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2024-10-29 19:42:56Alona just cried every night, after she knew about her blindness. She also often loses it's way and drives away anyone who approaches her. She also has no appetite and often just throws it everywhere.
Carlos is a witness to the hardship that the girl is going through. He could feel the weight it felt on her chest and the lack of self-confidence.Alona is a famous and good ballerina, but now that she can't see it anymore, it seems that she is gradually losing hope of achieving her dream of performing abroad.“Who's that? could you just come out. I don't need anyone in my room.” The girl said to him when she heard the turning of the door and the footsteps of Carlos.“It's me, Carlos.” Introducing him as he pointed to himself.“Go away, i don't have time to talk to you.”She covered herself with a blanket.The young man stopped walking for a momenRelated chapters
Manhater (English) Eleven : Carlos POV
“Do you believe in love at first sight?” often every time i mention that to other women they suddenly smile and shudder.That's my way, to attract and win their hearts. And not a single woman has ever rejected me, except for one.“She's here!” exactly as Mr. Desepeda turned my attention to her. At first, o doubted that the rumors about her were true.Indeed, she's gorgeous!The first word that immediately crossed my mind. As she walks closer to us, she seems to be getting even more beautiful in my eyes.From head to toe, everything was perfect to her.She's the ideal girl that i'm looking for.I whispered again in my mind as i watched her puffy eyes.“By the way, hija. He's the-” his father interrupted immediately when she suddenly turned around and walked away from us.Well, she doesn’t look like i was thinking. I think, i can fight her. I smile
Manhater (English) Twelve : Carlos POV
I almost stood up in shock when i realized that Alona had no pulse.“Alona! Alona, wake up!” Ivan's repeated called her, while shaking her other shoulder.I just stepped on and hardened like a rock.It seemed that i couldn't hear nothing around us and refused to focus my attention on her.I was an idiot and didn't know what to do.Is she dead?The question suddenly came to my mind.I could feel the trembling of my hands, after i touched her wrist, and i could not feel her heartbeat.I only realized when i heard the signal of the arrival of ambulances and rescuers.Furthermore, i turned to look at them, and i was about to approach them when Ivan suddenly passed by my side, while he was carrying Alona.I was stunned and followed him by gaze.I noticed the drop of one of her hands, as if it had completely lost her life.
Manhater (English) Thirteen : Carlos POV
“I can't give you a definite answer there, Mr. Carlos. But my instinct has never been wrong, and i have a hunch that someone did set them up, for this incident to happen. I think, if the truck hadn't run into the vehicle they are driving, will definitely still endanger their lives.” Detective Rex said to me, while i was looking at the car of the Desepeda couple.“If your instinct is right, what do you think will happen to them next, just in case?” I checked at once, i turned to him.“Well, they can still crash into other vehicles, or they can also crash into trees, poles and everywhere. My colleagues found out that someone cut their breaker, so even if they dodge that truck, the car will actually crash. Unless they both jump, since that's really the only way to avoid such a serious accident. But of course, we still can't guarantee their safety, even though they're in the middle of the highway.” He said this as we looked around us.
Manhater (English) Fourthteen : Carlos POV
One call-girl, that's what they call Shaina. I just found out from my best friend, Kit, that she is a paid woman who uses any man.And what's even more disturbing is that it's not just speculation or fiction about that issue about her. At first, i didn’t believe it.With her beautiful and gentle face, you can hardly dictate her true personality. Only then did i believe when Kit told me that he was one of her one-night stands.Now i understand why she is shunned and avoided by others. And just as Kit informed me that other men often approached her, I seemed to be gradually noticing that in her as well.Typically, every time i went to our school, a fancy car would suddenly honk and stop in front of our gate.Then i would just see her get out of that car. And it didn't just happen once, but many times and in different vehicles.Perhaps her potential clients serve her, after
Manhater (English) Fifthteen : Carlos POV
She approached me and over my collar. I was so shocked when our eyes met each other and her face was so close to mine, that i could almost feel her hot breath.I just stomped on her as dhe pulled me onto the bed. She pushed me hard, causing me to fall and just lie down on the bed.She silently leaned over me and had a sticky stare in her eyes.I was still staring at her, and i didn’t know what to do. I seemed to stagger like a rock and couldn't even move in my place.When she suddenly removed my belt and pulled down the zipper on my pants.“Stop! Please, stop.” I restrained her, but she just bit her lip and continued undressing me.I closed my eyes for a moment and bit my lower lip. I’ve been holding her back for a while now, but she’s really trying my patience.Until i woke up suddenly, and i knocked her horizontally on the bed. I was now on top of her, and the e
Manhater (English) Chapter 16
My lips touched her nape as i caressed her stomach, up to her chest. She struggled with my hands while half of her face was still glued to the wall.“Isn't this what you want too?”I spoke softly to her.After i kissed her neck, i forced her to face me and kissed her on the lips. I could feel the bitter tears dripping from her eyes, and she was still struggling with me as i held her two hands up.I didn't seem satisfied with what i had done, so i picked her up and sat her on the window sill.She holds too tight on my shoulder for fear i might throw her there.I winced on my lips when i noticed her worried face and pleading eyes.But i just ignored that and resumed my romance with her.Our lips pressed against each other again, but at those times her mouth was folded and she didn't seem to want to accept that lip of mine.Yet, i still continued what i was doing. I ran one ha
Manhater (English) Chapter 17 : Carlos POV
After all, nothing really happened between the two of us and almost something would have happened to us if i hadn't stopped myself right away.I just followed her again from behind her until we were both out of the motel.I stopped walking immediately when she stopped and took something from her shoulder bag. I was still looking at her with a trace of astonishment on my face and just scratching my neck.Then, she suddenly lit a cigarette from her mouth and turned to face me. My eyes widened in shock, but i also avoided looking at her immediately.I didn't expect that, despite her gentle face and angelic smile on her lips, she's also likes to smoke.I shook my head and watched her from head to toe, back as she turned her back on me.A few moments later, she turned to me again with a sharp look in her eyes and it looked like she wanted to say something to me, but i just stared at her.“What are yo
Manhater (English) Chapter 18
From that day on, Shaina and i seemed to get along.She still often avoids me and just leaves suddenly whenever we meet on the road.Yet, i still continued to approach and follow her. We soon became friends, and she was comfortable with me.Although someone was still interfering and judging the two of us, but we just ignored that, and we didn't pay much attention to it.We both know that it will pass, and they will also get tired of gossiping about Shaina and me.But as the hours and days that i was with her also seemed to deepen my view of her.I also admitted to her at first that i felt for her more than just being friends.She just nodded and no word responded to me. She didn't avoid me after i admitted that to her, but we became even closer to each other.Until i had the courage to confess to her again. At that point, i was serious and i asked hee if i could go wild with h
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