She wasn't picking any pulse and he had become cold.She covered her mouth tight with both her hands in shock when she realized what had happened. Her personal assistant, Augustine, is dead!Killed! And on close examination Angeline discovered that Augustine has a bite mark on his neck.“Who could have done this?.. What could have done this??" Angeline said then looked around.“I have to get out of here," she acknowledged then started running away but then from nowhere a male figure with red, blooded eyes appeared in front of her and grabbed hold of her.“Ahhhhh!" She screamed loudly.“Why are you in a hurry to leave, beaut
I sprinted out of the nightclub, the pulsating music and strobing lights fading into the distance as I hit the cool night air. My heart racing, I could feel the twin hunters, Dracko and Gracko, closing in. Those two monsters had been a thorn in my side for decades.As I ran, my mind flashed back to the first time I encountered the twins. I stood in the dimly lit warehouse, surveying my operation with a sense of pride. It was 1968, and I, Maxwell, had built a lucrative empire in the city. My boys, a mix of vampires and humans, scurried about, loading crates of drugs onto trucks. The smell of cigarette smoke and sweat hung in the air, and the sound of laughter and music drifted from the back rooms.I addressed my top lieutenants, a group of rough-looking vampires with scars and tattoos. "Alright, listen up. The shipment needs to be offloaded at the docks by midnight. I want it done quietly, no fuss. We can't afford to draw attention to ourselves."One of my lieutenants, a burly vampire
Author's POVPeterson thought of ordering his highly trained vampire guards to eliminate the the twin hunters for trespassing in his territory and business but he chose not to at the end but rather observed them from up were he was.He knew the vampire hunters so well. He has heard tales of how extremely powerful and ruthless they are but he doubt they know anything about him and how powerful and ruthless he is also or perhaps they know who exactly he is and are here to test their strength with him, he thought.Regardless Peterson wasn't bothered if the hunters are here to kill him, he has the chance to escape now but he was keen to find out what they want.Being one of the oldest vampires still alive Peterson has grown to become pretty strong and won't be an easy target for the hunters but his strength isn't his biggest strength. His wit is.There are few wiser than Peterson as he is very calculative and manipulative. He is already has the outcome of everything planned out and that's
“But don't go too far so you hear me when I call for you," she said.“I can never go far away from you my lady." He said then cat-walked in a dramatical fashion out of the changing room.Angeline smiled at his steps then started taking off her dress starting first from her jewelry.As she was taking off her earrings and necklace staring directly at her beautiful reflection on the mirror Angeline couldn't help but admire herself.She was smiling proudly at her beauty but then she flinched as great fear gripped her when she heard a strange voice speak.“You are really beautiful."“Who is there?" Angelina asked, turning around but she saw no one, just some hung up clothes and hangers.“Is there anyone there? Augustine, is that you?" She searched everywhere with her eyes and she couldn't find anyone.“I could have sworn I heard someone's voice.. maybe I imagined it. It could be…" she spoke to herself, trying to understand what just happened.She came to a conclusion the voice she heard wa