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37. Half gone..
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2022-01-06 01:32:40With sunni already admitted to the hospital, Dave was out making the payment. He had already asked Sunni to contact her friend and that he had to leave for something urgent and sunni did so.
After making the payment, he waited a while just outside sunni's hospital room for someone to arrive. Looking at his watch, it was already 4:22pm, and he had a meeting to attend to but he was already late keeping Sunni company. This was not him at all, suddenly he had changed without him even knowing.
Not long, Hana came running through the hallway and met Dave Lin.
"Where's Sunni?" She asked on meeting Dave.
"She's in there. Then that's all, I'll be leaving first" As he left, Hana quickly entered the room.
Sunni was seated on the bed while she operated her phone She quickly looked up at who had walked in, happy to see Hana.
"You're here"
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