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Madrid ESTOY ENAMORADO DE TI
Alana— I don't know exactly, but a story reached my ears... It seems that he said something, and then he had a fight with one of the defenders, I don't know if you've heard about it, is his name Pedro?— I know who it is… — I listen carefully to his every word, but I still don't understand. — But what...— Alana, Raúl got this guy's spot on the team, and he didn't like it...— Yes, so what?— Wow, let me finish!— It's OK!— So, he overheard some conversation from Raúl in the dressing room, and at Diego's party, he was spreading what Raúl would have said about you. I've been talking to some guys I know on their team, and it looks like all of this really is Pedro's invention. But... — I'm getting impatient with this whole story, which seems to have no end, so far he hasn't told me what Raúl said about me.— Damn it, Danny! You talk, talk, but don't say what was said about me!— I think you better not know...— I demand that you tell me, now!— Look, Lana...— Tell me!— Ok
Last Updated : 2022-06-21Madrid PIEDRA DE LAS BRUJAS...
AlanaI couldn't look at Raúl, I couldn't believe what I'd heard. I felt myself shaking from head to toe, how could he say something like that, and leave me in this restlessness?— Are you cold?— Cold? I tried to manage a smile but I couldn't. — No, I'm not cold.How could I be cold when I feel somehow warm inside? It's strange, very strange!— I scared you, sorry!— I'm not scared. Why should I be? I...Embarrassment hangs in the air, and I feel that Raúl is as tense as I am.— So, shall we go for a walk? — he asks.— It's a good idea!He started, and we headed towards the special place he referred to. The weather was a little chilly despite the sun. Raúl follows a path I'm not familiar with, it doesn't seem like we're in Madrid anymore, after passing the main road, he entered a secondary road, which at first had asphalt, but now I can only see dirt. The car continued along this path until it reached a bridge, we passed over the river. All the while we said nothing, as the car climb
Last Updated : 2022-06-21Madrid DEJAME CUIDARTE
RaúlFor a moment, I was completely still at Alana's action. I felt the pounding of her heart against my chest. She noticed my reaction and walked away.— Sorry, Raul! Sorry!— Don't be sorry! — I say with difficulty. — But please continue!Then Alana wraps her arms around my shoulders, I grab her around the waist and pull her against me in a growing urge of passion. I notice her shivering slightly and I gently caress the back of her neck with my mouth, moving closer to her ear.— Never apologize when you want to kiss me, cariño!He turns my face to his face, and I notice his altered features. When our mouths meet, I'm the one who trembles, and I feel like I'm out of my mind. The fact is that since I kissed Alana, I feel like I've never kissed anyone before, a kiss with so much passion and desire. I feel my chest crushing her breasts, my legs burning between hers, a feeling of pleasure coursing through my body, which seems to heat up too much.She suddenly lets go, and it surprises me
Last Updated : 2022-06-21Madrid ¿VAMOS A LA CENA?
AlanaMy mouth he goes urgently to look for his, and I lose myself in sensations, while his hands caress my back. I need to stop, I can't go on, I'm confused, after all I'm the one who said about hanging out as friends. Friends don't kiss each other on the mouth, do they? I break the kiss, and place my hands on his chest. We face each other, and I confess that I'm once again lost in his gaze, I don't know what to do, I just turn my face away. He seems to understand, walks away, and before he says anything, I open the door and walk out.A few days passed after that meeting, and I ended up giving up on the picnic. Raúl called me several times, some times I answered , and others, I let the phone ring. Every time he called me, an invitation to dinner was present in his speech, and after much thought, I accepted.[...]On the way to the restaurant, a silence settled between us, and I confess once again that I feel a little lost, and disappointed in myself.When Raúl told me he was in love
Last Updated : 2022-06-21Madrid ¿VAMOS A LA CENA? Part II
Dinner was very nice, but it was too early for us to go home, so I thought it would be nice to complete the night in a nightclub. At first she didn't like it very much, but I insisted a little, saying that we could dance, but that I would respect her limits, and Alana ended up agreeing. Arrival is not pleasant. At the entrance, we find Pedro, he looks at me with a cynical smile, then he looks at Alana, as if he was analyzing her body, I want to break his face in half, but I control myself. Pedro is the kind of jealous person who only wants to destroy those who get in his way, I don't want to fall for him again, so I take her hand firmly and lead her to another area of the club.My teammates usually stay upstairs, in the VIP area, and that's where I take her. We climb the stairs and walk among the people who were there, until I see a vacant table. As soon as we're seated, she looks at me with a questioning look, I think she noticed Pedro's gaze on both of us.— Do you know that guy wh
Last Updated : 2022-06-21Madrid QUIERO BESARTE
AlanaI don't know where I was thinking when I agreed to go out with Raúl, honestly, what does he want? Humiliate me, show that you are desired by women? He didn't wait for me to leave, and he's already with another woman in a slightly embarrassing situation. I left without hearing a word from him, and went into the bathroom. Now, here I am, looking at myself in the mirror, and seeing my idiotic face, why did I trust him? Maybe Dani is right, he's talking things about me, making up stories about us, and this guy Pedro is just reproducing. You know what, I'm not going to stand here shaken by a man. I don't know how I feel about him.The dance floor is full of people dancing, smiling, jumping, kissing, and here I am like a fool. I need to have fun, let go, dance. I haven't done this in a while, and I think I'm rusty, but when I hear that enveloping Shakira beat , with her song “Loca” I forget about everything and I'm enveloped by the music. The good thing about listening to Shakira 's m
Last Updated : 2022-06-21Madrid DESCUBRIENDO ALGO
Alana— What?... What a question! You know , I have to go, and we'll talk later. — I get out of the car like a striker when he finds himself alone in front of the area, and runs desperately to score his goal, in my case I just wanted to get away from this abused defender as much as possible, because it wasn't enough to kiss me, touch me in such an ardent way , he still comes to ask me such an intimate question like that?Just as the attackers are intercepted by the defenders, who always get in the way of the big moment of the game , I am stopped by Raúl, who also gets out of the car as if he were running towards the area. He grabs me by the arm before I reach the door. I stare at Raúl with a mixture of fear, anger and desire. You might be thinking, “Wow, now you realize you're lusting after him, sweetheart?” Yeah, I think I feel, no... I feel a desire for him! I know, I'd be a fool if I didn't feel anything for this man, and looking at him in front of me, I feel this crazy urge to kis
Last Updated : 2022-06-29Madrid NADA VOLVERÁ A SER COMO ANTES
RaúlIn my car, the melody and lyrics of “Nothing will ever be the same again” take over the space, and my mind. It's a simple lyric that speaks of change. I drive and think about everything that has happened in the last few years, how many changes have taken place in my life, it seems like everything is always changing, and as the song says, nothing will ever be the same, nothing. I cross the city to get to the Training Center, I don't really know what to expect, and after the conversation with my mother, who surprisingly confessed to me knowing how I felt about Alana, I received a call from Tomás, who had received some calls from teammates, who were saying countless things, and I'm already getting nervous, I don't know what will happen to me.When I arrive at the entrance to the CT, many journalists approach me before accessing the parking lot. I can already imagine why. I can park, and thanks to Díos, none of them are allowed to enter that space. I put my feet in the locker room, c
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