SOMETHING NOT IMPORTANT

HEY GUYS. THIS IS SOMETHING I'M WORKING ON, I WAS WONDERING IF ANYONE COULD GIVE ME AN OPINION ON IT. THANKS.

It was raining, she could tell because she had asked what was going on more than a thousand times. She watched as the rain fell, its pitter-patter the one sound she had become familiar with for God knows how long she has been here. She heard the happy voices again, something she wished she could do. The local children happily danced under the rain, their naked bodies gleaming brown under the rain. They looked so happy and healthy. She had once wondered why she couldn't be like them again. After all she was once a free child. She could play and dance and sing just like anyone else. Until that very day she began to feel it. The terrifying headaches which disturbed her. She, a five years old should not remember this but she did because up till now she was still feeling the pain. As innocent as she was she hadn't thought it was a big deal. So she kept on playing. But she couldn't