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2024-10-29 19:42:56Hello, readers.
I Hezz Dan is awfully sorry about something. Just found out that one chapter is outa place.
You see you need to read 'Transdimensional before the two 'door of destiny's (s). Those are chapter titles. Just a little mix up. Hope you get over it. And understand the story.
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