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Author: Ese Gwede
last update Last Updated: 2022-05-29 14:57:45

Hey guys. Thanks for supporting Being His Wife, we wouldn't be here without your likes and comments on each chapter. I appreciate each and everyone of you.

I love feedback from viewers, it helps me stay on track and put in my best and I want to know what you guys thought about Ariana and Damien's first sex scene. I know how much the lot of you have waited for it.😅

It's my first time writing such (It was really tasking by the way😅)and I'd really like to know how I did.

I'll be waiting for your response.

🥰 Thank you.

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Lili Rawaqa
Great story. Awesome hoe the plot unfolds. Interesting to know how Ariana will dtch the morning after pills
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Simeona San Buenaventura
The plot of the story is ggod.
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Nwakaego Osuagwu
beautiful story ...️...️...️......
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