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Goodbye and Thank you!

Author: Rever
last update Last Updated: 2024-10-29 19:42:56

To all my readers, I like to inform you all that this will be the end of " He was never mine."

I hope that I met your demands and gave you guys the closure you needed from the story.

Writing this novel was a lot for me because I had to put myself in various emotional states to capture the character's feelings that I have never experienced before, (It was tough."

But I'm glad you guys stuck with this novel because knowing you all were waiting on updates and stuff truly inspired me to keep pushing through and continue writing.

 

I appreciate all my readers for your patience with me, the coins, gems, and reviews.

You are all incredible people, and I'm glad I have readers like you.

Well, this is goodbye from Author Rever.

Stay safe out there and have a good life.

P.s. I know it needs a lot of proofreading, and I'm going to get that done, hopefully.

Thank you all and Byeee!!!

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Fisani Sibanda
The best book. I wish it can continue
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Evangeline Dulce Molon
thanks for your great effort for a very good ending.
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Dorie Otion
A moving story indeed....️...
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