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last update Last Updated: 2024-10-29 19:42:56

Hello guys, chapter 65 was updated just for you thanks for making me reach 1.1k views, now let's make 1 million views! Crazy right? Am sure we can do it. I really appreciate everyone that created time to read my book, those that bought my coins to read my book, those that used free coins to read my book, those that dropped a review, those that invited their friends to read my book, those that rated my book, those that are following up my book, waiting for the next chapter and many more, I want to say a very big thank you! You guys are the best! 

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I am thinking of changing the title and the cover of my story so it will look more of horror-romace than pure horror. What do you think? What do you think can boost my views? Your contributions are appreciated.

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    "No more questions!" Helen yelled at her daughter. She was so pissed that she didn't know when she shouted but she had to calm herself because of Mr Wellspring's presence, she didn't want to give them a bad impression. "Now get yourself upstairs, go and sleep in your sister's room, I and your siblings have a place to go. We won't be late.""Yes mother." She muttered and walked upstairs, she glanced at her siblings one more time and waved at them."Don't forget to lock the door." Helen's voice went again and left the room. The ride was quiet, no one said a word except the sounds from the chirping of the birds. Mr Wellspring drove the car, his wife was beside him while Sarah, Ryan and Helen sat at the back. Ryan had a brave face while Sarah was silently praying that the ritual stuff should be over.Mr Wellspring drove on the lonely road till he got to an aluminum advanced signboard which had CEMETERY written on it then he turned right. Immediately he turned to the cem

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    Mr Wellspring could see the cemetery gate clearly now, he saw his wife, Ryan, Sarah and Helen calling him to leave the car. He shook his head thinking he was hallucinating but they were still there. He was alarmed, he thought they were another ghosts and they possessed the body of his wife, Sarah, Ryan and Helen. He didn't want to be deceived the second time. He shifted to the inside the car when his back touched the back of the second door, he opened it slowly and took a handful of sand in his hand without shifting his gaze from them. When he took it, he carefully closed the door still maintaining an eye contact with them, not allowing them to see the content in his hands. Before they could say Jack, he poured the sand on his wife and the others, waiting for them to disappear if they were ghosts but they didn't disappear. He heaved a sigh of relief and took his wife's hands to leave the car. "What happened to you? Why did you pour sand on all of us? What has come over you?"

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    Ryan kept quiet and watched the man for some seconds without blinking. He hoped the man didn't hear his conversation with Sarah, "He looks like he is part of the ghost's family, like the ghost brothers and sisters." "You can say that again, again and again." Sarah quietly smacked him."Stop it both of you!" Helen whispered sternly looking pissed, "What has come over you two? " Shut up Ryan or he will hear you and you too Sarah, shut up." Helen cautioned them when she was pissed by their meaningless discussion."Sorry mom." Ryan's face fell."Sorry for yourself. Don't you know that this is a crucial situation? Learn to be serious Ryan, don't joke about everything.""Shut up both of you, especially you with a messy hair Sarah,you talk too much. How dare you interrupt my thinking?" The man shouted, Sarah almost fainted, the last thing she wanted was the man getting angry at her, she prayed she wouldn't get into trouble with the wild man or else he would

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    Charles blamed himself, he wished he didn't pour out his anger like that and say what was on his mind but he couldn't hold it anymore, he couldn't hold back the words anymore and he felt very free after he said what was on his mind, it was as if a burden was lifted off his chest and it was like a huge relief. He then though about his father, fear crept into him as he remembered his father's threat, he doesn't to enter his father's trap. After several thoughts, he decided to avoid his father and stop arguing so he won't be kept in the sacred room. He was thinking so much that he didn't even know when he drifted to sleep slowly. Not too long after he slept, he had a nightmare. He saw himself being chased about by Lucifer but he ran for his life. He noticed there was a beautiful strange lady beside him. He noticed that who Lucifer Wanted was actually the strange lady but when he couldn't get her because Ryan hid her and told her to never come out of the room till dawn, Lucifer got furi

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    The argument got intense and intense, Charles does not want to agree to what his mother and his brother said no matter how they presented Lucifer. He was a kind of person that when his mind is fixed, his mind is fixed, nothing can change it."You can't say that is not right Ryan, Lucifer raised up the dead, he raised grandmother and brought her back to life so conditions he gives us, he deserves it. Imagine loosing the love of your life and someone raise her up from the dead, won't you worship the person?""I won't worship him because he asked for my soul to be sold to him. Yes. When your so-called Lucifer rose our grandmother up from the dead, he knew that grandfather was desperate to have his wife beside him, so he used that opportunity to ask for the most selfish thing in this world, and made him sell his soul to the devil..." He said and everywhere was quiet, "You don't want to talk again, have you seen how selfish your Lucifer is? Because he gave you money and h

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    Zack gave Charles a cold stare, "He is guilty of two crimes mom.""I will soon make it three, just wait and see." Charles assured them."Mum?" Larry pulled his mother's dress."Yes darling." She forced a smile at him."Who is Lucifer and why do we keep serving him and celebrating him every year?""That's a smart question my boy." Diana played with her son's hair."Don't you know the story?" Zack asked."No he can't know the story, he was still a kid when grandfather Ryan told us his adventure in the woods. Only you and Charles knows the story." Diana said and turned to smile at Zack and Charles, "So who wants to hear a bedtime story?""Me!" They chorused except Charles who folded his arms and blocked his ears with his headset."Okay, calm down kids, I am going to tell you a story of how our revered Master, Lucifer saved our late grandfather's life from perishing in the woods. Are you listening?""Yes mom." They chor

  • My Forbidden Lover   Chapter Eighty-three

    "Hail Satan!" Ryan shouted on top of his voice."Hail Satan! Hail Satan!!" They all chorused including Ryan and Sarah who were smiling happily."Hail Satan!" Ryan and Sarah shouted even louder."Hail Satan! Hail Satan!" They chorused and began to drink human blood to their satisfaction."You may leave. But remember to keep the five golden rules at the back of your mind. If you fail to do so, you shall be wasted with immediate effect, if you continue to serve me and please me, you will continue to enjoy the riches of this world. When you die, Ryan, remember, your soul shall return to me because you sold your soul to me. Have a good day, enjoy your life to tye fullest." Lucifer said and reminded him for the last time and opened a portal then Sarah and Ryan entered, they looked around the devil's chamber for the last time then they waved at Zaphon before a heavy whirlwind carried them to where the devil has planned for them.Many &nbs

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