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2024-10-29 19:42:56Karen Donna
I ring the doorbell continuously, waiting for Jane to show up. She doesn't instead it's her mum that opens the door. She is all full with smiles when she sees me.
"Is Jane in?" I ask after pleasantries and fake smiles.
She shakes her head. "No. She was home few minutes ago but left even before I could fix her dinner."
I sigh. I really wanted to punch her in the guts for misleading my brother. Maybe she doesn't deserve it, maybe I should've talked to Ralph instead. "Okay, tell her I came over." I say with a smile and leaves even before she can say a word.
I sigh, as I walk home. I kick little rocks on the floor as I walk. Did I overreact? Maybe I was angry because Jane haven't been the best friend I expected her to be these past weeks. She's been acting off. She never reply my text or pick up my calls anymore. She makes me feel like I don't have a best friend which I care about so much. Funny how she never wante
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