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At First Glance
At First Glance
Author: nothando_dlamini

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last update Last Updated: 2021-04-27 18:15:16

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At First Glance © 2021 by Nothando Dlamini

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This is a  total work of fiction. Names, characters, places, locations and incidents are purely fictional and bear no relationship to real life individuals, living or dead or to any actual places, business establishments, locations, events or incidents. Any resemblance is entirely coincidental.

Truth to be told I wrote this books while I was doing my Form 4 or 11th grade and I've alwats been so scared to let anyone read it except for a friend who only read one chapter of it.  So a such a long time after completing it and writung other books after if I thought of typing because it was in an exercise book and U hope you'll like it .

Even though I think It did have some lacking here and there I edited some of the first chapters from the original that I had  and I hope it will do.  So happy reading.  I'll accept corrections anywhere from anyone one and hearung from you wiuld make me the happiest girl alive. I love my babies so much and any haters will be blocked immediately.  English-language isn't my first language and I work really hard into getting them like this and anyone to take that for granted will be sent out.

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  • At First Glance    Shall we dance

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  • At First Glance    Date night

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  • At First Glance    Worried

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  • At First Glance    Gone are those days

    "I'll pick my poison and it's you. Nothing could (ever)kill me like you do ".●●Today I didn't want so sjng myself in for somethierd wheeling so I decided to call Alex and he wasn't picking up his phone . Maybe he was buay but he'd recently got a deal hed been working on for two moths now and it would take his career to the next level and it nedded to be celebrated."Why wouldn't he be available on this day of the week ", Eliz said while texting Frank (Her Boyfriend) on the phone. "Maybe he's busy", I said. "Stop makinh excuses for him . You're alao a part of his life and he should have time for you. Is this because of the deal ?".

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  • At First Glance    The shock of my life

    "Drunken words are sober thoughts", Unknown. I just stood there frozen like a statue and the only thung that made then relaise that there was a third person in the room was when my hands got slipery and my phone fell.I didn't pick it up but continued standing there like a kindergarten child who had just wet her pants. I did not say anything but there was a lump in my throat and the tears that had gathered in my eyes found their way down my cheeks.The lady brought a blanket up her chest while Alex wrapped a towel he'd carelessly tossed on the night stand. I guess they were in a hurry. He took big steps towards me while his gaze was fixed with mine. His hair a little bit moist like he'd just showered.The moment he stood behind me the strong smell of whiskey hit my nose . Intoxicated. He's intoxicated. How can he be doing something like this while he's

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  • At First Glance    Empty

    Two hours passed by and I was still standing there. Others horned but still passed. And then others never even turned to look at me."Alex can..", but then it sank in. Not anymore.My battery life was close from being dead and non of the people I tried calling picked up. I had to call someone as twilight was gathering in the shadows.Fortunately enough my long lost friend noticed me in the darkness as I was hiking. The car was locked and just me standing here. I could feel the weight of what happend back then and what happened right now.A car stopped. Well I have to say I was shocked that it didFortunately enough my long lost friend noticed me while in the darkness as I was hiking. I couldn't notice him until I got close to tue car as I stood a little bit further from where I stood.When the car stopped I went there and he opened the passengers window."W

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  • At First Glance    Can't live without you

    The sunlight seeped through the thin curtains of my bedroom. My whole body was aching and I swear the throbing headache could almost crack my skull open.Another day another phase of what ever pain I left.Nothing was well with me today. I felt so worked up and exhausted. You could swear that someone was beating upy whole body the previous night. I felt a sharp pain below my bust cutting through the middle of my chest.I had no idea of what it was but it was killing me. If possible I could have just removed it and sent it as far away a possible but irvwa shere to stay.My skin was pale , the palms of my hands had no colour What is wrong with me ?I couldn't raise a single part of my body. It screamed pain in all sorts of languages and accents.I tried lying by the side of my body to grab my phone on the side of the bed . The pain still unbearable in each an

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  • At First Glance    Blood was never thicker ....

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    My cheek stung in pain as a ping sound like some one had just hit metal against another in my ear echoed.Tears clouded my vision and I blinked them in . I didn't want to give him the satisfaction to seing me cry."Don't try to pull that litte act on my next time or else you'll pay dearly for it. Are we clear?"Silence "I asked if were clear or not?" He roared making goose bumps on my skin."Yes," I half whispered as my voice trembled."Good," he tightened his jaw. "Blind fold her," he ordered."No please don't." One man that had a scar cutting through his eyebrow. He took the black blind fold from the back of his pocket and did as told."Sam what have I ever done to you.""What have you done? Baby girl you've done a lot if things and one of them is choosing him over me , you'r

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