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51.A true case
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2022-01-11 08:11:40lying on the hospital bed, Lara moved uncomfortably, twisting her face like she was having a nightmare. She panted softly as she moved her hands and face uncomfortably.
Dave Lin was sitting besides her bed as he observed her. He was worried on seeing her expression. He was about getting but to call a doctor when Lara's eyes flipped open and she sat up.
Dave Lin stopped, slowly sitting next to her again. "You're finally home" He was confused and surprised. How did he recovers from the comma that quick. But he was glad at least.
Lara looked around confused for a while as she rubbed her head which was aching. "Where....am I?"
"In the hospital.." He said "Don't stress out yourself, I'll call the doctor" He said leaving the hospital room. Lara was as clueless as anything as she looked around wondering what had happened. She couldn't remember any thing.
Dave Lin later returned with the
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