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Detective Annie
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Annie's P.O.V I haven't entered Sam's room because there haven't been any reason to do so, but right now, there was. “So tell me". I sat, making my self comfortable on the bed. He took off his shirt and I watched his muscles flex as he did. Next was his jeans. “Could you atleast wait until I leave?". I questioned. He didn't reply, and just kept doing his thing. After he was left in only his briefs, he climbed the bed, making me adjust a little..”Okay!". He said and placed a pillow in between his legs. “So, I came back home to get something, and I had to follow the back because aunt would have scolded me for being so forgetful..As I entered through the back, I heard aunt's voice, and a woman discussing. Of course, I wouldn't have cared but I heard the woman say something about diaries, and I immediately stopped to listen. Then she said ‘I felt so insulted after reading through my child's diary..'. I immediately knew that you were in big trouble, so I rushed upstairs, to your
Last Updated : 2022-09-20Becoming Hotter New look
Annie's P.O.V The morning sun shone brightly. The light rays reflected into my room, blinding me momentarily..I reached for my phone, but when I couldn't feel it at the usual table stand, I sat up like someone waking up from a bad dream.. That's when my senses we're back and I recalled that I lost it, or rather, someone stole it when it fell yesterday..I couldn't be more sure about that..I flung the covers off my body and rushed into the bathroom like a soldier preparing for battle. But this was indeed a battle to me..I brushed my teeth and took my bath, then wore my clothes. When I looked at myself in the mirror, I knew I looked stupid. My hair was styled yet I wore clothes that were unmatching. I was like a princess who borrowed clothes from a pooper. I quickly remembered the shopping of yesterday. I had hidden those bags in the garage just in case, and I had totally forgotten about it. I rushed out of the room, and went to the garage. Sam was there. His present reminded
Last Updated : 2022-09-20Becoming Hotter Investigation
Annie's P.O.V “You mean you called like a hundred times? What for?". I asked as we walked down the hallways. “I wanted to remind you, but it seemed you remembered". She raised her brows at me. She was talking about our bucket lists. How wouldn't I remember? I am very ready to change the impression people have about me.“Of course I remembered. Tch, what do you take me for? Someone with unretentive memory?". I asked with a scowl..“I don't know..". She shrugged and I scowled once more. “So, this person you're looking for, do you know her?".”No, but I've seen her around the cheerleaders".”Then we should be going this way". She pointed to the right..“Really? Why?".”I saw them there yesterday". ”Oh".We got to our destination and I ran my eyes around looking for the suspect. I finally found her. She was in their midst, that's why it took me so long to pin her out. “So, how do we enter? The classy calm way, or the bitchy rude way?".“I don't know. I haven't thought about it?
Last Updated : 2022-09-20Becoming Hotter Discoveries
Annie's P.O.V I haven't had any reason to approach Bryan before, but today, I had one. It might not be valid, but it was something. He was sitting on the bench watching his friend ball..His hair was disheveled, and his lips were slightly apart.“Hey". I called out as I approached him.He titled his head, shifting his attention towards the owner of the voice, me. “Hey". He replied dryly.“Uhm… I'm sorry for bumping into you yesterday, it wasn't intentional". I figured that should be the proper way to start a conversation with him, right?“You already said sorry before". Yet again, so dryly. It was pissing me off, but instead, I put up a fake smile..“Yeah, I just felt I should say it again, cause back then, you had to pull me back to remind me, so this time, I was saying it on my own accord".“What do you want?". He asked.“Well, I fell yesterday, so I wondering if maybe you saw my phone or who took it or something… I don't know".“No". Came his curt response.“Oh". I didn't know
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Annie's P.O.V Williams was the third hottest guy I knew. First was obviously my cousin. The second should have been Williams, but it's the new guy, so now, Williams is the third. I knew him only few months ago, but I already liked him. His parents had divorced, and he chose to stay with his dad while his younger sister stayed with his mum. His dad married another woman, and he was neglected once his step mum became pregnant..I thought something might go on between us, since we once shared a kiss although he claimed he thought I was someone else. Then, I wasn't ready to accept the fact he was stole my first kiss thinking I was someone else, but I was never the one to raise my voice, so I kept it to myself.I would always try my best to discreetly make sure he doesn't date any girl, but when and how did he slip away from my hands?”The Sophie we just met?". Gabby asked, and Mali nodded.. “Whoah, since when?". “Turns out they've been dating for a year now". My eyes almost bulged
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Annie's P.O.V We found Kate's bag. We knew her bag of course because she was once our friend. Even if she were to change a bag, we would still know, as we know the kind of bags she would use. We looked around for Kate, and she was sitting besides Bryan.. that means, the bag lying next to hers was Bryan's. “Okay, you distract then while I quickly search their bags". She nodded and walked up to them I sneaked them just when she had gotten their attention. They were sitting in some sort of relaxing bench, with the bags right behind them. I started with Kate's. I checked it and I didn't see, or feel any phone. Then I moved to Bryan's. As I successfully opened his zip, someone grabbed my hands and I let out a small gaspm I trailed from the hand to the owner and it turned out to be Bryan “Come here". He grabbed me, and pulled me away. I heard Kate surprised tone, and I took a quick glance at her facial expression before we diverted..Once we were at a place where there was basicall
Last Updated : 2022-09-24Becoming Hotter Mr Vampire
Annie's P.O.V I believed that vampires were real, but not in this world. They were probably in a world where fairies and unicorns also existed, not until I met him.Mr Vampire was a graduate from med school, which of course, makes it really suspicious that he is a vampire who wanted to be closest to a place where he could easily get blood.But the truth is, I knew he wasn't a vampire, but I loved to take him as one. He has long hairs, and long well trimmed nails. He had nice teeth, beautiful blue eyes, and his lips were red and today, but what made him different and what of course made me decide to classify him as a vampire was his skin tone..He had pale skin, and sometimes when I touch him, he is cold, but Mali was like that too. “Hey fella". I crouch and hug him from behind, patting his hair. Almost immediately, he pulled me forwards, launching me into his open arms, and I was sitted on his laps like a little kid waiting for breast milk..“Hey kiddo". He in turn patted my hair
Last Updated : 2022-09-25Becoming Hotter Granting one wish
Annie's P.O.V Ever since I almost burnt the house, which happened a year ago, I haven't been allowed to cook,but here I am, about to prepare a meal for that crazy cousin is there, just so he could give me back my diary. I didn't know what to make for him, so I just decided to do what came to my mind. He had already eaten dinner so there was no need making some heavy food or something.I brought out the pan and decided to make pancakes. This time, I dropped my phone in my room and every other thing which might distract me..I also washed my face to make sure I don't feel sleepy. I needed to do this,so I can at least lift the ban. My mum doesn't know I'm in the kitchen right now about to make pancakes else I bet she wouldn't have agreed. Speaking of my mum, since I got back, the second time of course, I haven't seen her or heard from her. I even went to her room to check if she was there, but she wasn't. Where could she have gone?Oh, and I didn't mention the fact that her lapt
Last Updated : 2022-09-26
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Annie's P.O.V This was my first time seeing Cole up close. He was breathtaking, it was difficult to take one's eyes off him. But that's not the point. ”Why are you here?". I wasn't ready to play nice. This guy made me a wreck for many months.“Fiesty. That's not how I quite remembered you".”And that's not the answer to my question". I crossed my arms. “Why are you here?". I repeated..“I transferred to a college here". “Why?". I didn't even know when I asked him this.“Uhm…". He scratched his head. ”I just… I felt like I should". Does that mean it was because of me? No no! I shook my head as if brushed the thoughts off. ”Okay". I replied. Okay, this was a really awkward conversation..“So, how have you been?". “Uhm.. things has changed a lot". I replied honestly. Things except the feelings I had for him.”Oh. Look". He lifted his head. ”I'm really sorry for the way I just dissapeared without at least giving you a heads up. Sorry". Oh, at least he knows what he did. I was tryi
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Annie's P.O.V I blinked for the umpteenth time as I couldn't believe my eyes..Who am I seeing? “Cole?".”Annie?". We both called out our names at the same time. Oh well, I guess I wasn't hallucinating. I blinked again. This was real. It was him. He was about to say something when Jason's mum came out of the house, waving my lunch pack ”annie, come and have your lunch pack and head to school or you'll be late". I almost forgot I was going to school. With a little bit of hesitation, I rushed up to her, took the lunch pack and hurried along, sparing him a glance or two.. Cole was back. My mind was still processing it. This was really shocking and unbelievable. Cole had always been my number one, In everything. He had been a consellor, a soothing comfort when I lost my dad, and he was my best friend, and probably the only male friend I've ever gotten. Yes, we were that close, but I couldn't leave it that he was also the one to lease the most scar. I mean, apart from the scar
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Annie's P.O.V I've been out with Williams for about an hour, and it's no fun. Maybe it's because my mind wasn't settled or the fact that he has just been doing all he likes.. ugh!“let's ride the water slide". I pointed. I've been saying that for over thirty minds since I came .”No babe, let's go that way and take pictures". Okay, pictures wasn't bad, so I let him drag me along..After taking pictures, I said again ”Lets go to the water slide". ”No, let's go that way". Maybe he was scared of the water slide mm, so I suggested something else ”Okay. What about the cafe down there? Let's have ice cream". I suggested..”No, that way". He pointed, and held my hands, ready to pull me along, but I shrugged his hands off, and stood rooted to the spot..He paused and turned to me..”What's the matter?". He asked and I almost scoffed. He is seriously asking me what's the matter? Oh, I'll tell him.“The matter is You. I've been talking for thirty minutes now, bringing my own suggestion, bu
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Annie's P.O.V The weekend passed by really slowly. At least I had seen my mum, and she looked so stressed. I had only seen her once throughout the weekend, as she was in her room the entire time. It was Monday now. I was off to school, and this time, I didn't stay long at mum2's house, as I only grabbed a lunch pack, kissed her goodbye and hurried off. She was filling that void that my mum is leaving since she started working. On getting to school, I found Bryan seated on his special bench, with his friends, and they were talking and laughing. I walked up to them with confidence. Maybe, the confidence was as a result of Bryan telling me that he likes me, or was it something else? Who knows?“Hey". I said to his friends, then fixed my eyes on him. ”Bry, can we talk?". I asked. The look he gave me was quite unsettling, yet I remained there, waiting for his response. His friends were looking at him. I know that look. They were probably wondering what a girl like me wo
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Annie's P.O.V “And what if I do?". He asked to my uttermost disbelief. “Huh? Bry, stop this". I pushed him away, but he wouldn't budge and instead pressed his lower body firmly against mine.. ”Are you..". A soft kiss on my cheeks.”i asked you a question". He said.”Huh?". Were we even speaking?”I said, what if I do?". ”I.. don't know". I pushed forward in an attempt to escape this sweet torture, but ended up scrubbing my knee against his groin and he growled..Well, at least that created a gap between us, and I ran away at the slightest opportunity.What a tease! Heading back home, I went to see vamp's mum, a.k.a, mother 2. It had become a daily habit now, and I don't hate it, neither am I willing to stop.Three rings and the door flung open.”Are you busy?". I asked as I followed her swiftly in ”I'm clearing the house. A lot of things that I'm not using are here, and it's eating up the space". She replied ”Okay, I'll help". I flung my bags off my shoulders and rolled up
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Annie's P.O.V I didn't even know I was crying, and funny enough, I didn't even know why. Maybe it's cause all these time I've been depressed thinking I wronged Laura so much that she began to hate me. I had always tried to justify their actions. There was no smoke without fire right? That's what I always thought. But turns out, I was wrong. I sighed, as I bumped into someone. What's with me and bumping into someone. I looked up, ready to mouth an apology. Bryan stood in front with a smirk on his face. “Sorry?". He smirked. ”Isn't that what you're about to say?".”What else?". I mumbled.“Do you like me? Cause it seems..".”Do you like me?". J raise my face up to stare at him, and he seemed to have froze. “Cause it seems you do". I said, and walked away, leaving him there. I found Gabby and Malison, and the new guy, Louis. “Oh hey". Louis saw me first and he waved with a bright smile.“Hi". I took off my bad and sat down..“How are you?". Malison asked ”Did you cry?". Gabby
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Annie's P.O.V I was all dressed and ready for school. I haven't even told Malison and Gabby what happened last night. Was there any need to tell then though? I shook off the thought of not telling them. Wasn't this kinda part of the reason why I don't have Laura and Kate as friends anymore? Sam was downstairs. Mum was nowhere to be seen. ”Where is my mum?". I asked, not looking at him “She's gone to work already". I replied. I checked the time. It was way early. What's up with her? I don't know, but it wasn't really making me so excited. I wasn't used to not seeing her in the morning, or have someone nag at me for not doing my chores properly. Unm, I should be happy, for her, and for my self. Sam stood up as I entered the kitchen and I gulped. What's it this time? Without waiting to hear anything from him, I grabbed my lunch pack and dashed out. “Annie". He called out, and I paused, but didn't turn back. “Let me drop you off at school". He offered. ”Uhm, no thanks .I
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Annie's P.O.V I've always liked Williams since I saw him, but he never looked to my direction, or that's what I thought. The fact that he kissed me, and then told me that he mistook me for someone else, was so heart breaking that I began to avoid him..But now, he was right on top of me, and he fucking just asked me out. This was incredibly shofoing. “I…Can't date you". I replied. You might say, hey Annie, you're a dumbass, or you just missed a great opportunity or whatever, but hear me out first. He fucking had a girlfriend, whom is now my friend. Laura likes him, and she just told me the reason why she decided to end our friendship. Everyone would probably think I'm a bad person if I agree to date him now. I mean, he just broke up with his girlfriend, and boom, we start dating. Oh nope! I can't do that.He had paused on his movements, but he didn't retract his hands. He stared at me intently for a while. ”Think about it Annie". He drew an invisible circle on my clit. “I
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Annie's P.O.V Was it my inattentiveness that didn't let me notice that Laura had always liked Williams? But that shouldn't be the point now right? Cause Williams was already dating sophie. Whatever! Whether it was my inattentiveness or not, I sure did listen this time and I'm pretty sure two different voice asked me not to go, and those two voices, I recognize.One of a girl, Elsie, and the one of a boy, Bryan. I turned towards where his voice sounded from.”Uh… this is like your first party, and you.. uh wanna go early?". Oh, so that's why he said no. How considerate. Just so you know, I'm being sarcastic. Hmph..I turned backed to Elsie who seemed to be chuckling now. “Let's go inside". From the corner of my eyes, I saw Kate. She didn't go home with her friend. How lovely… “You made it!". Gabby and Malison echoed and I nodded my head.. I wasn't even im the mood to speak to anyone. My mood had already been spoilt by Laura and her foul talks. Although I liked Williams, I ne
